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Author has written 1 story for Fantasy. Hello! I'm Kelsem, a young author that wishes to someday publish a book of her own works someday for the world to see... So, I guess this is my place to start publiishing myself and start off! I hope you guys like whatever story I upload! And please do review on anything, either the greatness (Which is highly unlikely) or the horriblness of it all (Likely, but please let the review be nothing but constructive criticism, please?) Thank you! This picture is of my little sister. I love her alot and think that she deserves some credit for being such an inspiration. So, I decided to put up a cute picture of her! =D ~~Stories~~ I mostly work on my Wolf Queen Trilogy (Onset of the New Age), and other times I write small, light hearted poems. I also have a Fanfiction account with the same Penname, if you ever want to see some humor filled Oblivion and Fallout 3 one shots and full out stories! Current Fiction "Onset of the New Age" Current story I am working on for Fictionpress. I had written this story ever since I was nine years old. Ever since I wrote the first one, I have kept on rewriting it (This being my fourth and hopefully final rewrite at age fourteen). I mostly hope to make this an original story with some type of moral to it, like acceptance and standing on our own, and this all being worked out by a normal teenage girl, not a mary sue or a total ditz. I will work for her to be like any normal person with personal flaws and personal strengths. Stories like that are total wins in my mind and heart. (Holds knife to Edward Cullen's neck) That doesn't mean you, Twilight. "Onset of the New Age" is mostly about a world in an ancient conflict and bathed in racism towards difference in society and it is going to surround a unique group of different characters who tries to help their world turn away from needless hate and to the light of advancing from the darkness. That is mostly the moral here I will be working towards and hope I will pull off. Dracoterria (translated as Dragon Land in latin) is a battle scarred land with five kingdoms and five races. The Chyrans, huntsmen of the north, Karnarians, Feline people of the desert, Ashalians, the magic people, Huurdanese, the barbarians raging minor wars against the Chyran people, and lastly, the Kalyptians, the society of the primitives. All five of these races are different amongst each other and each have different traits, weaknesses, and strengths contrasting with the rest of the races. Now, there are the Dragon Gods who fulfill Dracoterria's namesake. There is the dragon matron, Mythelia, and her five sons and daughters: Goldenheart--Goddess of light and peace. Redwing--Goddess of mothers and fertility. Umbran--God of death and the afterlife. Photon-- God of wisdom and elders. Drual--God of nature and wildlife. Each one of these gods and godesses are set to each country and is their sworn protector. Goldenheart for Karn, Redwing for Kalyptia, Umbran for the Deadlands (Huurdanese), Photon for Ashalia, and Drual for Chyra. !Characters (In progress) :D! ~About me~ I'm a generally mature and quiet person, so I am somewhat outputting from everyone else in my school, but it doesn't really bother me. If I'm not in the drama, then I am happy. I don't like it when people call me goth or emo because of my tendency to wear black hoodies and see life at a different, somewhat darker perspective. I find it really insulting. There was one incident where I stabbed a girl with a pencil when she kept on giving me a hard time about wearing a black hoody. I apologized the next day to her but she never forgave me... Damn...Prep... I like writing and drawing and always like to draw my characters from my stories, (Especially Linda and Laurinna for some unknown reason). I can't draw men that well, but I think I'll get there... Once I learn how to draw their effing body shape. I'm single and always will be. :D My real name in real life means, "Victorious Ship." If you ever want to, search the definition and viola! You have my name! I love animals more than people, because animals can't talk about Twilight and love you no matter what as long as you pet and feed them. If you haven't figured it out yet, I have a strong dislike towards the fame Twilight is getting. It makes me wonder where literature is going, the drain? I used to like it but I guess now that I've improved with my own writing and my understanding of true, creative writing from other well known authors, I found that Twilight is just simply average, and does NOT deserve the fame that its retarded fangirls are giving it. There are better books out there with awesome plot and characters and they are being snubbed and instead insulted with being beaten by sparkling vampires and weak female roles. Icemark Chronicles = Books that deserved Twilight's fame. :( Ranting aside, let me list down more things... Favorite Color(s): Black, red, and white. Favorite Animal(s): Wolves, dogs, foxes, and ravens. Favorite Music: Mostly symphonic metal and rock because it is so inspiring... Like Night Wish and Within Temptation! I like rock and orchestra music as well, but loathe rap, hip hop and pop. Where is music turning to...? Favorite Food: Ramen Noodles :D Favorite Movie: Nightmare Before Christmas. THIS IS HALLOWEEN! Favorite Book (s): Icemark Chronicles and Harry Potter. The two series that ever made me cry. Why did Lupin and Oskan have to die?! WHY?! Loves: Computer... But mostly for Microsoft Word. Hates: Fangirls of any type of thing. They annoy me so much... It almost hurts my brain. Hobbies: Writing (duh), drawing, and taking pictures. Gender: Female! Or...really... confused... (Goes silent with thought) Role Model: My mom... She pwns ur n00b. Siblings: My little sister, Lida... Her name means "Loved by the People". Everyone loves her more than me. She's day and I'm night, so of course she is more appealing. I STILL LOVES HER THO!! Favorite Quotes "Yeah... He's a professor... OF BEING A DOG! Oooh! FACED!" --Pothead, Cabin Fever "Oh noes! Jerrie! You turned into a cheese!" --My friend, Emmers "White thistle, white thistle, all in a row, in Neverwinter Woods, they all grow!" --Grobnar, Neverwinter Nights 2 "Yeah, she was unconcious when we got married!" --Bishop, Neverwinter Nights 2 "Let's just say... The girl is never going to hit seven!" --Gogron, Oblivion "WRONG!" My friend, Jenna "I don't get tired in bed." --Jansen, Lost Odyssey "I am Fluffities the Fierce!" --My English Teacher "I'm a dragon! Peh! Peh! Peh!" --My friend, Ashley "If you are in range, so is the enemy." --Army Guidebook "I meant subduction, not seduction... Sheesh..." --Jerrie, Onset of the New Age "Dirty as dirt!" --Emmers "...Cyro looks like a pedophile... And he wants to eat Bilto's alien child. O_O" --Emmers and I playing Sims 2 "Well, I'm just going to leave with my weed--" "STAY!!" --Cabin Fever "No kiss for you, then." --Gann-of-Dreams, Neverwinter Nights 2 | |||||||
1. Onset of the New Age » reviewsDracoterria, a world close to a war between the blessed and the damned, is on the verge of destruction. A young girl, christened an outcast, must work through a hard, cold life, searching for a lost father in the hopes that someday, the world may change.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,296 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-28-09 - Published: 1-17-09