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Author has written 10 stories for General, General, Kids, Fantasy, Romance, and Life. I live in a small town in California. I really like essays about anything. My favorite essay is called Band-aid. I don't know who it's by, but I love it! I am writing on here because I just plain like writing, and I need critics. Note that all of my stories say "Rate brutally" I'm serious! Oh, and I always write one chapter stories. The only none one chapter story is my set of poetry. I am an avid writer/reader. However, I occasionally suck at writing. I can do a good edit though. | |||||||||||
1. The Beggar at My Gate reviewsJust something I wrote, review if you like it. Don't say "Go get someone to beta-read it!" I am getting someone already. Sanjeev is a beggar, I teach him how to write. But then disaster strikes. My story cannot be anymore than 500 words. Please critique!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 762 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-29-09 - Published: 11-29-092. Catalina MemoriesCatalina made my heart ache for home, but now I ache for Catalina!Kids - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 694 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-17-09 - Published: 10-17-093. SorrowJust free fallingComplete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 671 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-31-09 - Published: 8-31-094. Across the keys reviewsI want my solitudeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-09 - Published: 8-31-095. Moonlit Walks reviewsAs Jake and Chelsea wait for the power to come back, the events take an embarrassing turn.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 550 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-09 - Published: 8-31-096. Gothicish Poetry »I felt pretty depressed at times, and this where I vent. I probably won't update, but I might.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,091 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-18-09 - Published: 8-4-097. Human NatureThis is technically fiction, but based on a true story.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,463 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-18-09 - Published: 8-18-098. Whistle in the Willows reviewsThis is a short, descriptive paragraph that is just plain pretty. It makes a pretty quick read.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-09 - Published: 8-4-099. Smirk!Read the story of inspiring an artist with the world all around. There is a bit in French. Don't kill me if the translations are wrong. This is a sample translation: Oui! YesComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,327 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-4-09 - Published: 8-4-0910. The Proud HalfTailed CatRead the heartwarming story of a cat. And a fire. Oh boy. This is a one-shot, so I won't be changing it. Rated K plus for descriptive fire.Complete - Kids - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,466 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-4-09 - Published: 8-4-09