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Author has written 1 story for Romance. I'm not a party person or a bar-hopping fanatic like most of my friends so I sit in the corner and write while they (try to) take over the nearest dance floor. Feedback on my work would be most appreciated as I'm in grave need of criticism in the realms regarding my so-called creativity and on more technical issues such as my syntax and grammar. | |||||||
1. Pandemonium reviewsExcerpt: Turning to smile at him sweetly, I replied with great glee, "Fate has a sadistic sense of humour. She makes them pretty and she also makes them psychopaths with neat party tricks.” I flashed: disappearing from the bar.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 560 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-25-09 - Published: 6-25-09
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