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| davidseven |
Author has written 29 stories for General, Haiku, Humor, Fantasy, Love, Mystery, Religion, Nature, Life, and General. See more of me at my blog - Seven's Heaven. I love to write, but I don't practise often enough; so here's a place for me to get it out of my system, and hopefully one day I'll like what I see. Look around, read some stuff, leave comments. I accept anonymous reviews, but if you leave your name I'll return the favour with pleasure. D7 | |||||||
1. A loop reviewsThe poem has no beginning and no end, the last line runs into the first. Also, if you read the lines in a loop (either clockwise or anti-clockwise) it makes two new poems with the same theme. What can I say? I had too much time on my hands I guess.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-11-132. ChessJust a thought. Nothing else to say.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Published: 6-11-13 - Complete3. ThresholdA 50-word flash fiction piece. I am not sold on the title.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 12-12-10 - Complete4. Art reviewsI don't know what to say about this one. It's short. That's gotta count for something. :-Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-1-105. Rain reviewsShort piece I did for a writing prompt once.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-1-106. Biblios Hokku » reviewsMy new project. The Bible in Haiku, one book at a time.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 67 - Words: 1,025 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 3-5-10 - Published: 8-4-09 - Complete7. The Meeting reviewsAbout a guy who met a girl, and did everything wrong. Will it still work out?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-6-098. Watched reviewsIf you don't get it the first time, then read it again. It's not that hard.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-4-099. Better reviewsHow much is enough?Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-3-09 - Complete10. Will reviewsNot my greatest piece, just a quick doodle I did while contemplating this idea. Does it sound familiar?Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-3-0911. Letter reviewsDid you ever treasure a letter, just because of who wrote it? Sometimes the writer is more important than the words.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete12. As the pen runs reviewsWhat it saysPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-29-0913. Lesser Moon reviewsBe all you can be, even if the moon doesn't co-operate.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-28-0914. Ode to a lawyer reviews-Yes, it is a joke. -Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-28-09 - Complete15. Numbers don't lie reviewsWhat is better than ten?Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-0916. Clover reviewsA poem about love, luck, and green plants. Just for fun.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-12-09 - Complete17. Dragon Deception » reviewsA short story I wrote for my last novel. Since the two characters tell it in three parts, I thought I would publish it in three as well. Don't forget to read all three chapters. If it sounds childish, it is because it was told by a child.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Parody - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,691 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-4-09 - Published: 1-2-0918. Dragon Deception Rewrite reviewsThis is a rewrite of my previous story of the same name. I have tried to tidy up some of the dialogue, and increase the pace by moving some paragraphs. Let me know what you think of the changes.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,545 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-4-0919. David and Goliath reviewsOde to a ratPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-7-09 - Complete20. Bees reviewsA haiku about bees. Try it, it's better than it sounds.Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-7-09 - Complete21. Day of Ash reviewsThe Day of Ash, commonly called Ash Wednesday, is the first day of lent. Palm crosses from last year's Palm Sunday are burned to ash, and applied to the forehead as a sin of repentance.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-09 - Complete22. Sleepless reviewsPlease help me. This poem is about insomnia, not a love poem. I want to make that clearer, without coming out and saying it. Any advice would be greatly appreciated.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-1-0923. Think reviewsThey told me to think. But no body told me how to stop.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-27-09 - Complete24. Wordsmith reviewsA love triangle of a different sort.Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,952 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-22-0925. Dream a dream of me reviewsFor the one that got away. Gone, but not forgotten. The sporadic use if punctuation in the first stanza is deliberate, for ambiguous sentence structure. I hope it works.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-9-09 - Complete26. Prayer for 2009 reviewsI used this on a dating site many years ago. I thought I would post it as a joke. You are laughing aren't you?Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-1-09 - Complete27. Free reviewsIt meant something to me once. I'm not sure if it does.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-30-0828. Golden Noise reviewsDo we really want to hear HIM?Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-29-08
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