Lyllyth
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since: 08-16-09, id: 684698, Profile Updated: 12-08-09
country: USA
Author has written 27 stories for Nature, Fantasy, Love, Humor, General, Supernatural, General, Horror, and Life.

Well hello there! Thanks for taking the time to read my profile. Here's a bit about me:

I love to read. "Love", as in "I do it during every second of my free time".

I also like to write, but unfortunately, I don't do that quite as often. Most of what I post here will be poetry, because I can never seem to finish anything else.

I'm a perfectionist and that often gets in the way of my creativity. Possibly one of the reasons why I can't finish anything.

Favorite colors: Black and purple. Black tends to make up most of my wardrobe.

Favorite holiday: Halloween, of course! I love dressing up of any sort: whether it's putting on a dress and make-up for a formal party, impersonating a character for a convention or book release, or cloaking myself up for a night of trick-or-treating! (You're never too old to dress up for Halloween and don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise.)

Favorite book: Don't even ask, there's way too many of them

Favorite genre: romance. Particularly supernatural romance. I love vampires, werewolves, shape-shifters, witches, demons, fairies, and anything else you can dream up. But I also like romances about humans.

You'll see that I tend to write a lot of romantic poetry. I'm easily influenced by what I read and that will be apparent in some of my poems.

I also like the classics. I'm a big fan of Shakespeare!

Just putting this out there: Quite a few pieces of my writing deal with Christian themes, such as sin, Hell, and the Devil. But I'm actually Jewish (though quite interested in other religions) and don't fully believe in those concepts. Despite this, or perhaps because of this, I find them fascinating subjects to write about.

I'm a relatively new author here and I would love your feedback on how I can improve my writing. Feel free to include constructive criticism in your reviews. But don't forget to be nice about it!

Also, if you're looking for a cool place to hang out and have discussions about pretty much anything and everything, com stop by The Enlightened Mind Cafe


1. Polymorph reviews
I don't actually remember what I was thinking about when I wrote this. sorry about the format again, I can't get it to upload right
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-23-11
2. Mab reviews
An ode to the fairy Queen of Dreams. Sorry about the format, FP isn't being nice to me today. Hopefully I'll come back and fix that
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-23-11
3. The Race reviews
A post-zombie-apocalypse story. I hope you like the ending. Reviews welcome, please help me edit.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-14-10
4. Doppelganger reviews
When I first gaze into the glass, I see/ A person peering back who isn't me... Iambic pentameter rhyming couplets
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-24-10
5. Together Forever reviews
Some love transcends all boundaries. But don't expect a typical happy ending for this pair. A really really short one-shot with a twist ending. Thoughts are welcome.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 368 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-1-10
6. Hello? reviews
Your silence pains me/Every note of it's a scar./I keep on talking/As if we still are what we were./But you don't answer/So the conversation can't get far.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-1-10
7. The Price reviews
Lilah was settling in for an quiet evening, when she is interrupted by an unexpected guest. He's come to collect her debt.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 579 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-5-09
8. The Blue Girl reviews
A short ghost story written in the Halloween mood. A kind-hearted college boy finds a strange girl on the side of the road. First draft of the story right now, editing and advice would be appreciated. Please read and review.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,983 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-5-09
9. On the Edge reviews
Standing on the edge, ready to jump.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-19-09
10. A Prayer for Healing reviews
Written for my grandfather who was just diagnosed with lung cancer, for young girl also with cancer, and for anyone else in need of healing. Very short poem.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-6-09 - Complete
11. Unrequited reviews
A poem of unrequited love. I dug this up the other day, it must have been written at least three years ago. Despite its slightly underdeveloped writing style, it's surprisingly good for one of my earlier pieces.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-1-09
12. Devotion reviews
Revised-sorry for the serious typos. A short story in which a lonely girl believes her classmate is God on earth and looks to him to cleanse her of her sins. Fresh new piece of writing. Still a little rough. Please review and let me know what to fix.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 945 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-30-09
13. Giving In reviews
Giving in to that beautiful lie. Even when you know it's wrong. One of my older poems that i just discovered and felt like putting up.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-29-09
14. Paradise by Moonlight reviews
Describing the allure of a safe haven for a forbidden love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-19-09
15. The Crash reviews
Don't let that stress build up. It's not healthy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09
16. Question reviews
I was inspired after reading a very profound short story by Nathaniel Hawthorne: "Young Goodman Brown". It gives you something to think about. To understand the poem more fully, read the story.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-19-09
17. Slipping reviews
Sometimes you just can't hold on any longer.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-19-09
18. Angel of Death reviews
A poem told partly in dialogue. A vampire seduces his victim.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 408 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09
19. Choice reviews
Quick vampire psuedo-one-shot. Originally written as an exercise for a story I eventually abandoned. I don't really intend on adding onto it unless great inspiration strikes, but feel free to comment and critique
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 527 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-19-09
20. Guilt reviews
Not quite my best piece, and I'm aware there are some awkward parts. It was an exercise into a specific emotion.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09
21. Curiosity reviews
Not really sure how to classify or describe this poem. It's about giving in to your imagination.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-19-09
22. Writer's block reviews
This is what happens when you sit down for a four hour plane ride and promise yourself that you'll have at least written something by the time you land. I'm sure you can relate.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-19-09
23. Withou You reviews
A poem of lost love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-19-09
24. My Flower reviews
A love poem written from a male's perspective as he longs to comfort the object of his affection.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-19-09
25. Fantasy reviews
A very short and rather mysterious poem written late one night. Open for interpretation.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-19-09
26. Unfound Glory reviews
Epic poem sort of that tells the tragic story of a knight returning home.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 611 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09
27. Night reviews
Short poem about the advent of nighttime.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-09