| AspiringWriter05 |
Author has written 24 stories for General, and Love. Hi, guess I should write a little about myself but I don't know I like to be a little anonymous. Anyways a while back I use to write poems..legit it's been three years if you look at the date for which I posted them and to think some are even older (like I wrote them in '06) so if you stumble upon reading one remember I wrote those when I was like a freshman in high school. I find some of them to be god-awful but a learning experience nonetheless. Anyways, my current project is actually a short novel! Well short in the sense I wanna complete it in 20 relatively short chapters. Got the idea in my head just gotta jot it all down on paper-well type it on Word. I'm an ADDICT for feedback so please review my story. It's placed in the young adult section because the main protagonist is 18. The story consists of drama, comedy, fantasy, adventure, and romance. Multi-genre just like how all books should be. Oh and completely and utterly angst free in the sense of there is no MINDLESS DRAMA OR CLICHE CRAP THAT WILL MAKE YOU WANT TO PULL OUT YOUR HAIR AND QUESTION WHY YOUR READING SUCH A THING. Yeah, I hate when I start reading something and all it makes me do is wish I got my ten minutes I wasted back from my life. Anyways, I don't wanna give a long ass summary for my story, I have a feeling you'll get hooked by just reading the beginning so enjoy it because it's not full of just stupid, unrealistic dialogue. I want to paint a picture with words so be ready to read paragraphs full of rich detail. All important to set the scenery and mood of course. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it even if I bitch and moan at myself for starting such an endeavor of writing a short novel. I do it in hopes of getting people to actually read my stuff. Who knows maybe in five years I'll have a book published. If not, I'll be an art teacher no matter what. Either way, I do what I love and love doing it. I don't care where it gets me. I just enjoy the ride. Have a nice day. | |||||||
1. PaperJust a weird, little song/poem I wrote because I lost someone close to me. Overall I think the poem can have many interpretations. Enjoy.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Published: 5-20-11 - Complete2. This Won't Make Sense To you reviewsEnjoy.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-22-09 - Complete3. A Series of Shorts reviewsIt's a collection of six poems. They are all very short and I really would like critique if I should lengthen them or if they are perfect the way they are, so please read them. :Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-11-08 - Complete4. The Leaf in the Wind reviewsIt's a symbolic poem. There's a rhyme scheme like the rest of my poems. Anyway, please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-25-08 - Complete5. Back Home reviewsIt's just a quick poem I wrote a while back. It's just another poem everyone can relate to. So check it out and reviews are always appreciated.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-22-08 - Complete6. DREAM reviewsIt's a haiku. Please R&R.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-8-08 - Complete7. Heartbeats reviewsThis is the shortest poem I've ever written. Please R&R. I think everyone will like this poem.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-5-08 - Complete8. No One reviewsThis poem will make you think. This is the first poem I wrote in a while. I wrote it today, so it might not be as good as my other ones, but I hope you still critique it because I'm an aspiring writer in need of some contructive criticism. So please R&R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-3-08 - Complete9. Falling In Love reviewsThis was a song that I made into a poem. It's not my best poems, but just give it a look. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-3-08 - Complete10. I Am reviewsA simply poem some can easily relate to.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-1-08 - Complete11. Untitled reviewsThis poem was my most recent poem I wrote. I wrote it about two weeks ago and I still can't think of a good, proper title for it, so it's just going to be called, Untitled. But please, read it and review. I love critques and construtive criticism.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-31-08 - Complete12. Photo Album of Childhood reviewsIt's just a poem I made as I was looking through my old photo album. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-31-08 - Complete13. The Route reviewsEver wonder if you are going the right path? This poem is kinda about that. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-31-08 - Complete14. The Stupid Kiddie Poem reviewsThis poem should just make you laugh. It's suppose to be silly. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-31-08 - Complete15. A Casualty of Life reviewsA simple, tragedic poem. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-30-08 - Complete16. Finding Way Home reviewsIt's a poem I think everyone can relate to...please just read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-30-08 - Complete17. Writer's Block reviewsIt's just a funny poem about having writer's block. Read and enjoy.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-29-08 - Complete18. The Memory reviewsIt's a poem about your first love, lost. Please read and review!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-29-08 - Complete19. Fairy Wings reviewsIt's a poem about a little girl and her dream. It's in a AABBCC... rhyming format. Please just read and review!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-29-08 - Complete20. Ocean Tears reviewsIt's a poem about a girl who had just lost someone she loved. You'd have to read it. Please review, I'm an aspiring writer and critique is greatly appreciated.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-29-08 - Complete21. H i d d e n reviewsThis poem is about how people hide their true selves. For instance, they put on an act because they want to be accepted by others. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-28-08 - Complete22. Nervous reviewsIt's just a very short poem about being nervous right before an event. Please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-28-08 - Complete