| Unlikely Collaboration |
Author has written 8 stories for Life, Love, Young Adult, and School. There's seven of us all together, three girls, four boys, we are: Matt, Carolina, Ricky, Lizzy, Ashley, Danny, and Jason. We live in a small town we all hate. Carolina and Lizzy both have lived in the city and they tell us we have it better than we think but... Whatever. If you see a mistake know your rights. File a complaint: Danny rambles a lot. Most of the time he will go on and on and then stop abruptly. So if you see that a lot in a piece and it bothers you blame Danny; it's all his fault. Not anyone else's for not catching it in editing. (eg. it bothered me so much and reminded me of the time I lost my bunny rabbit and...whatever.) Matt uses all capitals in his writing. Sometimes he over does it and it seems that almost every paragraph is full of capitals. If you see that and that bothers you tell us. He may change it if something works better. If not it's because he feels it works within the piece. (eg. I can't BELIEVE he did that! He ALWAYS does it! How ARE you today? I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN STOP GIVING EXAMPLES) Carolina can't write anything but brilliant poems. Tee-hee. (Ok I'm changing it...geez) Carolina has the habit of using bold more than she should. Even though it looks cute on the page...she says in defense it often distracts readers and isn't grammatically correct. If you see that and it bothers you PM us and she'll see what she can do. (eg. it was in the car. The car she saw earlier. The car she knew was off limits. ) Lizzy repeats herself a lot. If you see that and it bothers you she doesn't like editing things once it's been online so too bad. (eg. he was mean. He shoves puppies and spits on grandparents graves. He was mean. She didn't like him. He was mean.) Ricky likes to change the format around. If you see than and it bothers you he says eff you because he is above conforming to you and believes his writing is better than yours. We apologize in advance for him. (eg. How could you, But you must. No its just Ashley won't post any of her writing up here so we won't bother to list her faults. Don't worry dear readers, we will drag her in from her ankles with a keyboard. Jason has no confidence in his writing but you can't tell that just from reading sooooo...yeah. | |||||||
1. Flashing reviewsIn my minds eyes, all I saw were flickers curly blonde hair and flashing blue eyes.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-2-12 - Complete2. Have You Ever reviewsBeen arrested, fallen in love, met a selfish girl, badly comforted someone, disappointed your mother and fallen to your knees thanking a man?Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 547 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-23-12 - Complete3. I Don't Like it Here reviewsThey say I worship the devil. I've gone to church my whole life. They say I'm stupid. My school was further behind than there's. They tug on my hair and call it stupid. Everyone at my old school thought it was cool. Teachers ridicule me for doodling. At my old school they encouraged it. I don't like it here.Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 269 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-23-12 - Complete4. Questions reviewsI live in a painstakingly small town, where everyone has to know everyone else's business. So I suppose it's normal when I disappear for a summer, for them to interrogate me.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-10-12 - Complete5. Who I Wish I Wasn't reviewsWho are you? It seems like an easy answer, it isn't. At least, not for me, Mathew Capri.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-9-12 - Complete6. Deep Thoughts reviewsI like to think Ashley will cry at my funeral. Not that I'm some jerk that enjoys seeing her cry; it's just, I like to think someone cares enough to.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,205 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-9-12 - Complete