Don't know what to put on here so i'll just give it to you straight, I'm here to fulfill my dream of becoming a published writer. I'm always open to new ideas and would appreciate all reviews and feedback.

Thank you in advance for reading my first story, if it's popular I will upload one of the sequels. Please tell me if there's anything you liked/disliked about the story so I can improve on my work.

You have taken the time to read my story and chose to review and I will read all reviews and take all comments on board to help make it better. I hope you enjoyed Part 1 and I look forward to sharing the sequels and my other stories with you.

Oh and one last thing: Thank you for your support and time, I look forward to your honest reviews.

BTW, changed my pen name don't worry it's still the same person just didn't want to keep my real name on here, I'll save that for the day I become professional ;).