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| CherryWatermelon |
Author has written 7 stories for Romance, and Young Adult. Hey everyone! I started to really get into writing stories and reading books a couple of years ago and when I found this website I decided that it would be the perfect time to put on a few of the things I've written and maybe get a few comments on them. I'm not as good as I'd like to be, but I am only in high school and I am still learning. I'd like to get a few comments to see if any of my ideas have potential. Constructive criticism is always encouraged. Thanks for taking a look! It really helps. | |||||||
1. Surviving » reviewsSet during the Holocaust, seen through the eyes of a Jewish girl named Eden and a German boy named Felix. When Eden and her family are sent to Auschwitz she is selected to work in a German family's home to be a maid. This particular German family happens to run Auschwitz and have a son the same age as her. A dangerious connection forms between the two...Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,123 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-12-12 - Published: 6-1-122. Longing for Grace »Written for an English Short Story Project.. I hope you like it! Seth has never noticed plain old Grace Forbs before. Until he takes Fine Arts for the first time in grade 11. It seems to be fate that put the two together. But will they ever have a happy ending?Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,407 - Published: 6-1-12 - Complete3. Sixteen » reviewsA race needs rebuilding, and in order to do that parents need to sell off their daughters so that they can help produce the next generation. Girls of 16 are sold off to the highest bidder on their 16th birthdays, Eden is one of them. This is her story.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,309 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-22-11 - Published: 8-20-114. Opposites Attract » reviewsSixteen-year-old Charlie has never been called bad. She's always gotten good grades and has only taken minimal risks. But now, dealing with her sex-crazed BFF and the new boy in town... could Charlie be thinking about straying from her perfect usual self?Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,410 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-28-11 - Published: 10-5-105. He Knows reviewsIt all started in seventh grade... I met him. We became friends. I fell for him. And I'm still in love with him. ...just like all those other stupid teen love stories. And they lived happily ever after?Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 493 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-30-106. Days Until Heaven » reviewsMeghan Taylor's life has never been perfect. She's been abused since she was a child by her father and when things ever seem to be looking up they fall into chaos again. Until boy named Will comes along and everything seems to be different for once...Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 9 - Words: 25,941 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-13-10 - Published: 8-21-107. That Was Then, This Is Now » reviewsLucia Owen's isn't herself anymore. She lives in the past, in that one faithful night that her whole outlook on life changed. She dosen't live anymore, dosen't enjoy the simple things in life. Until Seth comes into her life and there's a glimer of hope.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,377 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-30-10 - Published: 8-21-10
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