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since: 09-11-09, id: 688701, Profile Updated: 11-03-09
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Hey peoples, what to put here, is the question for the week...month...year?

If it isn't to obvious, I love writing therefor the whole purpose of me getting on this site. I love reviews, so definetly leave them, but dont just tell me you like it or you hate it. Tell me what I can improve on! Come on people isn't it obvious that writers...or is it just me...like to know what you think other than that you love it or hate it?! I love doing double stories, so if you ever need someone to do one with just leave me a PM and I will definetly do it. If you want to email me here are a couple of my email iaintthatgirl93245@yahoo.com CMSspiritgirl97@gmail.com and typicalbndgk@hotmail.com . BTW peoples I highly recomend checking out bleedingvalentines stories. They are all very interesting, and probably the best ones on this site.Yes you read that right BLEEDINGVALETINE in all lower case without the bold underline and italics...


My Friends brother sent me this, and I think its sweet so here:
We guys don't care if you talk to other guys.

We don't care if you're friends with other guys.

But when you're sitting next to us, and some random guy walks into the room and you jump up and tackle him, without even introducing us, yeah, it pisses us off.

It doesn't help if you sit there and talk to him for ten minutes without even acknowledging the fact that we're still there.

We don't care if a guy calls>OR TEXTS but at 2 in the morning we do get a little concerned.

Nothing is that important at 2 a.m.

That it can't wait till the morning.

Also, when we tell you you're pretty/ beautiful/ gorgeous/
cute/ stunning, we freaking mean it.

Don't tell us we're wrong.

We'll stop trying to convince you.

The sexiest thing about a girl is confidence.

Yeah, you can quote me.

Don't be mad when we hold the door open.

Take Advantage of the mood im in.

Let us pay for you!
dont 'feel bad'
We enjoy doing it.

It's expected.

Smile and say 'thank you.

Kiss us when no one's watching.

If you kiss us when you know somebody's looking, we'll be more impressed.

You don't have to get dressed up for us.

If we're going out with you in the first place, you don't have to feel the need to
wear the shortest skirt you have or put on every kind of makeup you own.

We like you for who you are and not what you are.

Whatever happened to the word 'handsome'/'beautiful'
i'd be utterly stunned by a girl who greeted me
with 'Hey handsome!' instead of 'Hey baby/ stud/ cutie/ sexy' or whatever else you can think of.

On the other hand im not sayin i woulndnt like it ether ; )

Girls, I cannot stress this enough: if you aren't being treated right by a guy, dont wait for him to change!!

Ditch his sorry butt, disgrace to the male population
and find someone who will treat you with utter respect
Someone who will honor your morals.

Someone who will make you smile when you're at your lowest.

Someone who will care for you even when you make mistakes.

Someone who will love you, no matter how bad you make them feel.

Someone who will stop what they're doing just to look you in the eyes...and say 'i love you' ..and actually mean it.

Give the nice guys a chance.

Guys repost this if you agree.

Girls repost this if you think it's cute.

Every Guy who isn't a jerk will agree with this,
so we hope that all the girls that read this will repost this.

ADVICE:

Holding Hands
Girls :If you want to hold his hand, gently bump into it a couple of
times.

Movies
Girls : During a movie, if he puts his arm around you, tilt your head on his shoulder
Guys : Lift her chin up and kiss her.

Loving each other
Guys : When she tells you she loves you, look deep into her eyes, give her a peck on the lips, and tell her you love her
too...

Writing Challenge!

Rules:
1)Has to be a one-shot(you can finish it after the contest)


2)You have to make up one completely random character

3)One character has to be in a band.

4)Has to be at least 1,555 words long maximum is 10,000

5)Main characters have to have odd but cool names/nicknames

6)Must inlcude some embarassing moment

7)Romance or Drama should be the theme of it

8)have a theme song for it(its up to you whether you include the lyrics)

9)after i have 15 submission voting will begin(a poll on my page)
10)each author may submit 2 stories

11)Once you finish the story, post it on the community

Mommy...Dylan brought a gun to school,

He told his friends that it was cool,

And when he pulled the trigger back,

It shot with a great, huge crack.

Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,

I went to church , I got straight A's, I even got the gold!

When I went to school that day,

I never said good-bye.

I'm sorry that I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry.

When dylan shot the gun, he hit me and many others,

And all because dylan , got the gun from his brother.

Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,

And please tell my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.

And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now, And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now

And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best

Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest

Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,

And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass

Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one, though, deserves this.

But mommy, it's not fair, I left without a kiss.

But mommy, it's not fair, I left without a kiss.

I think I even saw one doctor, trying not to cry.

Mommy, I'm slowly dying, with a bullet in my head,

But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the dead

When I heard that great, big crack, I ran as fast as I could

please listen to me if you would,

I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new

I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,

I wanted to be an saint, I really wanted to live.

But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late, Mommy, tell my boyfriend I'm sorry I have to cancel the date. I love you Mommy, I always have, I know you know its true

And Mommy all I need to say is, "Mommy, I love you"

In Memory of The Columbine & Virginia Tech
Students Who Were Lost i customized it to fit the columbine and cassie bernall

Please if you would,
Don't smash this on the ground.

If you pass this on,

Maybe people will cry,

Just keep this in your heart,

For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye".


Child abuse, MAKE IT STOP!

SAD:

This story is about a little girl that was abused. If you care about it, copy and paste it to your profile.

My name is sarah I am but three, My eyes are swollen I cannot see,

I must be stupid I must be bad, What else could have made My daddy so mad?

I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly, Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me.

I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong Or else I'm locked up All the day long

When I awake I'm all alone The house is dark My folks aren't home.

When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice, So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight

Don't make a sound! I just heard a car My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar.

I hear him curse My name he calls I press myself Against the wall.

I try and hide From his evil eyes I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry.

He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words, He says its my fault That he suffers at work.

He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more, I finally get free And I run for the door.

He's already locked it And I start to bawl, He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall.

I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken, And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken.

"I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate.

The hurt and the pain Again and again Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end!

And he finally stops And heads for the door, While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor.

My name is Sarah And I am but three, Tonight my daddy, Murdered me.

TRUE LOVE:

A girl and a guy were speeding over 100mph on a motorcycle.

Girl:Slow down, i'm scared.

Guy:No, this is fun.

Girl:No it's not, please, it's so scary.

Guy: Then tell me you love me.

Girl:I love you, slow down.

Guy:Now give me a big hug

She gave him a big hug

Guy:Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself, It's really bothering me.

The next day in the newspaper, a motorcycle crashed into a building due to brake failure. Two people

were in the crash, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road the guy realized that the

breaks weren't working, but he didn't want the girl to know. Instead, he had her hug him and tell him she

loves him one last time. Then he had her put his helmet on so that she would live, even if it meant that he

I want to share three stories with you,two will show how sometime things don't always go for the worst.The last will show you need to be acreful!

Story one.Across the Seas:
A guy was driving down the road.He saw someone on the side of the road just walking.Normally

He didn't just pick up strangers,but he figured why not?So he picked the guy up

and the guy said "Do you believe in god?" the guy driving answered yes

The stranger once again spoke saying "Are you saved?"

The driver said "No,Not yet.But I will Probably get saved awhile down the road".

The stranger said "yOU NEED TO GET SAVED YOUR TIME IS COMING.

by now the driver thought he picked up some wacky preacher.

"I will probably get saved later down the road,my whole family is religious."

The stranger spoke for the last time saying "No you need to get saved soon.You time is coming and in order to save your family you must be saved."

The driver turned to his left,when he looked back at the starnger,he wasn't there.The door was still locked

the windows still up,but the stranger was gone.

That sunday the guy got saved.

A week later his wife and kids got into a car accident.The doctor called him saying that his family would die.

The guy called his preacher asking him to get a prayer group and pray for his family.

The preacher did as asked and prayed around the clock.

Not even 23 hours later the guys whole family was walking out.

California story 1:
like the last the guy didn't normally pick people up off the side of the road,but

when he saw this guy he thought was a hippy he picked him up.

Now the stranger was wearing a robe,sandals,had blonde hair and a beard and mustache.

The driver had been sick for awhile when he went to the doctor he found out he had something seriously wrong with him.

"Do you believe in Jesus?"the stranger asked.

"Yes,with all my heart."The driver replied simply.

"Then why don't you think he could heal you?"once again the stranger spoke.

"I do,I just think he is to busy right now to think about me."

The stranger reached over putting his hand on the guys shoulder.The guy felt something strong go through him

Whe he looked at the strangers hand there was a whole there.

"Remember I am never far away."The stranger spoke for the last time

Clifornia story 2:

Another guy was traveling down the same road as the guy before him.

HE to stopped to pick up a stranger.

Now there was nothing that put this stranger out making him look dangerous.

But this man was hacked to peices.

They found the pieces of his body on the side of the road next day.

Do you believe these stories are true?

No:Get over it because they are!

Yes:Good.

Now how do you know if you should pick a stranger up?All three men went on impulse.2 of the men are still alive the

last was murdered.

I am not saying that everyone on the side of the road is dangerous but I am saying be very careful.The

best bet would be dont act on impulse.

dont pick strangers up.If you know them thats different if not and you still pick them up pray to god they are the

good and not the evil.Post this on your page if you believe this is all true.

Why do parents teach that violence is not the way when america won their freedom from a war?

Why are we racist if a man gave his life to just save us from that?

Why do they always want us to give money to those in africa for the poor when we have poor kids here?

Why are people so stupid that they insult others to make them feel good?

Have you read twilight?No?Go shoot yourself in the foot!

Just because Jasper Isnt real.Dont you dare say he aint mine!unless you agree?

I love:
Twilight'

God

Nightworld series

Vampires

I hate:

Jake

Edward

werewolves

I believe:

God is real

people are too uptight

people are crazy

you have to hate to learn to love

I asked god lat night to save a man who had a heart condition.He is very close to my cousin but I dont know him.

Does that change anything?Heck no!

He is still in pain!

I went to church on sunday and people were requesting for help for migrains,cancer,death I asked god to let me see my brother again

does that make my prayer any less important?Maybe

Does that mean god wont listen?No!

God will listen to your prayers no matter what they are simply because he cares.Every prayer is different every prayer is important dont let other make you think your prayer isnt important!

R.I.P. Stacey 3/25/09

My bestfriend stacey was raped,and murdered.You might not

know her,but still copy and paste this if not to show her respect, then to show any one who has been asaulted!

My family is full of veterans.

Am I proud?Yes!

Does it make me better?No

Can I change the world?Heck yes!

post this on your profile if your family is veterans or you know a veteran.but only post it if you agree with what it says.

What a Boyfriend SHOULD do (A real boyfriend):
When she walks away from you mad, follow her
When she stare's at your mouth, Kiss her
When she pushes you or hit's you, Grab her and dont let go
When she start's cussing at you, Kiss her and tell her you love her
When she's quiet, Ask her what's wrong
When she ignore's you, Give her your attention
When she pull's away, Pull her back
When you see her at her worst, Tell her she's beautiful
When you see her start crying, Just hold her and dont say a word
When you see her walking, Sneak up and hug her waist from behind
When she's scared, Protect her
When she lay's her head on your shoulder, Tilt her head up and kiss her
When she steal's your favorite hat, Let her keep it and sleep with it for a night
When she tease's you, Tease her back and make her laugh
When she doesnt answer for a long time, reassure her that everything is okay
When she look's at you with doubt, Back yourself up
When she say's that she like's you, she really does more than you could understand
When she grab's at your hands, Hold her's and play with her fingers
When she bump's into you, bump into her back and make her laugh
When she tell's you a secret, keep it safe and untold
When she looks at you in your eyes, don't look away until she does
When she misses you, she's hurting inside
When you break her heart, the pain never really goes away
When she says its over, she still wants you to be hers
When she repost this bulletin, she wants you to read it
Stay on the phone with her even if shes not saying anything.
When she's mad hug her tight and don't let go
When she says she's ok dont believe it, talk with her- because 10 yrs later she'll remember you
Call her at 12:00am on her birthday to tell her you love her
Call her before you sleep and after you wake up
Treat her like she's all that matters to you.
Tease her and let her tease you back
Stay up all night with her when she's sick
Watch her favorite movie with her or her favorite show even if you think its stupid
Give her the world
Let her wear your clothes
When she's bored and sad, hang out with her
Let her know she's important
Kiss her in the pouring rain
When she runs up at you crying, the first thing you say is;
"Who's butt am I kicking babe?"
If you do post this in the next four minutes the one you love will :
Call you.
Kiss you.
Love you.
Text you.

1. Country Hearts
When I was 12 my dad died she whispered in my ear.When I was 16 I lost the love of my life she whispered in my ear.And now as I am being sent to live with people I haven't seen since I was 5 she no longer whispers.Her partinf message was 'find your heart'
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 11-7-09
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