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| Antonella Marie |
Author has written 20 stories for Love, Life, General, and Fantasy. I'm Yalina and I am 15. My pen name as you can tell isn't related to my name at all. Well, Antonella was going to be my name that my mom wanted for me but my grandma named me Yalina (I don't know why). Also, Marie is just my middle name. I'm kind of new at poetry so advice, comments, and criticism is greatly appreciated. Thanks! As you might've noticed, some of my poems look kind of messed up. That's because I uploaded them from Notepad (because this is my brother's laptop so he doesn't have Microsoft Word yet) If you don't know what I mean, then this could show you: When it's really supposed to be: Get it? Well just please try to look over that ok? Thanks for all your help everyone! Peace. | |||||||
1. The Road to Wherever reviewsThe poem says it all.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-09 - Published: 10-22-092. EverythingThis was just a poem I wrote while I was bored in the middle of the night. It has no meaning but please review!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-15-09 - Published: 6-15-093. The 19 Year OldThis is about me not telling the whole truth to my ex boyfriend on why we had to break up. Please review!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-14-09 - Published: 6-14-094. I'm Sorry, GoodBye reviewsI'm about to break up with my boyfriend. I know the poem seems cruel but that's not exactly how I feel; it's just the only way I could write it and I never felt that "spark" with him.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-24-09 - Published: 5-24-095. Nightmare reviewsI just started writing and it actually creeps ME out! Lol. I'm still not done with it but please review!Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-09 - Published: 5-9-096. I Want To ForgetOld poem.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-6-09 - Published: 5-6-097. Clearing My Mind reviewsI'm so confused! That's really all I can say. Please review!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-29-09 - Published: 4-29-098. Different reviewsThis is actually based upon how I've felt my whole life. I've always felt different in the bad way but now I realize that it's a good thing. Please review!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-10-09 - Published: 4-10-099. BLAH reviewsI can't explain it, really. Just read. Please review!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-4-09 - Published: 4-4-0910. Moving On reviewsI'm slowly trying to move on no matter how hard it is. Even though I can't have him, I'll try to be there for him as a good friend. Please review!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-30-09 - Published: 3-30-0911. Life reviewsIt's as simple as it gets. Please read and review!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-28-09 - Published: 3-28-0912. The Breakup reviewsThe title says it all. Please review!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-27-09 - Published: 3-27-0913. The Dance reviewsI went to my boyfriend's military ball and I had a very embarrassing thing happen to me so this is based on what happened. Please review!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-1-09 - Published: 3-1-0914. Fateless reviewsIt started with a sentence and then ended in a detailed poem. Please review!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-18-09 - Published: 2-18-0915. Unspoken Words reviewsI wrote this on Valentine's Day. Tell me what you think.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-16-09 - Published: 2-16-0916. ChangesOriginally a song that I wrote a while back. It really has no meaning. I was just bored one day. Please comment!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-11-09 - Published: 2-11-0917. Deadly Romance reviewsThis is NOT based on the book Twilight. It's an older poem of mine before I even knew what Twilight was that just HAPPENS to seem like it, but it's NOT. Please rate!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-11-09 - Published: 2-11-0918. The Little Girl reviewsJust mainly about my first day of freshman year.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-5-09 - Published: 2-5-0919. Regretful reviewsThis is how I USED to feel about my ex-boyfriend who is a major jerk.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-5-09 - Published: 2-5-0920. The Loved and The Loveless reviewsHow I feel about a certain someone...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-4-09 - Published: 2-4-09
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