PoetryQueen
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since: 06-24-08, id: 618403, Profile Updated: 06-03-12
Author has written 70 stories for Religion, Nature, Essay, Life, Fable, Action, General, Spiritual, Humor, Haiku, Romance, Love, School, Kids, Fantasy, General, War, Mystery, and Friendship.

Hi! I'm PoetryQueen. I am 18 years old. I love to ride horses. Most of my poetry is spiritual, but I do have many other kinds of poetry and a short stories.

I haven't been on here in over a year! I decided to start writing again!

Many of my old writings may have errors, anything that was published before 2012 I will probably not change. They are old enough I do not feel like looking through all of my files to find them to fix any mistakes. Feel free to offer corrections any mistakes you find on my new writings, I will fix those.

I am a firm believer in Christ and nothing is going to change that. God Bless, and please enjoy!

I changed my name from RodeoGirl to PoetryQueen.

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Author: James Patterson

Book: Half the Sky

Poet: Robert Louis Stevenson

Movie: Little Miss Sunshine

One last thing before I go, has anyone ever heard of world vision? If you want to really make a difference in a child's life in another country, look into child sponsorship. www.worldvision.org They are a reputable charity. I really recommend it. Its 35 a month, your donation does not go directly to your child, it helps their community. Which might sound bad at first, but who knows if it went to the family if the child would actually see a penny? World Vision gives the community education, healthcare, clean water, and food. Read some of the stories if you like. Wonderful organization!

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1. Rapunzel: Retold in a Feminist Way reviews
I rewrote Rapunzel making her a strong female character. Reviews will be returned.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,018 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-3-12 - Complete
2. Winter Night reviews
A short poem about snow. It needs improvement, all reviews returned
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-21-11 - Complete
3. Angels reviews
A suicidal teen meets a boy who saves and changes her life. Written for my creative writing class, reviews will be returned
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,640 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-16-11 - Complete
4. Always in My Heart reviews
To my dog Jed. I am not looking for constructive critism on my writing style in this piece. I just wrote this out of love.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - French - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-11-10 - Complete
5. A Child's Prayer reviews
Another Children's poem. It's a prayer a child would say.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-15-10 - Complete
6. Monsters reviews
A children's poem about the monsters. Told from the viewpoint of a child.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 6-15-10 - Complete
7. Twister reviews
A remake of my old poem Tornado. I deleted Tornado, it wasn't very good. I wrote this for English class. Please Review!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-14-10 - Complete
8. Bookworm reviews
About a neighbor who only likes to read. I modeled this poem after Robert Louis Stevenson's poem, "The Gardner."
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-13-10 - Complete
9. Man in the Shadows reviews
Eleven year old Ana finds a body in the woods. Never completely recovering from this horriffic event 16 years later she begins having nightmares about that day. Except in these dreams she sees something, something that could lead to the killer...
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 408 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-26-10
10. Brutus Sonnet reviews
I wrote this for English class. I had to write a sonnet about one of the characters in Shakespear's play, "Caesar." I chose to write about the tragic hero Brutus.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-23-10 - Complete
11. Blessed Be reviews
This is a short poem about God who loves us and will always care for us. So we shall eternally praise his name.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-24-09 - Complete
12. Faith reviews
This is a short essay about faith in general. Sorry if it's boring, I'm new at writing essays.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-11-09 - Complete
13. I'm Not Bluffing reviews
Remake The divorce papers were not final. Jack, the love of Claire's life promised that if she ever left him, he would kill her. Two years had gone by and Jack had yet to find her. Claire felt safe until that stormy night, when Jack stood in her house.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-9-09 - Complete
14. My Savior reviews
A poem about who God is to me.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-2-09 - Complete
15. Eternal Love reviews
Never fear when God is near!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2-25-09 - Complete
16. Jealousy Monster reviews
I changed my mind again, and made a new poem for my English project since my teacher changed the due date. I like this one A LOT better. I based it off another one of my poems.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-2-09 - Complete
17. Gracie reviews
A story of a boy and his pet racoon. I got the idea from stories my dad told me about a pet racoon he once had. The story takes place in a small town a long time ago. I don't have a year set, so let's just say before there was electricity. Please Review!
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,722 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-2-09 - Complete
18. Roller Coaster reviews
This is my completed poem for English class. I deleted my orignal copy.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-29-09 - Complete
19. Miracles reviews
A short poem about the miracles Jesus has performed. At the end I give an add on lesson I guess you could say.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-24-09 - Complete
20. Twists and Turns reviews
Inspired by watching the news.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-22-09 - Complete
21. A Kiss reviews
A love/romance haiku. Very different from most of my writings.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-20-09 - Complete
22. Spread The Word reviews
A spiritual Haiku about writing and spreading the word of Jesus.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-14-09 - Complete
23. Fallen Away reviews
Jesus changes lives and he can change yours if you just let him in.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-13-09
24. Love From Above reviews
Another 4 line piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-12-09 - Complete
25. By My Side » reviews
This is about a team who stands for God and goes through many adventures for him.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 624 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-10-09 - Published: 1-7-09
26. Prodical Son reviews
Do you know the story of the Prodical Son? If you do, it is one of my favorite stories. This poem is about his thoughts when he decides to come home. I am not really sure about this piece, so please review!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-9-09 - Complete
27. Remember reviews
A short, 4 line poem about remembering. I explain at the end. Happy New Year and God Bless!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-2-09 - Complete
28. Christmas Time reviews
A short poem about what Christmas is really about.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-22-08 - Complete
29. In God's Image reviews
I'm not quite sure about the title.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-2-08 - Complete
30. Thanksgiving Prayer reviews
Happy Thanksgivng! This year my job is to say the prayer and this is what I came up with. I would really love a review before I say the prayer, but anytime later is fine too. God Bless!
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-27-08
31. Liar reviews
A problem many people have.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-15-08 - Complete
32. Salvation reviews
This is a very short, 4 line poem. It is kind of thanking Jesus I guess you could say.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-28-08 - Complete
33. My Dream reviews
This was an amazing dream I recently had. It is very deep.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 834 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-16-08 - Complete
34. Weak Stem reviews
I wrote this a while ago. I don't know if I like the flow too much. It compares a flower with a weak stem to how we look at others. I'm open to suggestions!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-3-08 - Complete
35. Break Free reviews
Just about the truth, this is kind of spiritual.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-29-08 - Complete
36. With Joy Comes Pain reviews
A short piece, but very true.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-25-08 - Complete
37. Hidden Fantasy reviews
A little poem I thought up. Very different from most of my writings. I don't think it is very good, but I worked hard on it so please read and review! I love constructive critisism!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-23-08 - Complete
38. Wisp of Wind » reviews
This is my first time telling a story in the form of poetry, so bear with me. It will be about 4 parts. This actually happened to me less than a week ago.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-18-08 - Published: 9-17-08 - Complete
39. Paper reviews
Extremely random! You have been warned...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-5-08 - Complete
40. Sleep reviews
A result of when I am tired. I explain in the authors note.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-4-08 - Complete
41. Champion Dreams reviews
This is dedicated to my horse. She is only 4 years old.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-4-08 - Complete
42. Slap in the Face reviews
A one-shot.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 773 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-2-08 - Complete
43. Freshman reviews
Not my best writing by far, but a little story about my first day of school.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-26-08 - Complete
44. All Because of Me reviews
This could also be in Religion, but I put it in Love. This shows Jesus's true love for all of us. Please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-21-08 - Complete
45. The King reviews
A true story told in the form of a poem.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-20-08 - Complete
46. Star Gazing reviews
This is a one shot romance story. This is my first romance story ever so please review!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-19-08 - Complete
47. Flower reviews
A very short, four line poem. It is short, but very true. Please review and God Bless!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-15-08 - Complete
48. Writer's Block reviews
I wrote this a while ago when I caught the writer's block virus. I just found it today, and changed the last stanza to make it sound better. Please review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-14-08 - Complete
49. Right and Wrong reviews
I'm a little unsure of this piece. It just came to me without planning. Please review! I really want to know what you think. I might just delete this piece. I know this poem might not be true to everyone.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-14-08 - Complete
50. Rachel Joy reviews
Dedicated to a person who changed thousands of lives. Please read authors note and if you want; please review!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-13-08 - Complete
51. Erie reviews
I recently took a trip to Erie and I wrote this very short poem during a storm. Please read and review! I'm a little unsure of the last line.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-12-08 - Complete
52. The Night reviews
A nature haiku about the night.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-7-08 - Complete
53. Tree Carvings reviews
I had a wonderful and memorable experience with my dad that inspired me to write this. Please review!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-4-08 - Complete
54. Raindrops reviews
Just a little story told in a poem.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-4-08 - Complete
55. Jesus reviews
This is my first attempt at a haiku. I didn't like haikus, but after reading so many of them; they have grew on me. So, please review! I'm open for ideas.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-4-08 - Complete
56. My Faith reviews
I wrote this a while ago when I was going through a hard time in my faith. Please review!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-4-08 - Complete
57. Eatin' an Artichoke reviews
This is really a random poem. It just popped into my head.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-1-08 - Complete
58. Jealousy reviews
Just a poem I wrote talking about the problem of jealousy.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-30-08 - Complete
59. Rain reviews
This is based off a personal experience. Please read and review!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-30-08 - Complete
60. Video Games reviews
This is slightly humorous. It's about playing on a video game. Please Review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-28-08 - Complete
61. Tears reviews
The title describes it all. This is short story, but a sad one. Please review.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-25-08 - Complete
62. Dear Readers, reviews
This is a short, yet VERY true poem. God Bless!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 7-25-08 - Complete
63. The Creature reviews
This is a short action packed story! Please read and review! God Bless!
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 392 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-25-08 - Complete
64. The Mother Cat reviews
I tried to include some morals into this short story, but I don't think that it worked out too well. Please review! It is about a greedy mother cat.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 693 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-16-08 - Complete
65. Just Me reviews
This is just one of my views on life. Please read the authors note at the end, because I explain what my poem means. Please Review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7-9-08 - Complete
66. Open Arms reviews
A remake also, this is a short 4 line piece about what God does for all of us.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-8-08 - Complete
67. Who Am I? reviews
My mom wrote this for a contest. Tell me what you think! This is where I got my inspiration to write.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-8-08 - Complete
68. The Passion reviews
In 6th grade I had to write a letter to my teachers telling them what I like to do. This is what I wrote with just some minor editing. I thought it was pretty good. Please review! I want to know what you think about it.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-8-08 - Complete
69. Beauty reviews
A very short poem describing the beauty of nature. God Bless!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-27-08 - Complete
70. I Need You reviews
This is somewhat of a desperate poem calling out to Christ. I have redone this piece and replaced it with the old one.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-27-08 - Complete