This is a story I am planning on turning into a book, I used a "version" of myself, as well as the person I care about most, as the main guy and girl. This is not yet complete and I welcome any and all criticism whether it only be if it's good or bad, or if it helps me with my writing. Please don't say he ages to quickly, most of this is while he is 50. Thank you!
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,564 - Published: 1-30-13