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Author has written 55 stories for Fantasy, Life, General, Love, Horror, War, Fantasy, Humor, Haiku, Humor, General, Supernatural, Historical, and Friendship. (Previously: Hito-chan) i can't review or write the same way i used to do summer time. so, just read the stuff i wrote so far and review. I'm going to be in Japan for 10 days and I won't be able to log in (most probably) I have a forum, it's called Dark Feathers that needs people. Feel free to check it out. Summary: This forum is for writers that write Gothic poetry or dark, depressing, gore-ish, dark fantasy poems. No one's rejected here, gothic poems are art. You can advertise your poems, discuss gothic poets, ask for help, and have fun with the darker side. Now, random stuff about me: I'm 14 years going 20 (in tenth grade) and I'm a female. i love melodramatic stuff. Big time. I act so weird sometimes, i laugh out of the blue and i get scared of my own imagination...etc, all the usual retarded stuff writers get. I mostly write Gothic poetry. But that doesn't mean I'm dark and depressed and emo-ish and whatnot. I'm actually abnormally cheery, like i'm always laughing and smiling (i laugh even when mom is like upset on me, lol, it gets on her nerves :P) And i rarely am solemn-faced. i just like writing dark stuff, i think gothic poetry has it's own beauty and everyone has his/her dark moments. The poets I read their work (all or some) & liked: Emily Dickinson, Naomi Shihab Nye, Jason Shinder, Kevin Webster, Langston Hugh, Edgar Allan Poe, David Constantine, Francis Ledwidge, Kevin Young, Maya Angelou, E. E. Cummings, G. K. Chesterton, Aleister Crowely (still looking for new poets :3).. My real life friends here so far: momoiiro (she's my cousin and bff, so i know her since ever) endless-fallen-skies (she's also my bff, i know her since 7th grade, 4 years. yay. check her stories out, they rock)
My most fav authors here (not in any particular order): Punslinger, Lil Evil Elf Man, and LJ58. I luuuv videogames (when i'm not reading or writing or sleeping - _-) I love watching anime but i kinda stopped for a while but i'll soon see something, maybe hetalia...it's hilarious There are so many amazing authors on this website, and are too many to mention..if you're interested, check out my faves and read their poems!! Especially Mamorel and Two birds! (i'm sorry i didn't mention the others, i love all of your poems but it's just those two have left me in awe with their poetry!) To all of my reviewers: Thank yo~~u! You make me work harder, and you cheer me up! Thank you very much..READ AND REVIEW, k? Eternal_Skies~ | |||||||||||
1. True love? reviewsIs love the way we think of...? Or there's more to it?Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-18-09 - Published: 11-18-092. Unconditional love reviewsMy friends have flaws but i still love them the way they are...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-12-09 - Published: 11-12-093. Lost parts » reviewshaiku collectionHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 11-12-09 - Published: 9-22-094. Crazy randomness reviewsYou know how it feels when you just want to write down your feelings no matter how crazy they are and how stupid they sound like? it happened to me and when i was bored and sick of school one biology periodComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-12-09 - Published: 11-12-095. Unbeloved reviewsI wanted somebody to hold my hand and shower me with love/To breathe my name in a sweet euphony and sighComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-19-09 - Published: 10-19-096. Blue eyes reviewsYou can't pull away, dragged into the sea of his soft blue eyes/Like the ocean when the sun is hiding behind the cloudsComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-13-09 - Published: 10-13-097. Whispers » reviewsa collection of my poems.Titles up so far: All lies, lovelorn , the world at my feet, the harsh truth, a cookie filler, math teacher, Long forgotten mother,Sadness, and bitter coffee.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 9 - Words: 1,703 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 10-11-09 - Published: 9-21-098. Summer Ahern reviewsemotional one-shot. based on the salem trials. rated T for the sugesstive themes.Complete - Historical - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 349 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-7-09 - Published: 10-7-099. Infatuation? reviewssarcastic one-shot story about girls that think every guy they meet is 'The One'.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 603 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-30-09 - Published: 9-30-0910. A creature of hell reviewsLittle Sam finds himself alone in the dark, but then something that he doesn't know what it is appears and starts talking to him...Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 676 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-27-09 - Published: 9-27-0911. Talent reviewsI've been thinking, is it just talent that makes us all good? i don't think so. simple.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-24-09 - Published: 9-24-0912. Give me a chance reviewsIf you'd only give me a chance...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-19-09 - Published: 9-19-0913. Rain of the dead reviewsokay, don't ask me what this is about or what it means, it's dark and strange.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-18-09 - Published: 9-18-0914. ماري ميلاردقصة مجنونة من خيالي, لا تنسو ترك آراءكمComplete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - Arabic - Crime/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-17-09 - Published: 9-17-0915. أفكار عابرةوقفة قصيرة لما يدور بخلدي و قد تشكلت إلى شيئ - و لن أقول قصة فما هي إلا سطرين و لن تخسروا إن قرأتموها, و لا تنسوا كتابة آراءكمComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - Arabic - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-17-09 - Published: 9-17-0916. Queen of ice reviewsIce forms around her heart/Like slow poison spreading through her veins...first 2 linesComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-16-09 - Published: 9-16-0917. Introductions reviewsintroductions aren't so easy when everybody's staring at you, waiting for you speak up..and you don'tComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-16-09 - Published: 9-16-0918. Realization » reviewsSenryu poems also called human haiku are similar to Haiku, with 5/7/5 syllables or 17 syllables in all and they don't rhyme. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions..."first collection"Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 17 - Words: 943 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 9-14-09 - Published: 8-29-0919. Two birds reviewsThis was inspired by 'two birds' penname. this poem is my try at 'showing, not telling' so i tried to lessen the telling i usually do. two-stanza poem, shortComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-14-09 - Published: 9-14-0920. Things left unsaid » reviewsFirst haiku collection. Things that i've kept inside for a long time. --Complete--Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 10 - Words: 489 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-14-09 - Published: 9-8-0921. Little voices reviewsLunatics...outside equals to this.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-10-09 - Published: 9-10-0922. Living to the point of hating it reviewswhen you feel like a dinosaur, living way too long. Note: this is not as funny as it seems, quite the opposite.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-10-09 - Published: 9-10-0923. Lively images » reviewsthose are a collection of my dreamy poems that are inspired by photos...complete for nowComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 429 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-9-09 - Published: 9-9-0924. Frozen touch reviewsa ghost lover decides to.....Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-8-09 - Published: 9-8-0925. I love you, not him reviewsa poem with a twist in the tale and it rhymes..Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-8-09 - Published: 9-8-0926. The Ultimate Guide for selling souls reviewsSarcastic and funny. the short and simple guide, rotting in hell guaranteed. rated T to be safe :PComplete - Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-8-09 - Published: 9-8-0927. Fear reviewsThis is short and simple but it expresses my feelings well. i don't think i'm gonna change it or add anythingComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-8-09 - Published: 9-8-0928. She used to be a butterfly reviews6-lines haiku -double haiku- ...Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Parody/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-7-09 - Published: 9-7-0929. I sit in darkness reviewswhat can a blind see? simple poem.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-7-09 - Published: 9-7-0930. Burning flowers reviewsContains death, a coffin, a funeral, burning flowers and a twisted ending..lol, reviews are returned!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-6-09 - Published: 9-6-0931. The soothing rain reviewsThe tips of their fingers meet--/And they part away"...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-6-09 - Published: 9-6-0932. Dead reviewsdedicated for the people who had lost their friendsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-6-09 - Published: 9-6-0933. The girl with the blue dress reviewsLove this poem, dreamy and mysterious :D R&RComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-6-09 - Published: 9-6-0934. A reflection reviews...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-09 - Published: 9-2-0935. Look deep into their souls reviewsI like this one, it's mysterious and strange...R&R! rated T to be safe it's not that long, just my A/N taking space, lolComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-1-09 - Published: 9-1-0936. Haunting reviewsI've written another strange poem and it tells you something..i thinkComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-29-09 - Published: 8-29-0937. Is it time? reviewsEtheree poem, which consists of 10 lines, the first line has only 1 syll, second has 2, third has 3, and so on, till you have 10 syll in the 10th line. first try. R&R!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-29-09 - Published: 8-29-0938. Tell me reviewsthis is a very random puzzle poem that doesn't make sense even to me, and it rhymes! lol, what do you you think it means? can mean many things i guess R&R!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-26-09 - Published: 8-26-0939. Please stop reviewsstop cutting yourself for once, don't do this to yourself and all of us.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-26-09 - Published: 8-26-0940. It's funny how reviewslol, idle thoughts, only 4 lines, you won't lose anything! R&RComplete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-26-09 - Published: 8-26-0941. A cry of war reviewsA cry of war resounded through the battlefield and / Both teams of dark and light colors lunged at each other...R&RComplete - War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-25-09 - Published: 8-25-0942. I whisper farewell reviewsPeace has left earth, and this is what it says...Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0943. When I was a child reviewsWhen I was a child,/ I had dreams with wings...R&R slightly depressing for kids, rated to be safeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0944. Dreaming reviews...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0945. The Eternal darkness of the waters reviewsShe closed her eyes and chose not to see / And welcomed the eternal darkness of the waters.."Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0946. The lady in black reviewsShe walked until she reached the shadow she was following / And embraced it…the darkness overlapped her" R&R!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0947. The hooded figure of death reviewsThis poem's about the grim reaper,though he appears at the last two lines: "And a hooded figure with a scythe raised above his head/Came to collect her soul..." R&R!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-0948. Can't you see it too? reviewsThis is about the war in palestine...if you have a weak stomach, don't read it to be safe .Complete - War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-23-09 - Published: 8-23-0949. Mourning reviewsHe watched her, damaged, broken at her loss...he watched her until he chose to leave..R&R!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-23-09 - Published: 8-23-0950. Now the stiff body lies reviewsThus that which is the most awful of evils, death, is nothing to us, since when we exist there is no death, and when there is death we do not exist"-Epicurus. R&R!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-23-09 - Published: 8-23-0951. Hear the steps of Death reviewsA beautiful girl bathed in moonlight sings a song of death and sorrow...and a man happens to hear her....T bcuz it's too dark and gore-ish for kids.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 527 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-24-09 - Published: 7-24-0952. Smiles reviewsA cute short free-verse poem about a guy's feelings. R&R plz, thnx. sMiLe!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-23-09 - Published: 7-23-0953. I hear your screams reviewsokay, i dunno why i wrote this poem, i just had to..it's pretty weird and strange-it describes the act of dying,description inside..R&R Rated T just in case.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-27-09 - Published: 5-27-0954. Death's Reality reviewsDown, down, down into the darkness of the grave.Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind;Quietly they go,the intelligent, the witty, the brave.I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned"-Edna St. Vincent Millay. R&R!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-23-09 - Published: 5-23-0955. A day in the land of elves reviewsR&RComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-14-08 - Published: 11-14-08
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