| Adria Zoi |
Author has written 15 stories for General, Horror, and Essay. First- If you are checking out my profile to see what kind of person I am, go ahead. This is not how I usually am, but I prefer not to do the annoying "Hi, I'm some crazy fun kid!" because I'm not, or at least, not until you get to know me. If you just want to look so you can find more information to rudely find some sort of fault in, have fun. If I 'flamed' your story, then skip this and get right to the PMs. They are very fun to deal with. έι I am Adria Zoi. Adria is a Latin name meaning "dark". Zoi is a variation of "Zoe" which is a Greek name meaning "life". I am a teenager, yes. 14 to be exact. I am also a writer, and an avid reader, and am shocked by how much crap people can write and dare to put up on here. I mean, really people? Most of your work sucks. No, this does not apply to all fics, I know. Just quite a lot of them. So I have decided to tell everyone who's fics suck just that, however bluntly I need to do it. Because really, you guy's need all the honest help you can get. And it's not flaming if I tell you what's wrong with your story. It's called constructive criticism. Take it like an author. Plus, I will always give you some advice. Whether you act upon it or not, your choice. Πηγαίνετε πεθαίνουν στην κόλαση | |||||
1. Death by the Elements » reviewsThis is a bunch of oneshots about dying by some of the elements. Looking for advice on how to improve my descriptive writing and such.Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,759 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-15-102. The Psych Ward reviewsHow I felt on my first day at the psych ward mental hospital after I tried to kill myself. Really not fun. Oneshot. Warning- rather depressing.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 616 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-15-10 - Complete3. Attempt reviewsAbout my first suicide attempt. Oneshot. Warning- rather depressing.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-15-10 - Complete4. Suicidal reviewsHow it feels to be suicidal. Oneshot. Warning- rather depressing. Very true though.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-15-10 - Complete5. Overpopulation: Satire reviewsThis is a satirical essay I wrote on overpopulation. It's amusing, and I got a 4, which is the highest a freshman can ever get from my English teacher. Nice and short.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 524 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-10-10 - Complete6. Focus reviewsA shot oneshot on why I cut. Not sure how it is for other people. Not sure if this is a stupid reason or not.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 531 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-10-10 - Complete7. Fate, Loneliness, and Dark ThoughtsA oneshot about Fate, about being lonely, and having dark thoughts.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 675 - Published: 5-10-10 - Complete8. Nightmare reviewsA nightmare I have been having recently. A bit icky and kinda disturbing, at least when you're experiencing it. Oneshot.Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-10-10 - Complete9. Pointless reviewsLife is completely and utterly pointless. Different take on life. Oneshot.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 334 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-23-10 - Complete10. Love and Stupidity reviewsA different view on love. Oneshot.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-27-10 - Complete11. EmotionlessTo be completely emotionless, unable to feel. Oneshot. Somewhat depressing, but more of a thinking piece.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 630 - Published: 3-25-10 - Complete12. Paranoia reviewsWhat is it like to be completely paranoid. A very pessimistic view on human nature. Oneshot. Warning- Rather depressing.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-25-10 - Complete13. SelfishEveryone is selfish, just no one cares to admit or try and justify it. Oneshot. Warning- Rather Depressing.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 341 - Published: 3-25-10 - Complete