DarkInkyDreamer
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since: 01-15-12, id: 820799, Profile Updated: 02-27-13
country: UK
Author has written 139 stories for Love, Religion, Life, War, General, Friendship, General, Humor, Fantasy, Nature, and Song.

I LOVE to write so much I have many inspirations but they can sometimes take time to get through the maze of my head :)

I am writing my own novel length story in my own time but for the moment I only plan to post poetry and short stories on here, please take some time to check them out I welcome feedback positive and constructive criticism they only help me become a better writer (I hope)

I am also avaliable on this site for beta duties, feel free to contact me if you ever want any help with your own writing anything from spell checking a haiku to editing a 100,000 word story!

'don't dwell on that which disheartens the soul, for that shall be thy peril' - me 4.9.11

"I do my thing, and you do your thing. I am not in this world to live up to your expectations. And you are not in this world to live up to mine. You are you and I am I. And if by chance we find eachother, it's beautiful. If not, it can't be helped" - Perl's Prayer

I did try and space this out better so it was more user friendly but alas it has not worked so sorry for the jumble of incoherent words

I will ALWAYS return reviews!

I have kept all work on here from when I joined the site right up to present day. My style and skill have changed and improved a lot over time but feedback on pieces old and new is always welcome and I am always open to suggestions on how to change and improve my work.

xx


1. Forgiveness reviews
Forgiveness. To forgive. To forget?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-12-13 - Complete
2. Pushing 20
I live in good old Great Britain where, when the sun does put in an appearance, people go a little bit crazy in terms of barbecuing etc. After a recent sunny spell I was inspired to write about England when it is pushing 20 outside. Reviews returned.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Published: 5-12-13 - Complete
3. Yoyo reviews
I'm like a yoyo yoyoing, to and fro, to and fro, just a yoyoing yoyo, on it's repeated track.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-13 - Complete
4. Count them reviews
Count them. Count each and every one. Try your hardest to keep track as they wind down your face into your lap. Count them. R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-13 - Complete
5. One and Only reviews
'So let me be these things for you' A short burst of soppy inspiration has led me to this. Reviews returned.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-22-13 - Complete
6. Dangerous Question reviews
Sometimes the most important questions, are ones that are difficult to ask. But no matter how hard they are to ask we often need to know the answer, however scared we may be.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-15-13 - Complete
7. Repetition and Regrets reviews
Hearing bad news is always difficult, but when it's just the same news again and again...another personal poem, R&R?
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-12-13 - Complete
8. Fortress reviews
My mind is my fortress, and this is what happens when the cracks begin to widen...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-11-13 - Complete
9. Frozen Kisses reviews
You take the time to kiss me in the snow. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-11-13 - Complete
10. You know reviews
Even when I have no idea what to do or what is right, you know. You always know what to do to make it all ok.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-10-13 - Complete
11. I feel like a flame reviews
I feel like a flame, lost in a breezy whisper of uncertainty. R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-10-13 - Complete
12. Grace reviews
Anorexia and bulimia have stolen one of my oldest and closest friends, I have been unable to find the right words to express everything I want to about this subject but I finally have. A personal poem, feedback appreciated and returned.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 657 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-19-13 - Complete
13. Goodnight reviews
Inspired by a dream. A baby wakes in the night and her mewling cries wake me from my slumber, but you are there to comfort her in your arms and I smile against the pillow.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-18-13 - Complete
14. Spotlight reviews
Performing is a big part of my life and I wanted to write something about it so here we go! (I am aware of grammatical errors and they are intentional) Feedback would be much appreciated, and reviews are returned.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-19-13 - Complete
15. Age reviews
I firmly believe that a person's age should not determine who they are and how they are treated by others. It is my opinion that age is no measure of intelligence, maturity or sensitivity and people shouldn't be treated according to it. Reviews returned.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-19-13 - Complete
16. Numb3r5 reviews
I was inspired by another poem I heard about numbers around the subject of love, and i started playing around with some rhymes and structures and things. Feedback welcomed and always returned!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-12-13 - Complete
17. Perfection reviews
I have struggled for a while to write around this elusive subject, but recent events in my life have shown me exactly why it is so difficult to hold onto and why some people can never understand it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-3-13 - Complete
18. Double Life reviews
I lead a double life. I love two men. But which do I choose?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-18-12 - Complete
19. Nettles & Dock Leaves reviews
I have been through a lot of difficulties recently and this poem sums up how i'm feeling at the moment. Two people, both special in a persons life, without one you can not have the other. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-15-12 - Complete
20. The Creature reviews
Feather winged with eyes glazed like moonbeams...there are creatures inside everyone, even the best of us.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-20-12 - Complete
21. Wednesday reviews
People change so much when you don't see them all the time. You change a little every week, always similar but never the same. Each Wednesday. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-12-12 - Complete
22. Pavement Dream reviews
A mother comforts her child as they dream a pavement dream.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-9-12 - Complete
23. Distraction reviews
I will do what I can to distract myself from the truth gnawing at my facade.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-27-12 - Complete
24. Spiders reviews
Why shouldn't I harbour irrational fears, cling on to my childhood with trembling fingers? You say I should grow up, but you don't really know. Please R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-20-12 - Complete
25. Thorns reviews
This one has it's own pre-poem: Lets wrap ourselves in naivety, a blanket against reality. But all things must wear out with time. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-15-12 - Complete
26. What is worry? reviews
Written a while ago but I haven't had a chance to complete and post it. Another one where the clue is in the title. R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-5-12 - Complete
27. Natural Born Worrier reviews
This is so like me it's untrue...anyway clue is in the title, about someone who worries about everything and anything all the time.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-5-12 - Complete
28. Paper Dolls in Paper Houses reviews
A poem focusing on two opposing people in a relationship, with very definite ideas. Based on my life. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-5-12 - Complete
29. Chain reviews
Curling, twisting, churning, coiling, snake-like. You've made me worried, by the words you say; and the words you don't. I know you're hiding something. Similar theme to 'Crying a Dry River'. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-12 - Complete
30. Forgotten Friends reviews
Forgotten friends. Placed upon a shelf to gather dust, and fade into the intricate paintwork. I was thinking about an old friend and how she could really help me if we were still in touch, however the poem can be interpreted in different ways. Again I'd love to hear people's take on it. R&R?
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-2-12 - Complete
31. Broken Record reviews
Please just change the broken record... I've played around with punctuation and phrasing here, I'd be interested to see what people think. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-2-12 - Complete
32. Crying a Dry River reviews
I bet you never knew, that I can't cry about you. An invisible force holds the tears at bay, and the lead weight keeps expanding. Please R&R, I will always try to return the favour.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-2-12 - Complete
33. Speed Dial reviews
A poem about unrequited love. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-13-12 - Complete
34. Candles reviews
Even after someone is no longer with you would you continue to celebrate their birthday? Candle by candle, year by year. Not quite as morbid as it sounds, promise x
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-13-12 - Complete
35. First Dance reviews
A free verse poem depicting a wedding scene and the first dance between a man and his wife. Night lights dance in tree top branches/ as glasses clink through chinks of silken/ gowns worn by wide eyed bridesmaids/ sided round the stained floor... Please R&R x
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-6-12 - Complete
36. Tonight reviews
Tonight. Tonight. Tell me what distiguishes tonight from every other? I am still alone in the blackness, missing you. Tonight. R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-3-12 - Complete
37. Remember? reviews
Written from a different perspective than usual. Her face is blurring, around the edges, and the yellowish lights are fading, and all I can hear, aside from the ticking of the clock, is her musical voice, asking me asking me, if I remember.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 533 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-3-12 - Complete
38. Optimistic Realist reviews
A 'pull your socks up' poem with a bit of a twist at the end...please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-23-12 - Complete
39. Shadows reviews
On a sunny day, the shadows of things that have past can plague you. Seek refuge under an oak tree when the memories bite at your heels.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-23-12 - Complete
40. The Waiting Room reviews
Two women sit in a waiting room, each waiting for the loves of their lives to walk through the doors. You can not age them, not by the things they know, not by their appearance, not by the way they interact with eachother; they are too young but so old all at the same time. So similar but they will never know, when one of their prayers are answered.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-15-12 - Complete
41. Memories reviews
Our life together replays in sepia through my mind. A very personal poem feedback welcome as always just sensitivity would be appreciated.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-1-12 - Complete
42. Limpet reviews
Limpet a familiar feature of rocky shores. Can be found clinging to rocks and other hard surfaces, forming characteristic indentations known as scars.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-1-12 - Complete
43. Hero of The Battlefield reviews
When the war is over, can he still be the hero of the battlefield? R&R
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-30-12 - Complete
44. Equals reviews
One day the stone pillars will crumble and we can be equals once more. Just a short one give it a go
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-23-12 - Complete
45. Don't Cry reviews
Don't listen to their hateful words I will stay and dry your tears and tonight, the pillow will dry mine.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-23-12 - Complete
46. Broken Soldier reviews
A battle is just a side dish, in this banquet of war. And the slight victory is of little consequence to a broken soldier.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-23-12 - Complete
47. A Woman reviews
The woman trapped inside the child's body, which one should she be and which does she present each time she steps into the light.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-23-12 - Complete
48. Old Age reviews
A rainy day and the mist swirls mysteriously like the insides of his mind, rocking on the rocking chair and blissfully un-aware.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-22-12 - Complete
49. Goodbyes reviews
A goodbye never heard, is just trapped between the sheets...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-15-12 - Complete
50. Witch
Sentence me for my blackened heart charred as the bones at your feet, all that remains of the ungodly love you bestowed on this fallen angel. Rated for suggested dark themes
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Published: 6-15-12 - Complete
51. Security reviews
You are my safety, my security, your arms and your's alone keep me from the wind that moans my name.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-24-12 - Complete
52. Fire reviews
Fire in the soul, burning bright and ferocious: desire. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-17-12 - Complete
53. Take The Hint reviews
Just a short one about those people who don't clean up when they make a mess.x
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete
54. Outlaw reviews
He rides off into the apricot sunset, not knowing the bounty he has taken from me. Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete
55. Comprehension or Confusion reviews
Why understand the world around you when confusion is bliss ...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete
56. Porcelain Doll reviews
She is just a puppet, a toy, a porcelain doll, what will you do with her delicate body? Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete
57. Sweetheart Love Song reviews
A convict sits in his cell, and dreams of his true love...but why is he in there in the first place? Feedback would be appreciated on this one x
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-12 - Complete
58. Alarm Clock reviews
I feel like your alarm clock there to wake you up but I'll always get it wrong, wake up and smell the coffee. Please R&R?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-15-12 - Complete
59. Darling are you ok?
I sit in the corner, eyes turned down to the, blank white paper that, stares right back...when nightmares blur the line of reality. Please R&R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Published: 5-15-12 - Complete
60. Storybook reviews
Lets play a game of make believe, turn the pages and pick a story from the picture book. Why don't you be the prince and i'll be the princess? A strong idea that practically wrote itself. Please R&R x
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-9-12 - Complete
61. Temptress reviews
Her beautiful face distracts you from the red lines on her wrists, her beguiling body hides the tears in her eyes...warning: dark themes, please R&R x
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-4-12 - Complete
62. Edge of Oblivion reviews
Written a while ago it even suprised me with the twist at the end, stood on the edge of oblivion the world and his wife pass by...R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Crime/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-29-12 - Complete
63. Promises reviews
You promise me love...and a lifetime of happiness, but what are promises to you. R&R?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-29-12 - Complete
64. Pressure reviews
The logical thing to do when the pressure is too high...relieve it. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-29-12 - Complete
65. The Strong One reviews
Sometimes it's difficult to hold on, to be the strong one.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-29-12 - Complete
66. Suspended in Magnetised Bliss
My favourite place, somewhere I can be with the man I love; do you have that special place or person somewhere or someone that can make the world just melt away with one look? A personal poem. Please R&R xx
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Published: 4-25-12 - Complete
67. Captured in the Candlelight reviews
Candlelight can light more than one kind of fire... T for safety, Please R&R.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-25-12 - Complete
68. Impossible Comparisons reviews
'Shall I compare thee to a summer's day' How do you compare something so wonderful there are no words for it. Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-25-12 - Complete
69. Poisonous Teenage Snakes reviews
Teenage bullies made me the person I am today, the poison they spread about me only made me a stronger person and I wouldn't change those experiences for the world anyone who suffers bullying read this and I hope it inspires you to soldier on please R&R x
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-20-12 - Complete
70. The Silver Locket reviews
Our love hanging precariously in the balance, inside the tarnished silver locket, round my delicately perfumed neck...when you suddenly realise you're the one destroying the love and you need to let him go before the monster inside you ruins him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-20-12 - Complete
71. Le Soleil La Lune et Les Étoiles
Le soleil vu moi dans le jour, mais la lune et les étoiles sont mes meilleurs amies dans la grande nuit ma première poème en français donc pardonnez moi si je fais une erreur
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - French - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Published: 4-19-12 - Complete
72. Poetry reviews
Just a few words to explain about my poetry and how to treat a piece of genius if you happen to stumble across one. Please R&R?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-15-12 - Complete
73. My Life Is Like A Red Ribbon reviews
My life unravels like a red ribbon...red, ruby, crimson, claret. This came to me very suddenly and practically flowed out my pen, feedback most welcome please R&R.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-14-12 - Complete
74. As I Remind Myself Not To Scream This Time reviews
I know that look in your hazy yellowed eyes, when you walk in gone 12 from the pub...warning dark themes, different style to previous work feedback appreciated!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-14-12 - Complete
75. Murder On The Cobbled Street reviews
The blood runs freely down the cobbled street...a girl is killed on the cobbled street but who is the man in the shadows and why would he turn away. A different style to my usual work feedback very welcome x
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-12-12 - Complete
76. A Princess From The Rain reviews
Taken down from up on high the bedraggled princess stands...the tale of a prince and a princess brought together in dark times. Not as cheesy as it sounds, please R&R x
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 477 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-11-12 - Complete
77. The Wonder of False Hope reviews
Just give me a piece of false hope, to see me through the night. Sometimes we all need a bit of false hope...please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-10-12 - Complete
78. Glitter in my Blood reviews
How can something so bewitching be painful? You like glitter, dancing in my veins. Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-10-12 - Complete
79. A Writer Sits Alone in a Place of Inspiration
Pen poised as if to strike, as her thoughts whisper, through the aching willow trees...sometimes places of inspiration are few and far between. Feedback of any kind is most welcome
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 4-10-12 - Complete
80. Diaries of a Cafe Spectator » reviews
This started out as another part of the People Watching series but I've decided to develop it into it's own mini series. Inspired by an interesting deli cafe I found myself in, have you ever sat in a cafe and been distracted by the people around you? R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-10-12 - Published: 4-9-12
81. Everyone's Different
Am I human, I don't feel it half the time how can I tell. You say I am, prove to me I am. This came out of some problem solving I had to do with my friend please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Published: 3-29-12 - Complete
82. People Watching » reviews
a series of short poems about people watching, undecided how many im going to yet but will probably end up being quite a few about different aspects of life and different types and groups of people. Rated because im not sure of future content. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 8 - Words: 555 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-29-12 - Published: 2-20-12
83. Words
Its funny isn't it, how the same sentence can mean different things to different people; how half the people that read this will move on and of the other half, some will sit back and maybe even read it again and maybe others will R&R that would be great!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 3-29-12 - Complete
84. Precious Stones
Precious things in precious lives, and one precious stone. Short and sweet won't take up much of your time so please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Published: 3-29-12 - Complete
85. Insomnia reviews
When you just can't sleep, no matter how hard you try, and you get so bored of the ceiling that even the backs of your eyelids become interesting...only you can think of the possibilities. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-12 - Complete
86. Trust me
Based on several text messages I have sent to my boyfriend over the time we have been together, better than it sounds so i'm told so please give it a go and R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Published: 3-17-12 - Complete
87. And As Someone Wise Once Said To Me
Young children sometimes say the wisest things, even to the most experienced elderly woman. Please R&R it is much appreciated.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 3-17-12 - Complete
88. Monochrome Patterns On My Heart reviews
Phantom touches and barely there memories of us...written with pent up feelings and based on my experiences. Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-16-12 - Complete
89. The Clocks Were Mocking Her reviews
What are the worst words a mother could ever hear...as the seconds tick by...please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-14-12 - Complete
90. I'm Scared, So Scared
What would I do if we found out you weren't going to see next christmas, that the silly socks i bought...well you know the rest. Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 3-14-12 - Complete
91. Tears reviews
Do tears mean you have to cry? I'm fine...just fine, I promise. R&R?x
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-12-12 - Complete
92. A Truce reviews
What does the word truce mean to you? Is it the relief of a pause in conflict...or does it leave a bitter taste in your mouth? Very keen to hear any feedback on this one
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-12-12 - Complete
93. The Fairies Are Hiding My Inspiration
a short one to explain my frustration at writers block, please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Published: 3-10-12 - Complete
94. You Know That Feeling Well, Don't You
Have you ever looked at someone and realised they're feeling the same as you are maybe...read to find out i've experimented with different things in this poem and i'd like to know if any of it is remotely effective, thankyou
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Published: 3-8-12 - Complete
95. Silence Is Sometimes The Most Deafening Sound
I was upset today and my friends tried to just leave me alone to think but sometimes silence is the most deafening sound...R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Published: 3-8-12 - Complete
96. If You Could Hide Me Anywhere reviews
A poem that came to me all very suddenly and flowed whilst writing, if you could hide me anywhere, where would you hide me? feedback most welcome.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-7-12 - Complete
97. In the Aftermath of The Kiss
the lead up to the aftermath of a kiss, or the kiss...something that came to me in the aftermath of a kiss, this poem is true to my feelings and I hope you can give it a chance x
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Published: 3-4-12 - Complete
98. Stardust reviews
A short fantasy type poem about stardust and how it has been taken from humanity. It is also a metaphor the stardust i'd be interested to know if anyone can work it out.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-29-12 - Complete
99. Maybe What They Say Is Wrong
What if all these sayings that people have are wrong, maybe they are, maybe they aren't thats for you to decide but here's a cynical view of some sayings and mottos. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Published: 2-29-12 - Complete
100. If I Was Scared Would You Judge Me?
a freewrite i did when i was bored on the subject of fears, you may notice i've used a line from this poem to inspire one of my other ones, brownie points to you if you notice. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Published: 2-29-12 - Complete
101. A Smile Can Have A Thousand Meanings
Have you noticed, I expect you have, that a smile changes with the different emotions that are put behind it? You can never really hide your true feelings away when you smile. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Published: 2-29-12 - Complete
102. Would You Fight To The Bloody Death? reviews
what would you do to find your place on the skid-marks of society...please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-28-12 - Complete
103. The Rainbow Dappled Street
What happens down the rainbow dappled street in the balmy yellow sun...an attempt at a fantasy typeish poem for me, non-rhyming id love to know what you think of it not quite tradgedy
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Published: 2-28-12 - Complete
104. They Say on the Eve of Death reviews
they say on the eve of death...thats just it what do they say happens on the eve of death and does it matter what they say because maybe its different for everyone? Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-12 - Complete
105. Cry in the Night
home alone and i can hear next door's little girl crying because she had to go to bed, it made me think about what people would do if they heard a child scream in the night...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 2-24-12 - Complete
106. What Would You Do For Him?
what would you be prepared to do to show someone how much you cared, how extreme would you be? Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 2-23-12 - Complete
107. Love Making
a poem that came to me when i was trying to sleep and i just couldnt until i had written it down. rating is suitable trust me. please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Published: 2-20-12 - Complete
108. Life's Little Motto reviews
you may have heard of a little saying life's a *****, this is a version i came up with ages ago. rated for language please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-20-12 - Complete
109. Last Lifeline
came to me the other night when i was trying to sleep, i just had to write it down it was so powerful in my mind. The first few stanzas are one person and the last is from the 'last lifeline's' pov. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Published: 2-20-12 - Complete
110. The Fun Run
originally part of my people watching series coming soon but i preferred it as an individual. short fun and light hearted
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Published: 2-18-12 - Complete
111. As I Watch reviews
If you stand in one place in a busy city for long enough, the constant flow of people makes you feel as if the whole world is walking by as you watch. Feedback welcome, especially thoughts on rhyme scheme.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-18-12 - Complete
112. Don't You Speak To Me Of Sin reviews
its ...different for me as anyone who knows my work will see. DEFINITELY NOT discriminatory against religion the poem is purely about the man not the Lord
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-18-12 - Complete
113. Your Eyes
someone said to me the other day how much we change and how however hard we try our eyes will always give away our true feelings, it got me thinking about different points in life and how the emotions involved affect our eyes. feedback welcomed
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Published: 2-18-12 - Complete
114. Did I Say All The Wrong Things?
The sudden realisation that you might have given someone the wrong idea, in love, life and when the lines and boudaries of friendship become dangerously blurred...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Published: 2-15-12 - Complete
115. I Miss You
valentines day again, another valentines without my lovely boyfriend. just a poem to express my feelings, please read and review
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Published: 2-14-12 - Complete
116. Don't Be Jealous
when you have an inkling theres feelings of jealousy or suspicions of cheating, just trying to set the facts straight can be hard. Please read and review?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Published: 2-11-12 - Complete
117. Dream? reviews
not knowing whether your dreams are nightmares or are the nightmares dreams? please read and review
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-9-12 - Complete
118. Master of Disguise reviews
i always feel as if i have so many faces and facades for different people they confuse me sometimes too, please read and review
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-9-12 - Complete
119. In a word he is
someone asked me today to describe my boyfriend in a word, heres what i came up with upon reflection, please read and review
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Published: 2-4-12 - Complete
120. Know This reviews
another poem based on my life...feedback welcome
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
121. The Truth reviews
a poem i wrote when i was going through a rough patch with my boyfriend, the feeling like no one is listening can be horrible.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
122. Creator of Man reviews
Another religious one from me, feedback welcomed!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
123. Street Artist reviews
a short 50 word story i wrote when i was 11 for a competition i won :
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
124. A Vow reviews
The clue is in the title, a short poem in the style of a wedding vow.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
125. Just Friends Again
a very old poem, feedback very welcome.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
126. Seasonal Love
just a theory i have that the seasons do affect the way we love obviously this is exaggerated its poetry feedback welcome :
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
127. The Widower
a very short one, made me smile when i was writing it
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
128. Guardian Angel reviews
The weirdest rhyme scheme i've ever done, it was written a while ago and i'd love any advice on how to improve it maybe?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
129. My Love
a poem i wrote to my boyfriend last Valentines day, not my best in my opinion but when i wrote it the words had so much flow.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Published: 1-29-12 - Complete
130. The Ideal reviews
do we work for the ideal or should we be given it? hellish work or heavenly nothingness?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-12 - Complete
131. The Artist and The Painting reviews
i was inspired today, and for once not by a bus ticket or homework feedback welcome x
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-26-12 - Complete
132. If You Died Tommorow reviews
this is loosely based on my current situation, a slightly toned down version of my feelings on this subject as its one very close to my heart, an emotional outlet ...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-18-12 - Complete
133. Tears won't fall reviews
another bus ticket starter, not too sure about this ending but i prefer to write poems out and not re-write them lots so this is the 'first draft' version if you like
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-18-12 - Complete
134. Peace reviews
i love my moments of random inspiration, i like this one itsmy opinion on 'peace'
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-18-12 - Complete
135. Lonely Chaos reviews
sat meant to be doing homework common theme here and i had a sudden urge to write a poem about a WW1 soldier with shell shock
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-18-12 - Complete
136. The Void
one i just came up with in my noggin sat doing biology homework :
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Published: 1-17-12 - Complete
137. Petal in the Night reviews
a very 'what i call artyfarty' poem o'mine not too sure about the ending feedback welcome
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-17-12 - Complete
138. The Great reviews
again a random thing that started on a bus ticket, one of my favoirites this :
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-17-12 - Complete
139. The Make Ups Gone
something i wrote on a bus ticket in geography, bit cheesy originally song lyrics.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Published: 1-17-12 - Complete