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Author has written 38 stories for Nature, Romance, Love, Life, Young Adult, Horror, and General. //Basic Knowledge// Name: Kaylen Phary //Contact Information// Email: Falling.Snow@live.com //Advanced Knowledge// I'm not the best writer on the block I'll tell you that. I have read quite a few books though. I love reading and thus love to review stories. Sadly though, in my search for good stories, I have come across many...(let's just be honest here) horrible stories. Some worse then others. Now, no one likes to read a bad story, so I review. I try to be nice about it but be honest still. I think that's important. Of course, when I review I leave constructive criticism and compliments. Often people have good story ideas but their writing (or lack of) ruins the story. I try to help people get better by offering advice. Many people claim now that "constructive criticism" or "advice" is a form of flaming someone. It is not. It's just a way to offer suggestions to help one get better at writing. //Define// Flaming - the act of posting deliberately hostile messages on the Internet. A hostile and insulting interaction between Internet users. Constructive Criticism - or constructive analysis, is a compassionate attitude towards the person qualified for criticism. Having higher experience, gifts, respect, knowledge in specific field and being able to verbally convince at the same time, this person is intending to uplift the other person materially, morally, emotionally or spiritually. One-Shot - is a short or one chapter story. They are usually stories with a small or simply plot and very from 10 to 20 pages give or take a bit. //FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions)// Why do you flame writers? I've heard that you've started beta-reading people openly. Is this true? I really like your stories; can you help me with mine? Will you beta-read my story? What kind of fictions do you usually write? //Working On// Since I've recently come across some rare free time, I've decided to work on a few new stories. I'm currently working on a few one shots to put up. Just a few though some of which are a bit old mind you. -Romances- 123 Love | |||||||||||
1. To Move AwayIn my heart though I want to move and I want to be able to start a new. I want to move on and I feel, no, I know that once I get away from here, once I am free of this place completely I will be able to move on. That is what I want to believe.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 995 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 11-7-092. In this WorldI should hate the evil beings that lived in this world, but instead I hated all people.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,119 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-23-09 - Published: 9-23-093. Forgotten MemoriesThe mere way she thought tossed me over the edge. It enraged me or maybe it wasn’t me at all that she angered so much.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 908 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-30-09 - Published: 8-30-094. Ignorance reviewsAfter all the times I trusted him, after all the words I said to him, all the promises we made together, how could he do this to me? He broke my heart and now everything just seemed to wrong.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 908 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-25-09 - Published: 8-25-095. Whispers reviewsI forced myself to keep going, ignoring the pounding beat of my heart. Something kept pushing me on to continue. I paused for but a moment panting heavily, but something inside told me to keep going. It told me that I could continue.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 907 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-25-09 - Published: 8-25-096. Good or Bad reviewsI stared up into his cold, vibrant, green eyes. There were so many things about him that I still didn’t know, things that I still didn’t understand, though I already knew of my feelings for him. From the moment he first held me in his arms I knew...Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 908 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-24-09 - Published: 8-24-097. Willing to HelpShe’s dying away, alone and afraid, crying herself to sleep. How can people let her die like this? No, people want to be saved themselves when they need no help at all. They receive help but those who are begging and crying receive nothing at all.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,043 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-16-09 - Published: 7-16-098. Wild EyesEverything about her draws me in but pushes everyone else away. She only wants to be around people and things she interested in. I’ve learned that clear. The more time I spend with her and the more I learn about her the more it better that way.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 892 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-16-09 - Published: 7-16-099. Trophy reviewsI just don’t see what he sees in her. To me she doesn’t seem worth it. She doesn’t even notice the way he stares whenever she walks by. How can she be so blind to him like that?Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 858 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-14-09 - Published: 7-14-0910. Pieces I ForgotI ran my fingers through my hair and looked to the side as I did. I was thinking of her too much again. Her memory was like a ghost haunting me and my every move, watching me and reminding me...Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,032 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-14-09 - Published: 7-14-0911. Piece of YouYou promised me that you wouldn’t hurt me, that we would be together forever. I thought you meant forever. I believed that you were serious. How could you betray me? I trusted you with everything.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 832 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-13-09 - Published: 7-13-0912. Because I Love You reviewsI’ll do this all, because I love you.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 906 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-13-09 - Published: 7-13-0913. Wrong Falling reviewsThey say that all of hells creatures are evil but this girl; she doesn’t seem evil at all.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 821 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 7-12-0914. She's UnrealThe very way she played the game was like nothing I had ever seen. From the moment she walked through the front gates, her playful smile and teasing eyes. She was playing the game her way from the start I could tell.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 870 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 7-12-0915. Out of LuckWe’ve been lucky all this time, maybe it was about time that our luck ran out. It couldn’t have chosen a worse time. In this city, it’s the worst place for a set of unlucky pirates to be.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,089 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 7-12-0916. Breaking ArgumentsI try to be strong but I just can’t be anymore. I’m not some adult; I’m just a teenage girl. Not everything is meant to be my fault and I shouldn’t feel like it is.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 833 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 7-12-0917. DifferencesWe may look, act, talk, and sometimes even dress alike, but that never meant to say that we are the same person. We are in fact, two very different people.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 881 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 7-12-0918. Like Being Invisible reviewsThey can’t know someone they’ve never spoken to. They can’t understand someone they have never really met. It’s not possible but they wish it were. So I sit here alone listening to the lies about me...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 917 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-09 - Published: 7-11-0919. Snow AngelIt was the magic of an angel that is what I had seen those snowy, winter afternoons.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 826 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-11-09 - Published: 7-11-0920. Fozen GoodbyeI walked through the house looking for her desperately. If only I had realized how upset she had been, how lost she was.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 823 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-11-09 - Published: 7-11-0921. To Be NormalI am someone who is fake. I am an actress with no life outside your TV sets. This is how I am viewed by the public and the paparazzi. I can not change their views and I will not try. It will serve of no point but to get me more attention...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 830 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-9-09 - Published: 7-9-0922. To Feel AliveI've never felt so great. This feeling, there is nothing better. The music rushing through me, my heart racing, I've never been so happy.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 836 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-9-09 - Published: 7-9-0923. It was HerThinking back to when we first met I wonder if maybe I should have left then. I had no idea of what would happen only a few years later, her sudden interest in me and my family, her sudden curiosity that kept me on my toes, my constant worry...Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 875 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-9-09 - Published: 7-9-0924. The Silent GoodbyeI was a fool to fall in love with him. He was my target, the man I was supposed to be getting information about. That was all, this should have never turned into something more, but it did.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 822 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-9-09 - Published: 7-9-0925. RunawayI'm not going to stay here anymore. I'm going to go and enjoy my freedom even if it only lasts for a short time.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 880 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 7-8-0926. MonsterJust one mistake, she didn't understand and now she's done so much. She's just so afraid but she can't turn and walk away. No, this crime is far to horrible.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 909 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 7-8-0927. Thinking of YouHe's just a boy I met. A beautiful, wonderful, nice boy who I hope I'll meet again one day.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 949 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-7-09 - Published: 7-7-0928. Unknown reviewsShe just wanted to fit in. She didn't want to be alone anymore. Now she's not sure who she really is.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 862 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-7-09 - Published: 7-7-0929. Someone for MeI'm happy to wait even if it means waiting forever. I'm just looking for someone to love me for me, for someone to treat me like a queen.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 897 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-6-09 - Published: 6-6-0930. The Ultimate reviewsSome call is the red string of fate, others says it’s a string of destiny. I just think it’s a string that connects us to the people we love, to those we are meant to be with.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,247 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-09 - Published: 6-6-0931. Promise Me Lies reviewsHe gave her twelve red roses, eleven real and one fake. With them he said, "I will love you until the last one dies..."Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 940 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-5-09 - Published: 6-5-0932. There was this GirlShe was beautiful, wonderful, and completely amazing in my eyes. I wanted nothing more then to be with her, but she was a girl to whom I could never hold that close for soon we would have to part and I would become only a distant memory.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,013 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-5-09 - Published: 6-5-0933. My Crush on Him reviewsI had a crush, that's all it was. I just hoped that it would fade away again soon.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 805 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-5-09 - Published: 6-5-0934. The FearShe was just a normal girl who held deep fears inside her heart. She had to find a way to move past them, the fears that were now controlling her and everything she did.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,690 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-09 - Published: 5-31-0935. Love Note reviewsit was listed in a love note...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0936. CrushHe's just a silly boy who I've got a silly little crush on and I don't even know his name.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0937. Finding LightHe found me; he saved me. He saved me from my biggest mistake. He made time stand still. He made me change my mind. He turned the clocks back. It was because of him that I was able to become free. He was my light. He was my light in the darkness around meComplete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,580 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-10-09 - Published: 3-10-0938. The StormI stared up at the shining moon, The clouds were moving in, A soft breeze ran through the trees, My thoughts wondering aimlessly, I was in a world where I was left to fend for myself...Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 488 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-26-09 - Published: 2-26-09
