Thanks to NaNoWriMo, I finally managed to complete a story! In the interest of taking that story and making it better, I thought I would post here and get some feedback. I always welcome constructive criticism and questions for clarification purposes.

About me: I'm a mom and a student (majoring in Psychology) and I work two jobs, so finding time to write can be difficult. I am an avid RPer, however, so while I struggle to find the time for my original works, I do write every day. Hopefully I will get enough practice to improve to the point of being publication-worthy!