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| Antonella Marie |
Author has written 21 stories for Love, Life, General, and Fantasy. I'm Yalina and I am 16. My pen name as you can tell isn't related to my name at all. Well, Antonella was going to be my name that my mom wanted for me but my grandma named me Yalina (I don't know why). Also, Marie is just my middle name. I'm kind of new at poetry so advice, comments, and criticism is greatly appreciated. Thanks! As you might've noticed, some of my poems look kind of messed up. That's because I uploaded them from Notepad (because this is my brother's laptop so he doesn't have Microsoft Word yet) If you don't know what I mean, then this could show you: When it's really supposed to be: Get it? Well just please try to look over that ok? Thanks for all your help everyone! Peace. | |||||||
1. JayHe's not coming back, even though he wants to. I love him so much and he loves me. I don't want him in Georgia. I want him here...Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Published: 12-30-09 - Complete2. The Road to Wherever reviewsThe poem says it all.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-22-09 - Complete3. EverythingThis was just a poem I wrote while I was bored in the middle of the night. It has no meaning but please review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Published: 6-15-09 - Complete4. The 19 Year OldThis is about me not telling the whole truth to my ex boyfriend on why we had to break up. Please review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 6-14-09 - Complete5. I'm Sorry, GoodBye reviewsI'm about to break up with my boyfriend. I know the poem seems cruel but that's not exactly how I feel; it's just the only way I could write it and I never felt that "spark" with him.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-24-09 - Complete6. Nightmare reviewsI just started writing and it actually creeps ME out! Lol. I'm still not done with it but please review!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-9-097. I Want To ForgetOld poem.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Published: 5-6-09 - Complete8. Clearing My Mind reviewsI'm so confused! That's really all I can say. Please review!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-29-09 - Complete9. Different reviewsThis is actually based upon how I've felt my whole life. I've always felt different in the bad way but now I realize that it's a good thing. Please review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-10-09 - Complete10. BLAH reviewsI can't explain it, really. Just read. Please review!Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-4-09 - Complete11. Moving On reviewsI'm slowly trying to move on no matter how hard it is. Even though I can't have him, I'll try to be there for him as a good friend. Please review!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-30-09 - Complete12. Life reviewsIt's as simple as it gets. Please read and review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-28-09 - Complete13. The Breakup reviewsThe title says it all. Please review!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-27-09 - Complete14. The Dance reviewsI went to my boyfriend's military ball and I had a very embarrassing thing happen to me so this is based on what happened. Please review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-1-09 - Complete15. Fateless reviewsIt started with a sentence and then ended in a detailed poem. Please review!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-18-09 - Complete16. Unspoken Words reviewsI wrote this on Valentine's Day. Tell me what you think.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-16-09 - Complete17. ChangesOriginally a song that I wrote a while back. It really has no meaning. I was just bored one day. Please comment!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Published: 2-11-09 - Complete18. Deadly Romance reviewsThis is NOT based on the book Twilight. It's an older poem of mine before I even knew what Twilight was that just HAPPENS to seem like it, but it's NOT. Please rate!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-11-09 - Complete19. The Little Girl reviewsJust mainly about my first day of freshman year.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-5-09 - Complete20. Regretful reviewsThis is how I USED to feel about my ex-boyfriend who is a major jerk.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-5-09 - Complete21. The Loved and The Loveless reviewsHow I feel about a certain someone...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-4-09 - Complete
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