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| GingerBlonger |
Author has written 3 stories for Fantasy. Maye tends towards comma abuse and beige prose. Cat tends towards making up words, odd word choice and purple prose. We hope to reach the awkward and unappetizing-looking puce that is good literature :D | |||||
1. Soundless Dawn » reviewsThe world is covered in an unnatural, permanent darkness by a Darkness-Weaving usurper, and the Light Weavers have been all but wiped out. As per usual, we would really, REALLY like poliiiite feedback and criticism, we can't get better if no one tells us how.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Horror - Chapters: 5 - Words: 13,462 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-15-12 - Published: 7-31-122. Another Face » reviewsEveryone is born with two personalities, no known exceptions. Running from the Mister the particularly powerful alternate of otherwise great father James McCoy is dangerous and leaves a path of destruction in Olive and Adelaide's wake. Same as with Water and Dust, third person is unloved and we need poliiiiite feedback and crit, please.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Horror - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,467 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-12 - Published: 7-30-123. Water and Dust reviewsThe supply of water is strictly controlled, spent lavishly on the upper classes, and cut off from the City's outskirts. Any polite feedback/criticism is appreciated, it's hard to get people to read third person...Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,364 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-30-12
