Cluttered Minds

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since	: 03-23-12, id: 832310, Profile Updated: 07-05-12
country	: USA

Author has written 4 stories for Horror, Fable, and General.

I'm only recently getting into writing, drawing is more my forte. Totally not used to the set up of fictionpress.com so I apologize for any formatting issues. I'm really looking for critique and how I can improve as a writer.

If anyone is interested here is my deviantART account as well http://gooeypanda.deviantart.com/

Random Information

-I have recently turned 16

-I own a ball python and really love snakes in general

-My writing skills aren't the best but I try my hardest to improve.

-I love art of every kind

-I love contact juggling and am working to improve on my skills everyday.

-I live in Colorado of the USA

-I love video games, especially Mirrors Edge and Skyrim at the moment

-I wear glasses and sometimes contacts, it depends I suppose.

-I like grey

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1. Creating Perfection reviews
Something I wrote at 1am, there's not much sense to it. Read and you'll know what I mean.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 644 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-10-12

2. Life Lessons reviews
A girl and a monster have lived together for many years, they were always happy and never faced fear or sorrow. Sometimes naivety is a blessing but we all have to grow up someday A free write. Please Read and Review, it means a lot :
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 667 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-7-12 - Complete

3. The Burning reviews
An old man watches as a flame consumes everything in his sight, instead of fleeing he watches and remembers. The end of his ancient life is near and he is at peace. R & R please, I love good critique to help me improve.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,080 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-17-12 - Complete

4. A Child's Dream reviews
Children seem to see things that the adults don't realize are there. We think what they say is simply their imagination or a nightmare. What if it wasn't just that. R & R please, critique welcome though this was written a year ago.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 901 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-17-12 - Complete