Hello everyone!

Well, what could I say? My name is Dóra, I'm from Hungary, Budapest.
The Crimson Emerald is not my story, but one of my friend's. Alexandra (her pen-name is Siri Jinn) allowed me to translate it. I'm doing it just for fun and because I study anglistics, it's a good practice for me, too. Please, review; it would help me a lot, maybe your criticism would improve my English, and of course we (Alexandra and me) want to know how you like the story.
I'm looking forward seeing the reviews :)