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Dancing Kirby!!

Howdy, I'm Ashley. I'm a 15 year old Freshman student who loves to write. I've been doing it all my life. Ever since I was a little good. Sure, I'm not the best but it's what I do. I mostly write about Love but Fantasy is a big interest of mine. I guess you could say I'm one of those girls who wishes for her Prince Charming to come and whisk her away from her horrible parents and siblings and whatnot. It's true. But I already have my Prince Charming. I love my boyfriend more than anything in the world. I'd do anything for him. Even give up writing, but I hope it never comes to that. He's always supportive of me in what I do and he urges me to continue writing and I do. He's always there with helpful criticism, even if he's not the best English student either.

Right now I'm working on this story that I am basing off a FanFic I wrote not too long ago. I kept the same title, Betrayal. Kept most of the same characters too. Only difference is I plan on making this a lot more detailed. I know I had a lot of problems with that FanFic, like leaving too many holes in the storyline. I'm hoping the actual novel version of this will turn out better.

Betrayal is about this young girl of 15, Nina Lothario, who's been having trouble communicating with her mother, Bella, a lot recently. In an attempt to give her daughter some sort of outlet, Bella invited the actor son of an old friend of hers down to visit them at their ranch in the small town of Mica. He's mysterious and handsome and Nina almost immediately finds an interest in him. But when she makes one of the most important decisions of her life, will it cost her more than what she bargained for? Or will he leave her forever?

Betrayal Characters

Nina Lothario (Main Female Character)
Kai Evans (Main Male Character)
Bella Alden (Nina's Mother)
Richard Lothario (Nina's Late Father/Bella's Ex-Husband)
Ian Alden (Bella's Husband/Nina's Stepfather)
Bethany Weiss (Nina's Best Friend)
Elliot Castro (Nina's Ex-Boyfriend)
Natasha Marquez (Elliot's Crony)
Ryan Fenz AKA Chubs (Elliot's Crony)

Now, like I said, I'm not the best writer out there. I make a lot of typos and mistakes. I type these things up and I rarely give them more than two read throughs. So, I miss a lot of mistakes. If there's anything really major (like forgetting an entire word or spelling a word so bad it's disgusting) or if there's a lot of one mistake (like spelling to as ot 20 times in the same chapter) then please let me know. If there's one thing I can't stand, it's a lot of typos. My boyfriend is one of those people who IM and text in short text talk, like spelling you as u and whatnot, and it bothers the crap out of me. Just please let me know if there's anything horribly wrong with my story and I'll do my best to change it.

And please review my story! I get terribly discouraged if no one reviews so please if you like it review it. No flames please. If you have constructive criticism then share but do not tell me how much the story sucks or how bad you think I write. If that's all you're gonna do, then complain to yourself. Thank you.