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Hey guys! My name is Lana. My best friend Kyla (HeartachesAtMidnight) and I write stories together. She's a way 'beta' writer than me, but bare with me.
Constructive criticism (with plenty of sugar coating!) would be appreciated!
a silly romantic comedy that I am just using for practice/get more into writing. I got the idea while walking up to my house from my bus stop. I modeled their suburban neighborhood just like mine. While walking up the street, i came up with the idea. And then i told Kyla, and she's helping me write it ad come up with ideas.
Character inspiration/ explanation (not all included)
Eve: average girl. Brown hair, blue green eyes. sarcastic and focused
Fallon: her crazy sister who just doesn't shut up. Long blonde hair (usually in braid), blue green eyes. Hyperactive and a pain in the
Jason: brown eyes and hair, home schooled. loves drawing and all thing internet-culture related.
Clark: rectangle glasses and Indian. Nerdy and loves to joke around, a sweetheart. Likes Eve
Katy: major valley girl, self important. Black hair and blue eyes.
Fletcher: popular guy who is less than smart.
Timmy: redheaded and nervous. Likes Fallon
Uncle Arnold and Aunt Amelia: Amelia was once a hippie. they have their own adorable love story. Arnold is a Volkswagen salesman. Amelia went to the dealership to get repairs on her retro Volkswagen camper van. They met and have been married ever since.
Tied and Shot
my first story I've ever posted, and my favey-fave! (new stories in progress!). I've always daydreamed that someday I would get to be a cop/badass. Dylan is one of six in a minor assault group, she's sixteen, but hardcore. Her parents disappeared after her house was raided when she was home alone. She escaped and had to leave her comfortable suburban town. She still misses the boy next-door that she had a crush on for a long time, but she'll never see him again. She barely even remembers him. But did he and her parents have a connection that she didn't know about? So anyways, she was picked up by the same assault group her parents were associated with, naturally. Ever since that childhood experience, she has been trained to fight.
Dylan: looks ordinary, feels ordinary. I tried to model her after me, but I'm cooler than her (on my own terms)
Joey: Soulless and harsh, Dylan wants to be "perfect" like him. But how could he possibly have no emotions? What is he hiding from her? Looks inspired by a picture i found of one of my favey-fave youtubers: Joey Graceffa. He played an evil drug lord/ abusive guy in one of strawburrys videos. somehow i will find out how to show you the pic. So yes, a picture is worth a thousand words, and this picture gave me part of the inspiration for this story :)
link to see what he looks like! http://distilleryimage8.s3.amazonaws.com/d56b21e0efd511e1bfbf22000a1c91a7_6.jpg
Chaz: based off this older guy i know. Story-Chaz is an understated guy, who looks intimidating when he frowns, sweet when he laughs, and menacing when he hurts you.
Sparrow: based off another youtuber, Bunny Meyer, aka Grav3yardgirl. Sparrow has a flowy personality but still loves her spikes.
link to see what she looks like! http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-fn8obCRrYJs/UAmQ2A36d5I/AAAAAAAADMA/Z2ymfKA8LaY/s1600/Image3.jpg
Ally: just the stereotypical blonde, she doesn't fight, but her best (and worst) trait is her ability to distract.
Keri: She's a witty and sarcastic person who has her own problems, and keeps them to herself.
*Annie: a useless add-on member to their group that they have to pretend they like because she's younger. She refuses to train, which is the purpose she was put in the group. They don't consider her as part of the group.
More about me and my very exciting life:
HeartachesAtMidnight -my friend, Kyla
I've known her for a year now, and we are best friends. We like to go in the woods, watch youtube, and write together. Kyla is amazing and she's my inspiration.
Sports - Soccer, MMA (another thing Kyla and I do together; hit each other as a sport!), and rugby. I sound mean and scary, but I'm not always like that.
daily day - wake up (slowly), school, youtube, sport (depending on day), eat dinner, sleep. Told you I was interesting.
weekends - almost every weekend I'm with Kyla. So basically I (in no order/all at once) eat, laugh, watch youtube, write, text, and sleep.
an apple a day keeps the bullies away, but only if you throw it hard enough.
a punishment, sometimes, don't always fit the crime
for ever love letter written, another one burned.
I'm more than what meets the eye.
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