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1. Playing MakeBelieve reviewsThree kids, one game of make-believe, but three completely different imaginations. Story for an English assignment, not due until next year so any criticism would be much appreciated. Left as in-progress because edits will be added.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 888 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-15-102. The Harp reviewsEverything is perfect as I freely play my instrument, controlling the land about me. Nothing can be wrong. Until someone else takes control. :::FOR EXTENSION ENGLISH EXAM. IF YOU NEED TO LET OFF SOME STEAM, PLEASE REVIEW THIS HARSHLY. WOULD LOVE THE CC:Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 817 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-9-10 - Complete3. Thunder and Lightning reviews/Oneshot for school, 2nd person narration/ You are trapped in a taxidermist's workroom, a storm outside helping your worst fears come true.Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 886 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-11-10 - Complete4. The Demon on my Chest reviewsA short story for extension English, had to have Gothic conventions. About a woman, a nightmare, and insanity. ConCrit much appreciated, any advice/errors would be extremely useful.Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 997 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-20-10 - Complete5. Dream of HarpThe waves, breaking in time to my music. It was magical.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 460 - Published: 11-8-096. Happily Ever After? reviewsThe murders pile up, and the authorities are lost as to who is the killer. A one-shot for RG's monthly WCC.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,831 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-6-09 - Complete7. Love of Money reviewsOne shot for the review games monthly writing challenge competition, with a prompt of "I'm dying of thirst in the middle of the ocean."Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 413 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-09 - Complete8. Breaking the Barrier » reviewsSpirits inhabit all living things. Humanity is the one race that can't hear theirs. One spirit is presented an opportunity to change this. But is it the right thing to do? Why are they silent to begin with? -on hiatus-Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 9,462 - Reviews: 38 - Updated: 4-23-09 - Published: 8-4-089. Creation Deflation reviewsWhat do you get when you ask a cynic to read the Bibles' creation story? Something like this.Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,930 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-2-09 - Complete
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