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| Benjamin Thorne |
Author has written 15 stories for Fantasy, Life, Religion, School, Nature, Action, and Sci-Fi. Hullo there. Be very grateful that there is a computer screen between us, as I am one of the strangest people you will ever not likely meet. That aside, I write primarily for Fantasy and Sci-Fi, as well as some poetry whenever I feel inspired. I've a plethora of songs written, though I doubt I'll ever upload them. I am terribly aware that my writing skills are abomidable, but when you leave your comments, please do not focus solely on what it is that I've done wrong, for no matter how large my ego is, it is rather fragile. If you read and review my works, I'll likely return the favor. I'm returning here pretty much every day now, so feel free to PM me, especially if you have thoughts/questions/ideas about/for one of my stories. When I review, please do not expect english professor level reviews, as I am only 16 years old. When I review, chances are all I'll point out are material errors and things I would do differently or that I think might improve the story. (And, of course, rant about how I can't wait for the next chapter.) As Winston Churchill said, "K.B.O." | |||||||
1. Living Death » reviewsWhat if the chilling events of 1984 were true? What if they were worse than Orwell even imagined? What if the government monitored our every move, but instead of looking ofr political deviances, were looking for people with certain skill sets? Yes, what if?Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,961 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-12 - Published: 10-17-122. Darkened GateThree friends from three different time zones all belong to the organization, which is headed by The Council. Lately, however, objects from one time have been leaking over to another, causing mass chaos. Five areas of fluctuation are blamed, and a team is sent out to investigate. The message that arrives reveals them to not be areas, but beings. Beings that thrive on chaos.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,110 - Published: 7-20-123. WorldClassA world-class prisoner breaks loose, killing his two guards and two pilots aboard a flight from one unknown prison hole to another. Now he's unleashed upon the world again, and with a vengeance.Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 541 - Published: 7-16-124. The Notes of a Warrior GryphonsFourth in the Notes of a Warrior series. I tried to apply the suggestions in the reviews by Small Wings Flying, and I /think/ that it's better.Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 392 - Published: 7-16-12 - Complete5. The Notes of a Warrior The Siege reviewsThird instalment in the series. Probably not the same guy, though.Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete6. The Notes of a Warrior The Shade reviewsSecond of the short story series. Any and all other notes can be found in the first description.Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete7. The Notes of a Warrior The Castle reviewsFirst of a short story series entitled "The Notes of a Warrior." Originally, these were written on note cards, which is why they're so short. They're really just battle scenes, and I'm thinking of incorporating them into another book.Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 501 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete8. The Sun reviewsA short free-verse about the sun.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete9. Summer reviewsSmall poem about Summer.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete10. Single SoulsA poem that I wrote in parts and then combined. I wrote this not long after I had my heart broken, and so it is a little darker. But hey, you write what you feel.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete11. School reviewsAn acrostic about school made for one of those little poetry books in school.Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete12. Night reviewsA poem about night. When I was writing this, I hadn't had religious themes in mind, however looking back on it, it seems to have to religious connotations.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete13. Footsteps reviewsA short poem about memories over a lifetime.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete14. DreamsA short poem about dreams. Written for school, but I thought it was good, so I'm uploading it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Published: 7-10-12 - Complete
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