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Author has written 4 stories for Romance, and General. Hello, I am eVil-uNicorns! I am nineteen. A writer who is need of more practice (hence the reason I joined this site). I'm also an avid reader. Books are my everything. I've been drawing since forever, or so it seems. And I'm completely obsessed with fictionpress. Who wouldn't be? With all the amazing stories people have written. Most of them deserve to be published. Books: Twilight Series, Jane Austen Novels, Sarah Dressen books, Elizabeth Scott books, House of Night Series, Harry Potter Series, Vampire Kisses Series, Blue Bloods Series. Shows: Supernatural, Smallville, Gossip Girl, Family Guy, Scrubs, South Park. Music: Muse, This Providence, Journey, Kansas, Matchbox 20, and pretty much everything. Pet Peeves: 1) People who threaten to not update a story unless they get so many reviews before. I'm sorry if you do that and you take offense, I feel as if it makes you seem not only desperate but slightly pathetic as well. 2) Those who are not honest in their opinions (Despite how bothersome it might make me, it will also truly help me better my work, which is my main priority.) 3) When people put commas or periods after the quotation mark in dialogue: "Hello", (It annoys me to no end!! If you ever see that mistake in my writing, PLEASE point it out!!) 4) When amazing authors hardly get any recognition, while those who really aren't any good does. Things about me: I can be thoroughly harsh at times, especially if I'm stating my opinion. I try to stay honest, and I also try to tone done some of the negative things I might have to say, but sometimes it doesn't pan out. I'm also someone who tries to review every chapter of a story, each time there's an update. I'll only leave a review if I'm able to actually say: Likes/dislikes of character, likes/dislikes of story, and guesses of what I think might happen. I almost always leave reviews a paragraph or longer. I like to have hot and cold characters, weak and strong as well. I'm not too fond of stories that have 'I am women, hear me roar' type of stuff. Sometimes the leading females/males need to have some weaknesses. Not everyone is tough 24/7. Even those who are cold have weak spots, so try to show them - even if there are very few of them. I love supernatural stuff (werewolves, vampires, other creatures of the night). And horror is my favorite genre!! 10/27/09: edits/updates will have to wait for a little while. Over the weekend I kept getting fevers, though now they're gone, I still feel like shit. Don't know what's wrong, hoping by tomorrow I'll feel better. Sorry :/ updates/edits will come whenever I feel better. 10/23/09:Quick note here. I added the edited versions of the first four chapters of A Pack's Loyalties. Nothing too drastic has changed, just some tense problems, a few paragraph changes (a scene or two changed/added) and then some word changes. It isn't important to read or anything, I just really need these edits for myself, to help myself in getting out of writers block and being more serious about this story. Oh, also! Guess what? I got sudden inspiration earlier while I was doing edits, and I ended up getting two pages done of the tenth chapter of APL! Yes! Now, I know you're like, two? Only two? Well to me, two is better than none, which has been all I've been able to get out lately. Zero. So this new inspiration has left me happy :) Now, this weekend I'll be working on the rest of the edits, and also the rest of chapter 10 if I can. But there is one problem that may occur. I'm going out of town, and so I may not have time to work on both (though I am going to try my hardest!) Also, I'm sick. Just a bad cold, I think. 10/22/09:Hey everyone! Just wanted to let you know that I am still alive. lol. And no, I don't have writers block. Well, I did have it with A Pack Loyalties and that's why it's taken me so long to even make the effort to edit the chapters and start on chapter 10. But don't worry, today I opened up my doc on my computer that has all the chapters and I'm going over it again. Making small edits. So if you notice things suddenly change in the next few days then it's because I've uploaded the very small edited chapter ;) Mainly, what's being fixed, is tense problems. But I'm also using what some of my reviewers have told me as aid in fixing other things (example: scenes that are jumpy, quick, not as detailed, out of character, and unbelievable (to me mostly lol)) -sigh- I just feel like I can't continue on with this story unless I fix some of the mistakes. But no worries, I'm trying my hardest to get a chapter out soon. I miss this story SO much! Now, The Pack's Baby is still going to be updated but it will take possibly a week? Maybe a week and a half. I have three pages written but I've just been SO freaking busy that I haven't had any time to write. And right now I'm trying to get edits done for A Pack's Loyalties before I even think of finishing Chapter five of The Pack's Baby. Maybe. It all just depends on time, really. With that said, I want to let anyone know that the reason why I haven't not yet replied to reviews is because I'm going to on the top of the chapter (both APL and TPB) so please don't think I've forgotten you! Last thing now. I'm going to be setting up a Poll and I'll mention it when I update so I can get people to vote since I REALLY need to know. It's going to be on whether or not you're fine with me changing the rating to A Pack's Loyalties to 'T'? I just don't see Raine doing anything that would cause a 'M' rating and so I feel a 'T' rating would be more likely. I just can't picture Raine having sex or even doing things that are more than kissing with her being so young and inexperienced and just, well, her character just doesn't seem like someone who would do that yet. But it is up to you, I can't promise that if I don't change it, that there will still be sexual content that would cause an 'M' rating, but I don't want to lose readers because of the change. The only thing I will have to make sure is that I give a warning beforehand, for the cussing or any violence before the chapter if it does end up a 'T' in rating. Please vote!! I really need to know soon (like at least a little after I post the new chapter, whenever it is finished and uploaded of course). 07/26/09: I just want to inform you that the chances of chapter 10 coming out this month, and possibly even next month are very slim. I had originally started rereading the chapters I have now posted (saw so many mistakes, gah) and I had only reached chapter four before I had to stop. I was planning on reading all 9 chapters then going over my outline (possibly make edits on that) and hope that chapter 10 would be easier to write if I did all that. BUT, I did not take into account that something drastic would happen. My mom is at this moment of time, in the hospital. She had open heart surgery and I'll be busy (stressed, worried, and so on) for the next four to six weeks. It takes that amount of time before she'll fully recover (at least that's what my dad told me) and then she can go back to work. Me and my sisters will be helping her in the mean time since she is unable to do a whole lot during recovery. So, I am sorry that I hadn't thought to get my act together and do what needed to be done months ago, but there is no possible way that I'll be able to have the time to do all that needs to be done in order to get over my writers block and finish a chapter soon. I will still try to see if I can fit the time in between hospital visits, and times when she's asleep when she does come home, but I can't make any promises. I feel really bad about making you guys wait, so I thought it would be fair and right if I told you why you may not expect anything for some time. But even though I do feel bad, I know that my mom is WAY more important than a story, and she will come first. Other than that, there's not much to say. The surgery had no complications, and they just took a tube out today. She's been resting as much as she can (in severe pain, unfortunately) but the good thing is she's lucky we got her to the hospital before she could have had a heart attack. Sorry again. I'll keep you informed of my progress (whether or not I do find the time to finish soon). Story One: A Pack's Loyalties: I was thrust into a world of werewolves when my sister and I were attacked one night. Now, not only is she on the bad side, while I’m on the good, but I may or may not have a thing for my cold, emotionless Alpha leader. Rated M: for violence, language, and sexual content Estimated Chapters: Between 20 and 30 Status: In progress Pack status, name, and age. Pack #1: Alpha- Hayden Quinn (26) Beta- Avery Young (22) Omega- Emery Gray (16) Others (middle-rank)- Jack Gray (18), Preston Walker (18), Gavin Kerr (17), Catalina Moore (23) Pups- Sophie Moore (16), Raine Lynch (15 going on 16) Pack #2: Alpha- Damon Ward (28) Beta- Dominic Gray (25) Omega- Bram Green (16) Others (middle-rank)- Neysa Miller (25), Luke Collins (19), Josh Green (21), Oliver White (21), Josh Murphy (24) Pups- Skylar Lynch (18) Pictures that I've drawn of my characters, and fan-art of other stories characters that I've drawn are on this site below. Please, check it out and leave feedback :) Raine Lynch, Gavin Kerr, Sophie Moore, and fanart of Jibriel from Boy Bride, Steven from Blind Yourself: http://xamitiousxdreamrx.deviantart.com/ Story Two (One-shot): The Bloody Raccoon: A boy who’s excluded from playing with the neighborhood kids decides to create a masterpiece, something they’d never think to do in order to be accepted in by the group. But what happens when someone encounters him a little too soon? Rated M: for gruesome scenes Status: Complete My sister read one of my other stories, 'To Kill a Unicorn', and asked if I could write another story similar, but dealing with raccoons. It took me some time to come up with something, and although it's short, it surprisingly flowed freely. It is a morbid story, that may be a little too sick. But I found that I liked writing it (not because of the gruesome stuff), but because of the main character's self. He's a boy, but he's troubled and certain things play into making him that way, and that is why he does what he did. It's all psychological in a sense (but I'm not a pro with that stuff so it might be inconsistent). Please tell me what you think though, I'd love to here your opinions on what you thought of it. Story Three: Escaping the Dark: I woke from darkness, my eyes finally free to see the light, but with that came no memories, only confusion, and a Goth boy who wouldn’t take his eyes or hands off me. MM, Slash. Rated M: for language, some violence and sexual content Estimated Chapters: 20?or so Status: On hold Story Four: The Pack's Baby: Having been considered the ‘baby’ of the pack, Colby wanted nothing more than to prove himself. But what happens when he gets caught up in a mess that might just make things much worse for him and his pack? M/M, Slash. Rated M: for Anal, D/s, HJ, Oral, M/M Estimated Chapters: don't know ;) Status: In-progress | |||||||
1. The Pack's Baby » reviewsSLASH. Having been considered the ‘baby’ of the pack, Colby wanted nothing more than to prove himself. But what happens when he gets caught up in a mess that might just make things much worse for him and his pack? M/MRomance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 19,392 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 9-23-09 - Published: 9-13-092. A Pack's Loyalties » reviewsI was thrust into a world of werewolves when my sister and I were attacked one night. Now not only is she on the bad side, while I’m on the good, but I may or may not have a thing for my cold, emotionless Alpha leader. M/f: violence, language & sex.Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 57,901 - Reviews: 165 - Updated: 7-26-09 - Published: 2-7-093. Escaping the Dark reviewsI woke from darkness, my eyes finally free to see the light, but with that came no memories, only confusion, and a Goth boy who wouldn’t take his eyes or hands off me. MM, Slash.Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,674 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-22-09 - Published: 6-22-094. The Bloody Raccoon reviewsOneshot. A boy who’s excluded from playing with the neighborhood kids decides to create a masterpiece, something they’d never think to do in order to be accepted in by the group. But what happens when someone encounters him a little too soon?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,277 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-12-09 - Published: 4-12-09