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| YourCritic |
Author has written 7 stories for Love, Life, Romance, Biography, and Supernatural. Okay guys. I am YourCritic If I review you, I will tell you the truth. You know why? People are too nice to writers on here. Sometimes the truth hurts, but it's for the best really. I never flame, I will try to nicely point out your mistakes and then try and tell you how to improve. If you don't want to take my advice fine, but don't ask for reviews if you don't want to get them. Thanks and have a nice day :) | |||||||
1. Bite the DustCeleste just got caught by vampires. Luckily she's got some tricks up her sleeves. Unluckily, so do they.Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,397 - Published: 7-4-112. Alone reviewsPick a word, any word, and write about it for up to twenty minutes straight. My word was 'alone' and here's what I came up with in ten minutes. Enjoy!Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-27-10 - Complete3. Stockholme Syndrome is NOT Sexy reviewsThe continual glorification of Stockholme Syndrome as a plot device/romance set piece drives me crazy. Here's what I have to say about it. Do you agree? Rating for my language getting carried away.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,159 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 12-14-10 - Complete4. Writing a Romance reviewsI have discovered various stereotypes in the average story on here, and here is my attempt to define them more fully. Please laugh, and don't be offended!Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 802 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-3-105. Failure reviewsOn beauty and acceptance of ourselves.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-16-09 - Complete6. Forbidden Fruit reviewsAll the images that come to mind with an applePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-16-09 - Complete
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