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| WhisperingCloud |
Author has written 45 stories for Love, Life, Nature, Family, Young Adult, and Essay. Please review everything I really want feedback, whether good or bad. So I'm looking into publishing my shitty poetry, so if all of it gets taken down, that means I bullshitted some publisher into turning it into a book, so yeah. If in some twist of fate this works, then I will post the name of the book. So I have been pratactly shitting poetry lately, so I guess I have a fair amount posted. All of my stuff is based my own experiences and thoughts, I don't think I'm a poet at heart, but it is the best way I have to express myself. Please read and review, I don't like flames but constructive criticism is always welcome. As for my more graphic stuff, thats just what I write. Its not all I write, but I'm no more ashamed of it than my other works. I doubt I will add to it. My writing is rife with grammar and spelling errors, sorry about that. Amaryllis by Shinedown. The song of my life. Well, the somg my boyfriend claims I remind him of and i agree How ever long the night, dawn will break. African Proverb Real difficulties can be overcome, it is only the imaginary ones that are unconquerable. Theodore N. Vail A successful man is one who can lay a firm foundation with the bricks others have thrown at him. David Brinkly Only those who will risk going to far can possibly find out how far one can go. T.S. Eliot Love one another. George Harrison (last words) | |||||
1. You Were A Father To MeJust a poem on one of my best friends, who filled a viod. AND HOW HE JUST KIND OF LEFT.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Published: 1-23-13 - Complete2. Wishing for AlaskaA poem on the relationship with myself, and the character Alaska. Alaska belongs to John Green, as he wrote the book (Looking for Alaska). Not as terrible as it soundsPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Published: 10-4-12 - Complete3. Damn Little VoiceFighting with that littl voice in your head determined to fuck everything up. Scatterbrained poetry. M for swearing though it doesn't deserve it.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Published: 9-12-12 - Complete4. Escape reviewsAn essay in poetry style, not quite either. On being trapped with no way out, and something amazing just outside your reach. T for swear.Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-12-12 - Complete5. No Reason For DrowningThere isn't a soild reason for drowning in sadness you do not understand. You just drown. Just sink in the pointless pain.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Published: 9-9-12 - Complete6. When the Ink Dries reviewsDrawing on my arms, my scars to be specific, and what will happen when the ink fades?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-26-12 - Complete7. Unknown MaladyA poem on the feeling of experiencing a stress induced breakdown, and not knowing that is what it is.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Published: 6-12-12 - Complete8. Leave Me Alone reviewsToo far gone to be help, too far gone to want help. Paranioa TPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-30-12 - Complete9. Writer reviewsWhy I write, why I need to write, and how it affects me. Not as narcissistic as it sounds.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-30-12 - Complete10. I Don't Sleep reviewsOn insomnia caused by various reasons. Writen from truth but with Angels Cry Tears of Blood in mind. Has only slight undertones of horror if you squint. EnjoyPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-28-12 - Complete11. Drowning in ApathyA poem on issues left over from private school. Depressing and T for some swearingPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Published: 5-28-12 - Complete12. AngerWhen rage leads to suicide. Interesting ride, have fun readingPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Published: 5-24-12 - Complete13. I Want To Say Good Bye reviewsWhen you want so badly to kill yourself but can't.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-24-12 - Complete14. Tears & Blood reviewsThe mixing of blood and tears in the end. Both come from the same reason, and it isn't pain.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-24-12 - Complete15. Falling Inside the Black reviewsFalling into the black abyss, and wondering if the blade releases you from it, or just puts you into another chasm. Title shamlessly ripped off from the Skilled song, falling inside the black. T for themePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-23-12 - Complete16. Heart reviewsPerhaps a ballad on the feelings of the heart.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-23-12 - Complete17. Understanding reviewsFully comprehending the love of another towards you. Blew me away this is my attempt at expressing itPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete18. ReassuranceA reassurance that two people should be together. A follow up to Something I Should Tell You and Worst MistakePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete19. Maytr ComplexMaytr Complex and Love of Pain. A rationel of both. Doesn't deserve T, only for theme sort of, also because K is the bane of my existancePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete20. Worst MistakeA twisted mind rationalizing a awful mistake waiting to happen. And the same mind trying to prevent it from happeningPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete21. Something I Should Tell YouTelling your partner something that reveals a little to much about your inner personality than is comfortable. Also running the risk of separting over it.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete22. Pictures & JewelryOn the past, present, and future of a relationship. More on issues with commitment and trust if you read between the lines.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Published: 5-22-12 - Complete23. Heartstrings:Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Published: 5-21-12 - Complete24. If I Died TodayA poem about neglect, lonelyness ans sorrow. From my private school days.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Published: 5-21-12 - Complete25. Macabre Wonderings reviewsExactly what the title is. Taking the phrase, Quit while you're ahead, and applying it to a somewhat different situation. T for death theme and cause I dont like KPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-19-12 - Complete26. As Long As We Can »About how one feels when their partner has commitment issues. Now with another chapter, set later in time, and the issues have shifted. Really just a poem on a relationship. Not meant to flame by bf, only truth.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 504 - Updated: 5-19-12 - Published: 5-4-12 - Complete27. Little Black StarThe similarities between a girl, and a little black foam star long forgotten. Odd, but not badPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete28. Can't Sleep reviewsThe story of a lonely girl who longs to fall asleep in her boyfriends arms. Writen almost as a companion poem to the story, My Last Night, about the same event but not the same. T because I dislike the rating K, not really graphic or bad. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-13-12 - Complete29. My Last Night reviewsThe story of a tormented girl who wants to end her life. and and a boy who loves her desperatly trying to save her. Based on what almost happened to me one night. Names changed. T for slightly graphic violent imagry and death.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 874 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-12-12 - Complete30. My Exit reviewsA poem on how I want to end my life, and how I almost did. T for vioelent imagry.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-12-12 - Complete31. To CutOnce again a poem writen during the time when I have strong urges to cut. This is like Need to Cut, but it's different, mosre neurotic. T for theme and maybe some graphics.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 5-12-12 - Complete32. Fading ScarsJust a poem on the aftermath of cutting. What I see when I look at my arm. T for themePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Published: 5-12-12 - Complete33. I Hate Myself reviewsAnger/depression poem based on myself and how I feel. T cause of paranoia. R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-5-12 - Complete34. WorthlessJust a depressive, slightly violent poem about self directed anger. M for swearing, c word used. Dont like dont readPoetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Published: 5-5-12 - Complete35. The Moon reviewsSomething I wrote as I was looking at the "super moon" based on real events. T for cuttingPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-5-12 - Complete36. The Ashes »Just something I wrote after my cousins funeral. This is two poems, but meant to be read together. Please R&R, T for death motifPoetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 117 - Updated: 5-4-12 - Published: 5-2-12 - Complete37. I Died TodayThe way you feel in everyday life, when you just want to die, and somehow know that you can finally kill yourself. Just a random poem, like many of mine. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Published: 5-3-12 - Complete38. His Arousal reviewsVery sexual poem, based on reality. I posted it because damnit I don't have to be ashamed at what I write and what I've done. M for a reason, don't like don't read.Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-2-12 - Complete39. InfinityJust a little random thing I wrote while watching the sun set behind the San Juan islands in my home, northwest Washington. Just a weird little poem. Not really spiritual, just pretty.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 5-2-12 - Complete40. My TrainRandom poem writen like many of them are during my depression. Take a wild guess on what the ending of this bad poem means. T for the theme, not graphic or anything. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 4-30-12 - Complete41. Need to cut reviewsMore bad poetry about my struggle with cutting. Graphic, M for a reasonPoetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-17-12 - Complete42. Can't go home reviewsThis is a poem of my struggle with the urge to cut. It isn't vry good but to me it means a lot. I for odd and slightly graphic imagry.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-13-12 - Complete43. Aware and Longing reviewsFreeverse about wishing you partner was with you when they are gone. Based on my own feelings about my boyfriend. Crappy title, sorry. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-12 - Complete44. Peace, Fury, and Choice reviewsFreeverse, I guess. I'm not really sure. Just a little poem about a choice in life all have to face. It was something I had to write for class so it's not very good, but please review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-31-12 - Complete
