| dream18writer |
Author has written 7 stories for General, and Manga. I WILL BE EDITING FOR THE NEXT FEW WEEKS OR MONTHS DEPENDING ON HOMEWORK AND OTHER STUFF. CONTINUE READING TO KNOW WHAT I AM EDITING NOW AND WHAT CHAPTER I AM ON. I AM ON CHAPTER 9 IN "MY FRIEND". AFTER I AM DONE EDITING "MY FRIEND" I WILL BE RE-WRITING, NOT EDITING, THE STORY "PRETTY FACE". IF FOR SOME REASON SOMEONE THINKS I SHOULD JUST EDIT IT TELL ME. OR IF YOU HAVE IDEAS FOR IT I WILL HEAR THEM AND SEE IF I CAN HAVE IT IN THE STORY. The reason why I am doing this is because I don't think it is making sense right now so I want to try re writing it so it will make sense. However because it is still in the developing stage I will listen to ideas to make it better. hi! I am a girl from the United States and this is my first time ever showing people my stories so i am looking forward to see what people think. I must warn you my grammer is very bad because I actually started writing them around 2011 and Honestly I did not pay much attention in english class in school. So regretting that now, so sorry if there are a lot grammer errors but i will try to have as little as possible. Take note i like honest reviews so even if you think it is the worst thing you've read i would like to hear why. Just to warn you my stories might be a bit wordy so sorry for that. the first story i every wrote would be "Pretty Face" so that one will probably have the most mistakes but i will try to make it better. now in general it is about 2 boys who have to figure about how to help eachother duel with bullies who pick on them because they look a little different. one has a pretty face and looks a lot like a girl. The other one has a baby face and he it very short so about 4 foot 5 or so. So he pretty mach looks like a stretched out elementary child. I might end up deleting the story all ready up and completely rewrite it. However that will be after I finish my other stories. the second story i got inspired by a story i heard about a guy that was bullied so much he committed suicide. so this one is called "Bullying" a in short it is about a girl that has been living a terrible life and almost committed suicide. so now after she moves far away with her mom she has to learn to live a happy life but the real question is well she be able to. The 29th- just in case it gets a little confusing in the story. in this world there are 3 moons and if you are born at night you can be a demon and if your born in the day then you can be a magical child. (take note just because there are 3 moons do not mean that there are mostly demons it has to be dork outside for them to be demons.) not everyone who is born is a demon or a magical child. then there are different level to them depending on when they were born. Chance is a level 6 the highs and the friend he meets is a magical child also level 6. also because most demons are bad most people kill them when they are born. the way they can tell if a person is a demon is if they have slit eyes like a cat or a snake. for a magical child they will got a star or a sparkle in there eyes. also depending on the level depends on the level of magical abilities. demons know mostly dark magic and magical children know mostly light magic. in these story i hope a can explain all the levels good enough but if i feel i need to feel you in a will put it on my page. Adventures of the cursed- this is about 2 boys that get curses for unfair reasons and when they meet they go on an adventure to try and break their curse. in this story there is Florian/flora who turns into a girl for 3 days each month and when it happens is completely random. he is flora when he is a girl and florian when he is a girl. and the other boy is Major and he can only see girls and i am serious. if he looks at a girl he sees a girl but if he looks at a boy he sees a girl. so he uses florians curse to his advantage to he can talk to people with out getting hurt. take note in this story there are also blessing as well and when you get a curse or a blessing you can only have one or the other. curses are given to people that are bad unless they are given to them by a person that has the blessing that can give curses. and a blessing is given to people that do a good deed and the best on is the blessing to remove curses. take note if you abuse the power of a blessing it will disappear. my friend- a young boy named Ira is a very weak and very lonely boy who one day meets Dave who he becomes best fiend with. however Ira has a secret and when it is revealed how will it affect the 2 boys friendship. TO LET PEOPLE NOW I WILL BE EDITING THIS FOR THE NEXT FEW WEEKS OR MONTHS SO I WILL NOT BE WRITING NEW CHAPTERS FOR AWHILE. Courts Angel - originally a story I worked on in my free time but because I have a problem with re-reading things I decided to post this to help me get to writing again so I can continue to edit me other story (My Friend) sooner. NOW FOR THE SUMMARY: pretty much there is this tall guy named duke who is really tall, and I mean TALL, who comes to school and runs into another guy (who he finds out is a guy later in the story) named Reny and instantly likes him (thinking its a her at first). In the end he joined the Basketball club knows Renny is a boy and he even continues to like him. However there are a couple of problems to face first. 1) Duke never played the game and he if awful. 2) Renny is really popular with other guys, including ones from other schools. 3) Dukes friend Sam knows Duke likes Renny and he aften teases about it so Duke gets nervous and never can confess or the mood if ruined be him. 4) and most importantly Renny hates guys who follow him around and he hates all of that kind of attention so confessing is a big problem. 5) minor problem Renny is never taken seriously with ANYTHING so even if a confession is said he might not believe it. A flowers wish - There is this land and in this land there is this legend of the flowers. All flowers are roses because I like those flowers but using flower just sounded better. Anyway there are 6 colored roses with did wish granting abilities. However there are may of each colored rose and each of the flower rulers posses one person. The person is still normal but there hair changes to the color of the rose that is in them and they also gain a mark in between there collar bones that looks like a flower pedal also the some color as the flower ruler. However, again, there are many of each colored rose in the world except one and that is the blue rose which only has 1. The reason why there is only 1 is because it has absolutely no restriction on its wish. You could literally wish for anything. However there are also certain things the person who wants the wish to do. First the flower holder has to agree to grant the wish. Next they have to go to the secret location that only the blue rose has knowledge too. Lastly the person how whats the wish has to give a drop of their blood to make the ruler appear and then wait for the ruler to appear and then ask for the wish. It really could be anything, other than blood, but the people are scared of what would happen if there affording is not great enough. After the wish is granted the holder dies. These is because the power is so grant and takes up so much energy that the holder can not withstand it so the die. This story is pretty much a young mans adventure, with the young blue rose, to get back the riches he has lost. Along the way he finds out about the many roses and even discovers the consequences of wishing on the blue rose. But he still wants his happiness. So what will happen to him and the little boy? | |||||
1. Adventures of the cursed » reviewsA boy, named Major, that can only see girls and a boy, named Florian, that turns in a girl meet up and decided to travel together to try and break there curses. Can they do it? what kind of people are waiting for them? please review.Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,666 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-15-13 - Published: 3-31-122. A Flowers WishThis story is pretty much about a boys adventure, with the young blue rose, to get back the riches he has lost. Along the way he finds out about the many roses and their powers and even discovers the consequences of wishing on the blue rose. But he still wants his happiness. So what will happen to him and the little boy? Please review I already know the opening needs work.Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,773 - Published: 3-29-133. Courts angel »Tall boy and small boy meet. They both belong to the basketball club in school but here's the trouble. The taller one can't play and the smaller one is not taken seriously. How will it work? warning - I am giving to try making it a shounen-ai (minor boy x boy love) but it my first time making one so it might change to just being friend. Review please.Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,173 - Updated: 1-27-13 - Published: 1-7-134. My friend » reviewsA young boy named Ira is very weak and very lonely and one day meets Dave who he becomes best friends with. however Ira has a secret and when it is revealed how will it affect the 2 boys friendship. Now rewriting. Might take a few weeks. Finished. I Hope I edited this good enough.Fiction: Manga - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 13,561 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-27-12 - Published: 7-16-125. Pretty face » reviewsDamian is a boy that looks a lot like a girl so he wears sunglasses to try and hide that fact but what happens when his face is revealed. How can the boy named Allan help and how can they show people to never judge a book by its cover. review please!Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 12 - Words: 11,495 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-11-12 - Published: 11-21-116. The 29th » reviewsIn a world where there are demons who have to be killed at birth there is one that lived and now he and a magical child named Gale have to help the people in the city from demons. The thing is in this city no one knows about demons and magical children.Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Fantasy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,673 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-21-12 - Published: 2-20-12