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Author has written 2 stories for General, and Young Adult. Hello! I'm Floating Apple. I'm a teenager in Greater London who has nothing better to do than sit and type this out :D I do write stuff, although right now there's not much here. I am very good at reviewing peoples stories though, and I review pretty much every one I read. I have moved here from the fanfiction website and have found that people here aren't nearly so good at reviewing as the people over there. When I DO post, and if I get reviews, I will review the stories of those who reviewed mine, too, provided their stories are not an incredibly long story about something I have no interest in ;) No need to worry about that just yet though! Like most other people on this site, I'm here to improve my writing :D Concrit would be very much appreciated with any of my writing. I also value your honest opinion, so if you didn't like something, tell me why and stuff. I may or may not use a beta reader, depending on what kind of story I'm writing, but whether I do or not concrit would still be wonderful! It will help me so much :) I don't usually do copy and pastes but here are a few that I liked, so I thought, Why not? >>> If you review every story you read, copy and paste this to your profile. If you are against flaming people, because they get you nowhere, but for constructive criticism, because they help people learn, copy and paste this to your profile. If you believe that humans, by nature, are greedy, violent, hateful beings, copy and paste this to your profile. If you also believe that we would not be human if we don't have the strength and power to overcome this nature, then copy and paste this to your profile. If you are for gay rights and against homophobics, copy and paste this to your profile. | |||||||
1. A Killer, A HeroOn Saturday, November 13th, 2004, I killed my mother. I saved countless people. I condemned my mother to damnation unto death. There is no better way to die than to die for others. -These are the thoughts and questions of a dead man. A killer. A savior.-Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,033 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-6-09 - Published: 11-6-092. Ignorance Is Bliss reviewsThe feelings a teenage girl gets when a person she should be able to trust beyond death breaks everything, including her heart. Not romance.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,926 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-22-09 - Published: 8-22-09