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| PirateGuy101 |
Author has written 10 stories for Family, Life, Religion, and General. I'm a writer with a lot of potential and am looking for some constructive criticism please. Please give comments, tips, and suggestions to improve my writing style. Please be honest! Thanks. :) | |||||||
1. PushA game called Push!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Published: 8-8-12 - Complete2. Thankful Time of YearThis is a poem reminding us to remember our God above during the Holidays!Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Published: 12-5-11 - Complete3. Made of Stone reviewsThis poem points out bluntly that my stepdad is made of stone. Enjoy! Review and Subcribe!Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 427 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-11 - Complete4. One Word reviewsI heard someone say that phrase and thus the poem was born. Review and subscribe! :Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-11 - Complete5. Nature Walk With God reviewsI wrote this on a retreat during free-time with middle schoolers. It was such a beautiful day and I was enamored with the beautiful scenery and weather. That combined inspired this poem. Hope you like. Please review and subscribe!Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-11 - Complete6. Better Circumstances reviewsThis is about me living under better conditions and the circumstances are much better! Please review and subscribe! Hope you enjoy!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-11 - Complete7. It's A Wonderful Life reviewsIts a wonderful life is my interpretation of my wonderful life when I'm around positive people and doing positive things. Please read,review, and subscribe!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-11 - Complete8. Hope Faith Love reviewsThis is all about how it is important to have hope, faith, and love.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-27-11 - Complete9. When? reviewsThis is a poem about my relationship with my step-dad and all his flaws. I stand up to him in the end.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-26-11 - Complete10. All The Way Down reviewsThis is me standing up to my step-dad who emotionally abused me and neglected me for nine to ten years. I now present All The Way Down.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-26-11 - Complete
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