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Author has written 12 stories for Family, Romance, Life, and Love. About me: Hey my name is Alyssa. (: I am a freshman in high school. This year has been life-changing. Everything about me changed. It is hard to explain I guess unless you have been through such a big change, but for sure I will start writing differently, I am not as happy and perky in my writing as I used to be. Over the past couple of months it has been hard to have a very positive outlook on life so you can see in my poetry mainly a lot of the feelings that I am going through, and a lot more heavy topics in stories. Inspirations: Books, music, movies, songs, bands, my life, friends, family, happiness, inner thoughts, wishes, daydreams, dancing, rumors/drama, anger, sadness, love stories, love, boys, crushes, plays, and so much more. Right now I am working on one key piece for a while: It's Over Summary: Annabel is a girl who is constantly told "It's Over". She has been dumped, lost friends, and has had a lot of bad things happen in her life. So when she is told those two words she is easily able to get over it. But what happens when she falls in love for the first time? The two words she is so used to hearing, that she has learned to embrace, become the two words that could break her heart for good. And I want to clear things up real fast, this story is completely and 100 fiction. I had an inquiry saying that this seemed like it was non-fiction, and I can assure you it is not. The whole story is just something that I had pieced together in my head after a bit of planning. I was just thinking about some current day issues and decided to kind of make it into a story, making it a modern romance. Yes it is a bit dramatic, but you see a lot of present day problems and get to go through some emotions that aren't exactly the happiest. And none of this is from person experience, all of it I came up with inside my head (: Hope you like it. Some things you should understand about Annabel to make the story make more sense is that: OK if you haven't noticed she is very popular. And the town that she lives in, and well the school is very based on social standings, the social ladder, and all that jazz. She can be really confident but you can tell through certain hints I try to give that she has a lot of problems (home life, emotional, with her past, etc.). She is actually a nice person, which you also get hints of through the story at certain points. Nobody is perfect, and nobody is heartless as I try to show through this story. The prologue pieces kind of give a background on her adolescent life. The big three moments in her life are shown during those chapters. The three turning points I guess. You will see that she changes slowly from the first chapter to the third, and then through the rest of the story. I will go ahead and say now that during the present tense chapters she is going to be really different from the first three chapters. You will get to see some moments of pain, some of happiness, and some of healing. Once you read chapter three you will understand a lot more about why she has a healing process to do. She is not your typical character that you see in my usual stuff. She will be a bit edgier, she will have a lot of depth. Basically how the story is laid out is that there is a three part prologue (chapters 1-3) and then the rest of the story is in 'present tense' I guess. Hopefully it will be more then ten chapters long! But I need a bunch of reviews ok? Love you guys :) While working on this story I will upload a ton of poems (written over the course of this year that I have been too lazy to upload) I might start more stories soon, and if you have any suggestions/questions/helpful tips/or anything please send me a message or review, I really do appreciate it! | |||||
1. Please Don't GoWhen someones first love gets killed by a drunk driver.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 552 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-6-09 - Published: 11-6-092. Last GoodbyeFeelings through my words. This is what I wish I could do sometimes. Sometimes I just want to say: Goodbye... Forever.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 682 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-093. He is Everywhere reviewsHow I feel about my father, sounds a bit harsh sometimes, but he is always inside my head and I tend to think about him a lot because of what he does to me. Basically I talk about how I can see him everywhere I go whether I want to or not.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-094. What do you do? reviewsBasically a short poem about how I was feeling one day, I felt hopeless to sadness/emotions.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-095. A Change reviewsWhat happens when you want a change. Things that go through girl's minds. Poem I wrote a very, very, very, long time ago, sorry for it not being like a lot of my other poemsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 585 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-4-09 - Published: 11-4-096. DoneHow I feel sometimes about my father. Basically what I wish I could say to him to make him understand what he does to me.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-4-09 - Published: 11-4-097. It's Over » reviewsIt's Over are words you never want to hear, they are both brutal and scary. Most fear hearing them. Meet Annabel, she constantly hears that dreaded phrase, to a point where eventually they don't leave a mark. But when she meets Sam everything changes.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,723 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-15-09 - Published: 7-23-098. Puzzle PiecesWith love you can do anything, with love you can really connect, with love you can do things that seem impossible. Basically this poem is about the feelings I have for one specific guy.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-23-09 - Published: 7-23-099. The Song reviewsLove is really difficult, especially when you are in love with a boy who is the biggest flirt in school! Meet Lena, a nice, heartfelt girl, with a big crush. Usually she leaves her feelings tucked aside, but one day she decides to take a risk.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,870 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-2-09 - Published: 3-2-0910. A Broken WingPopular, pretty, happy-go-lucky, Caroline's life is exactly perfect! That is until the summer between eighth and ninth grade. One night can truly change your life forever.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,474 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-28-09 - Published: 1-28-0911. Dance in the Rain reviewsHave you ever just wanted to do something different? Break out of the usual cycle? Let's Dance in the Rain instead, let's be free :Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-25-09 - Published: 1-25-0912. Secret Smile reviewsCharlotte is a popular girl in a small town. She has dated many guys in her past and is considered a major social butterfly. But when she meets Ben, things are different. She becomes a shy girl with a big crush.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,053 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-25-09 - Published: 1-25-09
