Author has written 2 stories for Romance.
I'm a questionable character. I'm very blunt.
My name's Toria.
From the OC!
Singers/ Bands: Lily Allen, Kate Nash, Lykke Li, Two door Cinema Club
Books: Everlost, Catcher in the Rye, Hunger Games Series, The Wish List, and Percy Jackson. Dragon Rider... Hmm.. well that's all I can think of at the moment.
Movies: Princess Bride, Beauty and the Beast, The day after tomorrow, Walk to remember, and I like all Disney classics :)
I'm Toria for you.
Note about reviews: I write constructive criticism. So if you don't like it, deal with it. Not everyone is going to adore your stories. That's the reality of the situation. If no one points out what's wrong you're going to keep on writing uncreative, vapid stories. I don't soften my words for anyone, and It doesn't matter if you don't like my advice on how you could improve. You will have wasted my time and yours sending me an angry defense against your story unless you have actual reason to decline that your story is unlike another series or author. I'm not a troll. It's just my honest opinion on how you could improve.
Note about my story: I like how everyone thinks I'm dead serious on my story "He was a boy and I was a girl" (heavy sarcasm). It's rubbish. Duh . I mean look at the summary. It screams teenage infatuation and cliche. I was parodying their complete cheesiness and lack of imagination in most teen novels in the summary. Then when you read the story... Well, it's clearly not meant to be a serious story, right? Have some humor. I despise cliche cheesy teen romance novels. That means despise most everything on the shelves of the teen romance section. If I don't even like that, why would I like most of your stories anyways? Simply, I don't praise what doesn't deserve to be praised.
Thanks for reading.
Note on person I keep getting mistaken for:
I am Person You Don't Know's older sibling. We are not the same person.
We do share the same bluntness, sarcastic "praise" for each other's stories, and a hate for cliche teen romance novels but other than that : We pretty much hate each other.
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