Hey guys,

So i'm an aspiring writer. My ultimate goal in life would be to publish my own novels, perhaps even a trilogy. The main story i'd like input on is my story, Evelyn, which i have been attempting to write since late 2008. Since then i have re-written and re-written the same story, trying from different angles, perspectives, ect.

If you're interested in seeing an old copy, take a look at Simsted's profile. That was the last attempt and if you read my current one you can see the difference. I'm feeling good about this attempt though.

So please, review my story. All input is greatly appreciated. Plus i return reviews, if that offers a greater incentive :)

Thanks,

GiveItTime :)