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| Nanumi |
Author has written 15 stories for Romance, Life, Love, Biography, and Sci-Fi. I'm Nanumi. I am English, and as such, writing a biography that reflects my writing style is beyond me. Most importantly, I'm a harsh critic; if I review your work and you think I'm being needlessly scathing or not explaining why I've said what I have, contact me. I'm not here to p*ss on anyone's parade, I'm here to hone my skills and to help others do likewise. All reviews of decent length and coherency will be returned. | |||||||
1. Infected and Going Viral reviewsAll life and matter is basically energy, thus when energy is re-directed, re-arranged and transubstantiated, what is there left to do but capitulate to sentiments which are as real as one's own? The idea that we are merely made up of chemicals and electrical impulses leaves many people cold. Short first-person prosaic piece loosely based around infection as a metaphor for lust.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 670 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-2-12 - Complete2. Diary of a Sadist » reviewsWhen pleasure and pain are inter-connected, boundaries, both physical and mental, will undoubtedly be crossed. This piece is an exploration of the shifting nuances behind the thought processes of an unnamed sadist as they begin to unclench themselves from self-imposed exile, and learn how to relate to the world through other mediums than those of the whip or the blade. ON HIATUS.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,026 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-27-12 - Published: 6-12-123. Eyes Like a Stormy Sea » reviews"I'm still unsure as to whether I cajoled him into letting me make him up in my cosmetics or whether he was a willing participant; I do remember that it turned his sweet, plump face into something more feral – an innocent perversion of faux femininity – and that it struck an odd chord somewhere deep within me." Speculative fiction about feral teenagers in a plastic world.Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,577 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-15-12 - Published: 5-25-124. Cave of Velvet reviewsThe ice has set in early; I huddle within my velvet cave/Quiet, dark nights like these are so beautifully easy to lose oneself in./There is a glow, a certain transcendental hush – no rush/Time has stopped for me, just for me. All for mePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-15-12 - Complete5. Untitled reviews"The drunken and hiccupping call of adventure/ Invites us to strip and swim up the Serpentine." Winner of the 2010 Ilkley Literature competition in the 16-18 category.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-25-12 - Complete6. Waltzing with Shadows reviewsI come here sometimes, to dance my clumsy, shameful arabesques through the echoing, dilapidated rooms. No-one has been here other than in clandestine boots for many years, and the rotting boards sweat stale rainwater under my feet.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 468 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-25-127. Red Letter Relations reviewsA short poem on the subject of the times when the dark depths of the winter nights creep in, and the world shrinks to an incandescent bubble, lit solely by the flickering blue of my computer screen; the last outpost of the lost who still seek.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-25-12 - Complete8. Graduation from a Kitten to a Tigress reviews"Much has changed since I was asked, straight-faced, whether I was aware of the location of a certain erogenous zone. I, the innocent child of summer that I was, answered, "No?" He purred "…Let me educate you, then," and made fireworks explode behind my eyes. Much has changed, indeed."Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 764 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-25-129. Today My Lover Has No Face reviewsI need the surety of a scene, a face...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete10. The Feast reviewsThe Captain threw a remarkable feast -/Though that hot night I felt less than prandial...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete11. Moth Dust reviewsI've seen those creatures/Mad with candles, stuttering in paroxysms/On hot wet nights. I hate them on sight.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete12. It's Your Decision reviewsWhat is uncertainty? What is paranoia? Can you label emotions and package them off like cattle? Or can you just hold on tight, and pray?Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete13. Clothed Coherency reviewsWhat there is of me I wear outwardly/ - wear myself inside out, and wear you out -/So I have tugged my ragdoll's coat about me/pulling tight 'til the seams show white.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete14. The Woman In The Moon reviewsWe were inventing new ways to look at the moon/ When he took it down and pinned it/ Waterlily white, just above my ear.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete15. Wearing One's Heart On One's SleeveI arrived to my appointment with the Dark Doctor about five minutes late. The curtains were drawn but for an inch between them, allowing only a finger of the strong June sunlight to illuminate the room; I could have been on the inside of a golden sarcophagus with only a cigarette lighter to see by.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,131 - Published: 3-17-10 - Complete
