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| Aphelionite |
Author has written 20 stories for General, Love, Family, Life, and Politics. Hi, I'm a poetry and fanfiction writer from SW England (you can find my fanfiction here: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1134786/Aphelionite) Been writing poetry since I was eleven, had a book published locally a couple of years back but haven't been writing as much recently. Fortunately for you, I have a lot saved up. Please do read and give me some feedback, I would love to hear your opinions. We have here a mix of completely made up poems and a couple that are quite personal - maybe it's a good thing that nobody seems to be reading them, lol. Who knows better than poets that poetry is not popular? If you feel like something a bit different and *much* longer, please check out 'Untitled'. I know it's about 2,000 words, which sounds like a slog when it comes to poetry, but I'm really hoping you'll find that the lyrical style lends it pace, the prose-like rather than poetic language makes it easy to read and, of course, most importantly, that the story and the characters are interesting enough to carry you through to the end. It's a work in progress and by far *the* longest poem I've ever written and this is only the first quarter. (I think.) I've never attempted anything like it before; I watched the lines stacking up in disbelief thinking 'You've gotta end soon'. But it just keeps growing. I'm afraid I've lost the ability to stop, I'll just be writing this one poem forever like that woman who couldn't stop adding rooms and stairways to nowhere to her house... Feedback greatly, greatly appreciated! Look how eloquently I've pleaded!! It'll be over before you know it, trust me Anyway, the rest are mostly pretty short. If you're here, thanks, and I hope you enjoy! Aphelionite | |||||
1. London's Burning reviewsRioting in the UKPoetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Drama/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-9-112. Jerk » reviewsNobody outruns themselves. Four poems from a difficult, confusing time.Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 432 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-11 - Published: 8-5-11 - Complete3. The 2008 Notebook reviews8 poems from 2008, all short and mostly horribly representative of my state of mind at the time, lol. One swear word.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 529 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-11 - Complete4. UntitledI can't decide if this is more poem or story, you'll have to let me know. Two lovers learn more about each other. Violence/swearingPoetry: General - Rated: M - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,039 - Published: 8-5-115. Don't Look Back reviewsIt's 4 lines long. You could have read it already by now!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-5-11 - Complete6. Do You See Me?Undeclared lovePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Published: 8-5-11 - Complete7. LullabyWatching someone lose their mind is toughPoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Published: 8-5-11 - Complete8. When I Was Only LittleYet another little examination of my early life, lol. I'm obsessed with myself...Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Published: 6-20-10 - Complete9. Talk to the Hand reviewsI canNOT write to a brief! lolPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-20-10 - Complete10. When I'm Alone reviewsSometimes it's hard to be yourselfPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-20-1011. What They Don't KnowSad poemPoetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Published: 1-20-10 - Complete12. Simple SimonThe power of an unblemished soulPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Published: 1-20-10 - Complete13. Company reviewsMisery loves itPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-11-10 - Complete14. Dennis reviewsSometimes we should pay attention to the daft things kids sayPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-11-10 - Complete15. Perspective reviewsWe weren't perfect - and we still aren'tPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 488 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-11-10 - Complete16. YesterdayStanding at a crossroadPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Published: 1-9-10 - Complete17. Maine reviewsSometimes we should make more timePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-9-10 - Complete18. The Flies Must Die reviewsThe flies must die!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-6-10 - Complete19. Time is Relative reviewsTime is relative...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-6-10 - Complete20. DeterminedSometimes growing up means finding the strength to put an end to lies and secrecy.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 1-6-10 - Complete
