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since: 05-01-08, id: 610040, Profile edited: 11-16-08
country: United Kingdom
Author has written 20 stories for Historical, Life, General, Young Adult, Spiritual, Humor, General, and Family.

Hi. My name is Amy. I'm sixteen years old and I love reading and writing... obviously, haha.

I've only just got into writing poetry, so I hope it's okay.

I would really appreciate criticism so that I can improve my writing ability. And no, I'm not just saying that, I really would.

Thanks for taking the time to read my profile :)




1. Belief reviews
How difficult is it to believe in something that you don't think exists? Perhaps it's better not to believe in anything at all.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-17-08 - Published: 11-17-08
2. A New Life in a Perfect World reviews
A philosophical poem about our world compared to an idealistically 'perfect' one.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-15-08 - Published: 11-15-08
3. Estranged reviews
A brief summary of a girl's change from a happy relationship with her family, to her depression and early death. No idea where the idea for this one came from.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 480 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-15-08 - Published: 11-15-08
4. ANGER reviews
A poem about anger... with wierd formatting. Because I was bored.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-12-08 - Published: 11-12-08
5. Appearances versus Reality reviews
What lies beneath the mask that everyone sees everyday? Quite sad.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-1-08 - Published: 11-1-08
6. Scratch reviews
A poem about the process of self-harm. This one is very personal for me, I wasn't sure if I should upload it or not. But I did, so here we are. Warnings: self-harm and suicide.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-17-08 - Published: 10-17-08
7. Crowd Control reviews
How quickly perspectives can change. This is a short description of a shopping trip from a girl's point of view, someone who has some sort of fear of crowds.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 705 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-13-08 - Published: 10-13-08
8. CHOCOLATE reviews
A poem about chocolate and how lovely it is. Harry, hands off my minstrels.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-12-08 - Published: 10-12-08
9. I Will Be Pure reviews
A poem about anorexia, from the opinion that it's a way to achieve purity.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-8-08 - Published: 10-8-08
10. Insomnia reviews
A poem about insomnia. No, I don't normally dream of geese.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-17-08 - Published: 9-17-08
11. in·dif·fer·ence: n Lack of interest or concern reviews
A description of feeling apathetic... this was really random, it just popped into my head. As always, it contains bits of personal truth, and bits of pure fiction.
Complete - Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-16-08 - Published: 9-16-08
12. OCD narrative reviews
A narrative about a girl who has OCD - Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. It was very interesting to write.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,068 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-10-08 - Published: 9-10-08
13. Giving Up reviews
A poem about domestic abuse, and the depression it can cause. Nothing graphic.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-27-08 - Published: 8-27-08
14. Masks reviews
A poem about masks, and how many different forms of them there are.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-18-08 - Published: 8-18-08
15. Mirrors reviews
A poem about a girl who struggles with her weight, looks, family, school life... A lot of angst in this one. It shows how self-destructive people can be.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-16-08 - Published: 8-16-08
16. Dinner Time reviews
A description of a girl's typical dinner time problems, and her subsequent denial. Very angsty. Warnings: description of an eating disorder - bulimia.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,253 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-17-08 - Published: 7-17-08
17. Escape reviews
The thoughts of a girl during a horrible experience. Mentions of child abuse, child molestation. Death, if you see it that way.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-08 - Published: 7-17-08
18. What is the point? reviews
What is the point of life when we all die anyway? Depressing themes. Mentions of suicide.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-16-08 - Published: 7-16-08
19. Depression reviews
A poem about depression. Hints of incest, child abuse, neglect, suicidal thoughts.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-16-08 - Published: 7-16-08
20. A Day at the Seaside reviews
The last man on Earth and his dog. 'The Cold War that turned out to be not so Cold after all.' A short story.
Complete - Historical - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 816 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 7-12-08
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