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Vince Loring
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since: 10-21-08, id: 635795, Profile Updated: 03-30-09
country: United States
Author has written 26 stories for Love, School, General, Fantasy, Religion, Life, Haiku, War, Nature, Essay, General, and Horror.

Favorite quote: "I may be some sorta crazy." Blue October, Sound of Pulling Heaven Down.

I live in Central Florida. I go to high school. My poetry doesnt reflect my mindset usually, but it does represent the extreams. Please ask questions, I love explaining it, and talking about it. And I also cant spell. If I spell something wrong, please tell me.

If you must know about the name, it is false. Just part of my middle name and a surname taken out of a very good book by S.M. Stirling. the name of the book is "The protector's war"

When I write, I like to just do a stream of consiousness. It really helps me cope with life and stuff. I like to use rhyme schemes, but I may not. I like to use alot of referances to history. I also like to referance mythology and hell. If you don't understand a referance, please tell me, I would love to talk about it. I also hate having stuff be flat. I try to put depth in my poems, though it sometimes just makes my writing more complicated than it should be.

The longer i am on this site, then the more i will probably put up here.

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1. Elation
A stunning realization recovers me from the depths i have delved.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-30-09 - Published: 8-30-09
2. Release reviews
Poem written in response to empty. Expresses the way i felt after letting out all the negative emotion in "Empty"
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-30-09 - Published: 8-30-09
3. Empty reviews
First poem i have written in a while. It is about a low point in my life.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-30-09 - Published: 8-30-09
4. The Ship is Sinking
A not so happy poem about a world gone wrong. Makes me wish I didnt have to live in it.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-4-09 - Published: 5-4-09
5. I Walk into the Rain reviews
My take on the "i cry in the rain" poem. Please Review.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-1-09 - Published: 4-1-09
6. Stifled reviews
A poem about feeling Stifled. Please review.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-1-09 - Published: 4-1-09
7. Rainbow Sunset reviews
written because i felt like it. pretty good. please read.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-23-09 - Published: 3-23-09
8. In that one paticular harbor reviews
poem with a few literary referances
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-09 - Published: 3-16-09
9. Message in a Bottle reviews
The story was originally a poem. became a story.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 634 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-9-09 - Published: 2-9-09
10. Is that Me Behind the Mirror? reviews
The man on the other side of the mirror isnt what he appears. Started as a poem, worked it's way to being a monolouge. explores concepts of mental disease and supernatural.
Horror - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-2-09 - Published: 2-2-09
11. A Cry for Sol reviews
A stream of thought that flows to a river of dislike and ends in a ocean of contempt
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-18-08 - Published: 12-18-08
12. Apathy or Bust! poem
A poem about a man's loathing of his consiousness and morals.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-15-08 - Published: 12-15-08
13. Apathy or Bust! essay
APATHY OR BUST! an essay about one man's loathing of his consiousness and morals.
Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-15-08 - Published: 12-15-08
14. Moonlight Seance reviews
A girl goes to another world to be with her departed lover. edited
Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-11-08 - Published: 12-11-08
15. Held me Under reviews
A poem about me and my Ex-girlfriend.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-8-08 - Published: 12-8-08
16. Raisin in the Sun reviews
poem about me and my now ex girl friend. fun fun.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-08 - Published: 12-4-08
17. Wind reviews
Poem written while hyped up on monster. it was good.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-08 - Published: 12-4-08
18. Celtic Crusade reviews
Based on an invasion of Scotland by the Romans which has historically happened, but this is fiction and not accurate at all. Incorperates battle between old religion and Christianity. Disclaimer: material may be found disturbing. Read at own risk.
War - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-5-08 - Published: 11-5-08
19. The December Rose
Abstract set of haikus that revolve around some rose that blooms in december. Loosely based on giving up the hope of loving someone.
Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-2-08 - Published: 11-2-08
20. A Lonely 12 AM reviews
Written one night at 12, like alot of my poems. One of my better ones.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-1-08 - Published: 11-1-08
21. Ragnarök reviews
This poem is highly abstract. It can be taken any number of ways.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-1-08 - Published: 11-1-08
22. The prologue of Ravin
I just started playing Dungeons and Dragons with some friends i am a nerd, i admit it and felt so inspired to write a backstory for my chacter.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,272 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-1-08 - Published: 11-1-08
23. Cold Steel reviews
A poem about returning from the ashes of defeat.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-08 - Published: 10-29-08
24. The Scarlet Letter
Basicly, it is a poem that expresses the characters in the scarlet letter through metaphores and other poetic devices. I also worked with a fun little rhyme scheme. That was auctually one of the harder parts.
School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-28-08 - Published: 10-28-08
25. Oh Beautiful reviews
This was written in the fall of 07, Because my teacher wanted us to write for some competition thingy. I this won me 40 dollars and really inspired me to express myself though poetry. Since then, i have been writing stuff on and off ever since.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-28-08 - Published: 10-28-08
26. Loneliness reviews
This was written basicly from the heart during lunch one day in 08. sometime in spring i think.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-28-08 - Published: 10-28-08
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