| The Rose Alchemist |
Author has written 5 stories for Romance, Life, and General. I like to write, i also enjoy reading just about every genre at some time or the other. I don't think my writing is bad, but i don't think its that great either. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is entirely welcomed, or any commentary on my work for that matter :) My favorite genre to write in is fantasy. My first story published here is THE DISTURBANCE in which there is an underground world where gods better creations have lived in secret for thousands of years, despising humanity. And one day agents from this world come to take away the halflings that have lived in the human world, and one in particular, a girl named Luna, puts up an almost fair fight against her captor. IN THE DESERT is my second story, about a young Arabic girl named Samar, who flees from a life inside the crowned prince's harem, and must out run his best general while not dying inside the Rub'al khali desert in the meantime. She faces an incredible challenge, as the desert has claimed many lives, and the general almost the same amount, maybe more. Samar has been forced into a life of unending exile and loneliness, until she can finally escape the country by going North and finding a new country to settle in. Will she make it or die trying to regain her freedom? Or far worse, be forced into everlasting slavery to a man she despises. Metal Mouths is my third story about a world in which humans own the land on one side of the Great Ocean while the inhumans have domain over the other side. Dahlia is a human girl who saw her family and entire village murdered as a child, then becoming an orphan and wandering about her nation nearly starving to death or dying of cold every year. Until finally one day a man named Oax decides to adopt the supposed "cursed child" who survived when no else did, taking her in as his own daughter in the city. But Dahlia is perhaps doomed to sorrow, as she finds out when an inhuman comes in the night and kills her one protector, her adopted father. His murderer is an inhuman, who forcefully takes her to the other side of the Ocean to be a slave to the most feared king the inhuman lands have ever known. Me: uhm...not really much to say about myself on a personal note. I'm an amateur artist, like history, like multicultural things, love alternative music and a little bit of everything else. My favorite books are Shantaram, Tithe and Ironside, Wuthering Heights, Dracula, The Black Book of Secrets, The Good Thief, The Hobbit and Tess of the D'Urbervilles. | |||||
1. Metal Mouths » reviewsDahlia has had a horrible life full of pain and death, until she meets a man willing to adopt and take care of her in the capital. But one day she comes home to find him killed, and his murderer manages to kidnap her and get her onto a ship crossing the ocean, into the inhuman kingdoms. Where she is bought as a slave by the most feared man in the non-mortal world.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 25,771 - Reviews: 34 - Updated: 1-14-13 - Published: 6-3-122. The Disturbance » reviews"Now do you understand why you should obey me, girl?" It took all of Luna's will power to reply like some beaten child "yes" she said in a whisper, planning on dieing before she actually meant it, or his death coming first, preferably.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,457 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 10-22-12 - Published: 3-11-123. The Thoughts That Kill reviewsA short poem about something i was musing about the other day. Rather dark as usual.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-19-124. In The Desert » reviewsThe desert isn't a hospitable place, as Samar knows when she is forced into exile from her home town when the crowned prince tries to take her for his "own purposes". Now she must out run his right hand man, but the odds aren't in her favor.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 19,667 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 8-23-12 - Published: 3-30-125. Anne Boleyn reviewsAnorexia and Binge eating disorder, or Anne Boleyn. My first try at poetry, rather dark.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-18-12 - Complete