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Author has written 39 stories for General, Love, Biography, Religion, Friendship, School, Life, Sci-Fi, Romance, General, Supernatural, Fantasy, and Nature. Hi! Yes. My userID does make it seem like I'm not into this, but its all a lie! I do enjoy writing and all that (although I'm a moody writer, so sometimes I'm not into it) but this has been my ID for pretty much everything, cause the stuff I do in my free time is usually spurred by my boredom. Online I'm usually referred to as "L" though it is not the first letter of any of my initials (so I'll just let you guess at how it relates to my name). I'm not sure if I'll end up using this account, but I think it would be good to finally get some anonymous criticism. Also most of the people on this site probably LIKE reading and writing so that might also help with the feedback. If you'd like to see some of my lesser, unedited work, or just life updates (haha, I bet you wanna read those) visit my blog : http://boredenuff2dothis.blogspot.com/ Alright! Well that's all for now. My hands are basically frozen so typing is a pain and a half in the butt. I'm back! And I brought a quiz (see below). I'm up notoriously late - 4 AM but I'm working on it. And nobody's perfect. As of now I have posted what I consider my major works that really capture my style I think. If people like it I think I'll post more, for now I'm excited to even have stuff up. So please check it out! If you leave a comment on anything you can bet I'll check out your profile. Why? Cause I'm new! And why would that mean I'd check out your profile? Cause I'm desperate for friends! I'm a needy person what can I say? Right, so go read, and nighty! (I have no clue why I'm so happy late at night, I'll try to do a more normal time addition tomorrow, so you will have proof I'm not a prep.) Wow. So, I cannot believe that I've had this account for more than half a year. (I think I've had it that long anyway...) Basically, try not to judge me harshly on my older stuff. Trust me, I recognize that it was immature, and I personally find it painful to read. And soon I will probably reach the point of taking it down, but I feel like it deserves time on FictionPress, in case it did have any redeeming qualities, or if people saw places to critique and improve them. Anyway, I love my readers (shout-out to Contentious_Infatuation) and I hope you'll give my writing a fair chance. | |||||||||
1. Chasing reviewsInspired by Snow Patrol's Crack the Shutters. Basically about conformity, blah blah blah. Give it a read? Concrit pwns. I'm really running out of ways to say it. But that's okay.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 11-7-092. If You Must Cry reviewsA poem inspired by my Environmental Science class. I'm kind of embarrassed about it but some of my friends liked it. It's kind of religion and personal philosophy all mixed in as well. Concrit is actually the coolest thing ever.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 11-7-093. Feeling pissass drunkWishing I could be good enough for the one I love. My friend cannot believe me, because in her life another's opinion rules supreme. My thoughts. Concrit makes my life.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 11-7-094. UniQuEThe narrator is an ungrateful jerk, and you are the perfect lover. Still, you're stuck on the narrator who is jealous of your perfection, so she mocks you. Contains: jewel metaphors, love, friends, back-up plans, liars and someone special. And a bonus poeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-11-09 - Published: 10-11-095. DreamersWe are all dreamers, yet some are willing to go farther for their dreams then others. We admire them, but could we really be like them? Could we crush people just like us? Contains: Dreamers, artists, failures, guilt, melodrama, and Coraline references.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-9-09 - Published: 10-9-096. GretelA young girl meets a witch in the woods. Consumption ensues. This is Hansel and Gretel twisted in knots. Contains: cannibalism, overtones of rape, and abuse. Plus a bonus poem about injustice and insanity! Get excited!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-3-09 - Published: 10-3-097. Bruisy Me reviewsA poem about someone you love - not necessarily romantically - and how you'd feel if they rejected you. Includes vague sort of masochism and self-harm references, along with a very stupid and desperate narrator. Also: self-destruction, hope, and cutting.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-3-09 - Published: 10-3-098. Gorgeous, Gorgeous PassionDisjointed, late night thoughts on passion and failure and dread. Contains: metaphors using music and falling, metaphorical gorgeous person, depression, fear of: failure, the future, moving on, exhaustion, and questions about why people stick with things.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-27-09 - Published: 8-27-099. Like a Part of Myself reviewsMy God likes things violent. However, He was created in the image of myself, and what more is left after I destroy the beauty I admired? Contains: three things becoming one with realization, sunburns, sexual situation, abuse, and maniacal thoughts. R&R?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-26-09 - Published: 8-26-0910. Where Would I Have Been, Without You? reviewsShe is always there for me, even when she's dealing with bigger problems of her own. I never knew how to thank her. Contains: misguided angel allusions, mysterious real angels, bad path, caring friends, ends justify the means, desire for love, and regret.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-09 - Published: 8-26-0911. 11:11 reviewsA desperately romantic person makes love to a girl. The insecure girl flees. Contains: sex, independence, anonymous characters, desperation, hope, falling in love, fear, attempted connections, addictions, material versus emotional and wishes.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-9-09 - Published: 8-9-0912. Story Room reviewsReality and the dreamworld hardly ever coexist. But there are those times when you didn't go to sleep the night before and when you live in the dreamworld. Contains: ambitions, dream metaphors, made up words, novels, dread, all-nighters, dreams, nighttimeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-7-09 - Published: 8-7-0913. Sand reviewsThe things you love and the way you live blanket you in sand. Sometimes it scares you. Contains: fear, desperation, sand analogy, confusion, allusions, helplessness, metaphors, and an interpret it yourself style. Not my best work, but written on a train.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-3-09 - Published: 8-3-0914. Cities, Hunger Relief, Wild Things and Stories reviewsThree poems. Contain: realistic cities, juxtaposition of the city's personalities, youth, invincibility, hidden greatness, uniqueness, nature, lots of metaphors, and a brief "story" written so it sounds like the narrator acted differently than they claim.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-2-09 - Published: 8-2-0915. 9 Poems About Love, Cities, Barns, and Growing Up reviewsDeal with: changing twisted perspective, love grown old, love-induced changes, pollution, man-made hills of garbage, desperation, summer, youth, deception, a wooden post, taking a train, and trying to forget love. All are short and easy reads.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 490 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-19-09 - Published: 7-19-0916. Speaking SilenceA poem written in those perfect wee hours of the night, when words slip into place like magic. Deals with hypothetical alienation - being a member or part of a group but not really the same as others, memories, secrets, blindness, love, and giving up.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-5-09 - Published: 7-5-0917. Sorry reviewsWritten about the pride and faith my mother puts in me and the way they hurt every time I feel I've failed. Deals with: Failure, pride, love, average, pain, fear, and idealism with cracks.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-5-09 - Published: 7-5-0918. Fuckin' Religious reviews#1 Please don't let the title of this poem deter you from reading it. #2 It does allude to the Bible, but is NOT religious poetry. Contains: depression, pathetic people, friends, loved ones, abandonment, cheating/taking advantage of, and being incapable.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 287 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-11-09 - Published: 6-11-0919. Time Twister » reviewsForget everything you've ever heard about people who can travel through time. It's not useful. It's not pleasant. It may drive Geneva insane... And then what would become of the world? Contains: alienation, angst, time travel, and morality. Unfinished.Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,400 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-11-09 - Published: 6-1-0920. I Have Two Hundred Fifty One reviewsAfter a severe bout of depression, and I calmed down, this came along. Deals with: isolation, depression, love, ancestry, history, friends, fake people, lies, numbers, heartbreak, and in a way owing someone.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-09 - Published: 6-6-0921. H1N1 reviewsVague poem regarding swine flu! Mainly written in couplets it's vague enough to be considered loss of innocence or something equally entertaining. Contains: description of romanticized symptoms, people's reactions to it, and how it is forgotten so quicklyComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-1-09 - Published: 6-1-0922. Do You Remember? reviewsChild-hood friendships account for so little in high school, but seriously define who we are. Contains: Depression, embarrassment, cowardice, change, friendship, wonderment, observation, untrustworthy 2nd person narration, and lesbian/bisexual character.Complete - Biography - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-1-09 - Published: 6-1-0923. Did You Know: reviewsWhat separates humans from everything else? It's those college lined brains. Deals with: conformity, societal expectations, science, sarcasm and satire. It may not sound super fun but if you catch the ironic narration it's humorous.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-27-09 - Published: 5-27-0924. Losing Sensation reviewsIf before you fell in love, you were normal what happens when you're in love? Includes: losing your senses - physically, loosing your mind and rationality, insanity and terror of falling in love, and the things love blinds you to.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-26-09 - Published: 5-26-0925. Sunrise' and 'And The Voice Rings Out Over The Spe reviews1: Desperation, hopelessness, the past. 2: Apathy, the passage of time, and isolation. 2 Short poems I never thought I'd publish but I'm on a spree today, and after rereading them I thought they were kinda good. Do you? R&R concrit?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-25-09 - Published: 5-25-0926. metroVERY short and simple poem. People's circles of pain, ruining lives, love, clubs, and tears. Title and style inspired by Ezra Pound's "In A Station Of The Metro" and "Too Many Flowers” by fleur de l'est. Thanks!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-25-09 - Published: 5-25-0927. Tommy Boy reviewsInspired from the idea of abusing an imaginary friend, I came up with this. It didn't follow the plan, so now it's more of a story about friends, mental hospitals, love, being tied down, confusion, and knowing someone better than they know themselves.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-25-09 - Published: 5-25-0928. This Girl Loved an Addict reviewsA piece about all different types of users. Who wins between the addict who takes advantage and the girl who waits them out? Who is more stupid? Addiction. "Love." Death. I'm not particularly proud of this piece, but I haven't posted in a while.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 603 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-09 - Published: 5-23-0929. Fatal Beauties and Desperation reviewsEver been an out-and-proud, sexy lesbian, with girls -closeted and not- hanging off you? Ever been one of those girls? This is a dark version of Shane McCutcheon's life - which this was NOT based off of. M for some ideas/images too mature for kids.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-19-09 - Published: 5-19-0930. Thank You, Something Corporate reviewsInspired by "I Woke Up In A Car" this is the story of humanity and their obnoxious desires. Contains: materialism, sexism - because I feel it's told from the point of a man - love, eternity and it's effects, and the constant need for more.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-4-09 - Published: 5-4-0931. WolfRevolutionThe future of our society recorded by a mysterious narrator. Dark and sarcastic, THE GOVERNMENT is universal and "you" are as well. Probably inspired by 1984, political and mildly scifi. Currently not in progress. Comments could change that!Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,063 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0932. How Can You AskWhat will a girl with passions galore and no solid will choose? Based off of my own struggles of lacking willpower and drive, but trying to do so much, and being unable to achieve anything good. Influenced by depression and suicidal thoughts.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0933. 11 Excerpts of a Friendship, 2 Reflections reviewsAn autobiographical poem of friendship, love, ends and a hypothetical reflection on it all. Vague femslash or lesbian thoughts - one closeted girl's crush. Contains: happily ever afters, silent treatment, dating, moving, jealousy, and the motion of time.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 612 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0934. Hand Me A Veiw reviewsAdmittedly this is based off of Edna from "The Awakening", but that just means it had ties to feminism, birds and maybe some expectations that were a bit too high.Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0935. If I Were Invisible reviewsBasically a sudden outpouring of emotion when I got fed up with being overlooked and ignored. Anyway, it references those people who don't even appreciate how you hand your soul over to them. Includes: betrayal, injustice, insecurity and metaphors.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-25-09 - Published: 4-25-0936. There's Always A Tomorrow! reviewsIs it bad that I view religion this way? Just read, it's short .Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 4-24-0937. Oh Trying SummerA somewhat immature autobiographical piece I wrote in ninth grade. Deals with: friends, loosing friends, stubbornness, love, and apologies. Probably very relatableComplete - Biography - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,258 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 4-24-0938. Fade reviewsA lover lost, remembered. Reflections. Deals with: breakups, bitterness, tears, lasting effects, and is based off a lesbian relationship, so TECHNICALLY femslash.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 4-24-0939. Don't Laugh Sweetheart It's All Over, SoonDo you ever feel trapped in an endless circle of life? Do you feel like you're drifting, without a purpose? This is Caroline, and she is you. Maybe she's a little exaggerated. Includes vicious cycles, "love", homosexuality, swearing, thoughts of suicideComplete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,276 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 4-24-09
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