Aiden Payne
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since: 08-14-09, id: 684328, Profile Updated: 08-17-09
country: USA
Author has written 48 stories for Love, Song, General, Life, and Friendship.

My name is Max, but when it comes to my writings I prefer Aiden Payne. I've done writings for a long time, and I dislike calling them "poems". Not because of insecurity or anything, but because "poems" don't feel as personalized as "writings". I wear my heart on my sleeve and there's very little I hide in my writing, hence why they have a lot of depth and it'll be easy to learn about me simply by reading. I love hearing other people's opinions, regardless of good or bad. I love learning about people so I enjoy reading other works as well as I feel it helps improve my own. I am straight-edge (don't drink, never have. don't do drugs, never have. don't smoke, never have. don't believe in sex outside of relationships) and I do flaunt it. I have had a lot of loves and a lot of heartbreaks and almost everyone around me labels me as a "dark romantic". I hope you enjoy my writings and all reviews are greatly appreciated! :)


1. Destiny reviews
when you've grown so tired of life, that you just let it go where it wants to take you.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-23-11 - Complete
2. Right time, wrong goodbye reviews
A cigarette box lies in a cup-holder, reminding one of a best friendship he'd lost due to the uncontrollable changes of life.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 459 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-9-11 - Complete
3. Permafrost reviews
I gave you my heart, and you returned it in permafrost." - The loss of a soulmate, or rather it's lingering effect reflected upon in a blizzard. R&R! :
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-30-10 - Complete
4. Just Friends reviews
The snow falls along the streets, and I'm empathizing with snowflakes." - A friendship dancing with the borderline of romance. Reviews appreciated! :
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 390 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-14-10 - Complete
5. Shoes to Unfill reviews
Even soulmates can only take so much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 680 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-14-10 - Complete
6. The Gift reviews
A story of a person who let go of the greatest friend he'd ever had, leaving her hating him. They meet 4 years later and he tries to convey what she meant to him, and that he did it to not hold her down.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-10 - Complete
7. The Blue Snake reviews
-"With every time you blink, each tear that falls... It'll be one less part of me, that you'll be able to recall." - This is up for interpretation. If readers wish to know the story you may ask. R&R.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-4-10 - Complete
8. finite
I'm unsure how to handle the inevitable, all I know is I don't wish to ever let go" - about a young relationship that's inevitably going to end. R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Published: 8-4-10 - Complete
9. Erika reviews
a poem written about how I got the Aiden Payne pen name, and what she meant to me. It's a little tribute to how I began writing and a little ode to the love that helped me find my identity.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-1-10 - Complete
10. My Tainted Love reviews
Don't know why I'm so addicted to the taste of this tainted love." - A poem about a tumultuous relationship that love keeps bonded. Read & Review! Caution - strong language
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 610 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-18-10 - Complete
11. Extinguished reviews
red flames of romance extinguished to a whisp of frost.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-5-10 - Complete
12. Ice reviews
Just a love poem using ice as it's theme.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 394 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-2-10 - Complete
13. Thoughts in Snow reviews
and now I stand and see... my heart's complete just having me."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-1-10 - Complete
14. Love in Snowflakes reviews
A winter scene is what's needed for feelings that words cannot begin to elaborate upon.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 391 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-25-09 - Complete
15. Too Much reviews
The innermost feelings of a man with the weight of the world on his shoulders, the lonely soul on the lonely road... As he carries on refusing to give up through an utmost challenging world.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 448 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-23-09 - Complete
16. White Horse, Dark Knight reviews
Although I may never get to be your white horse, I shall always be your dark knight.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-23-09 - Complete
17. Amber's Song reviews
something written today to a girl of whom I've shared a long, long history with. It's been 4 years since the flame was born and it still just barely exists between us today. Straight from the heart.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-14-09 - Complete
18. Forever reviews
we travel along side by side down the road of an endless chase / forever to be yours, forever to be mine" - check it out and please review! all reviews are very appreciated!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-6-09 - Complete
19. The Other Half reviews
A girl that was meant to be based upon chemistry... but alas I never learned to make the right choice, thus she's kept alongside as just my other half.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-1-09
20. SelfSerenity reviews
it's in a bliss of a night like this that one meets their identity... the beautiful dance of life, conscience, and instinct
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-22-09 - Complete
21. Adventureland reviews
A writing that bursted to life after watching the movie "Adventureland" and the emotions drawn out after relating to it. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-1-09
22. Memorable Mistakes reviews
When a guy is used, has been played, or makes the wrong choice but found it at the time or the experience while going through to be at least worth remembering, thus earning the label of a memorable mistake. Open to interpretation.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 400 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-29-09
23. Summers End reviews
A writing that came to life as I was at a beach bar, noticing the college people celebrating their last night together of the summer. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-29-09
24. Guide to Grasp reviews
something I wrote just about my generalized perception of life. Check it out and please review! :
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 404 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-27-09
25. This is The End reviews
When you find out that a close relationship was a lie. This is probably the most raw emotional writing I have.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-24-09
26. Conquering Demons reviews
Dark romance. A true story of a friendship that lead to something so much more. Girl desperately wanted to escape alcoholism but had no one really cared to help her until I came along. One of my best gf's as well. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-23-09
27. See How I See reviews
This was about a girl who tried getting me to see things the way she saw them, and just wouldn't accept that I see things differently.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-23-09
28. Raindrop and a Falling Star reviews
the raindrop travels with it's kin, while the shooting star forever travels in solitude. This writing is full of romantic symbolism and one of my favorites, check out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-23-09
29. Memories reviews
We're only as good as the memories we make"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-23-09
30. Two to one reviews
the stories we'll have will be too close to too good to be true, and if anyone were to complete me, I'd wish for it to be you"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-22-09
31. Need reviews
from heartbreak to love and closure.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-09
32. Glass Barrier reviews
You know it's meant to be as does she, but some loves are left to be dreams due to past memories.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-09
33. Rain Tears reviews
An acceptance that sometimes pain is just a part of love, and sometimes can be a good thing for it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-09
34. For Your Sake reviews
Leaving someone's life after a break-up because you can see how much the pain is affecting them. This is my favorite work, check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-20-09
35. One More Try reviews
When you wanna tell someone how head over heels you are for them, but you just can't, but that doesn't keep you from trying again.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-09
36. A Helping Hand reviews
She's slipping into a downward spiral, and trusts no guy... But you can trust me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-19-09
37. Grateful Chemistry reviews
A love that you feel is so great that it's beyond what you deserve, yet you're so grateful to have it as it brightens your life unbelievably and keeps you together. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09
38. Lucky reviews
I suppose with all that's been taken, you've left me just lucky to be alive. Check it out & please review! :
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-19-09
39. prove me wrong reviews
a life lived of come and goes, will she be the one to break the trend? Based on a true story of me and a best friend.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 394 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-18-09
40. An Enduring Love reviews
When alcoholism changes a lover to an endurance in marriage.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-18-09
41. Lonely's Unique reviews
What a history of come & goes leads you to believe.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-18-09
42. Love's Disease reviews
They say romance can be lethal, the first symptom leaves your heart sore. If your love is a disease, I hope it puts me in the morgue" Interpret as you wish, please review! :
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-18-09
43. Hey Girly reviews
my dreams of a perfect romance. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-17-09
44. You Never Know What You Can See reviews
just something I wrote while sitting outside of a starbucks one day about how people look normal, but everyone has their own unique story.. You just never think to see it.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-17-09
45. Stepping Aside reviews
Another about the best friend I dated. After we broke up she changed for the worst and I was grateful I didn't stay along to be pulled down with her, even if I did sacrifice another girls feelings to be with her. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-17-09
46. you are my heart reviews
another one about my best friend D eanna I've been in love with for 8 years, but she has no feelings to return. This elaborates how I feel about her and those feelings even though I've had other gf's. Check out and please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-17-09
47. A StraightEdge Anthem reviews
Something I wrote towards my pride of being straight-edge based on a lot of experiences I've encountered and why it's good to life a life without drugs, alochol, and smoking. Check it out and please review!
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 471 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-16-09
48. eyes open, eyes closed reviews
When you lose someone and throughout the day you're fine, but once you close your eyes they're all that's on your mind.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-16-09