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since: 08-12-08, id: 626137, Profile Updated: 12-31-08
country: United States
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Author has written 40 stories for Romance, Life, Love, Fantasy, Horror, Family, and General.

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"All who wander

are not lost"

--JRR Tolkien

The 19 Rules for good Riting:

Each pronoun agrees with their antecedent.
Just between you and I, case is important.
Verbs has to agree with their subject.
Watch out for irregular verbs which has cropped up into our language.
Don't use no double negatives.
A writer mustn't shift your point of view.
When dangling, don't use participles.
Join clauses good like a conjunction should.
And don't use conjunctions to start sentences.
Don't use a run-on sentence you got to punctuate it.
About sentence fragments.
In letters themes reports articles and stuff like that we use commas to keep strings apart.
Don't use commas, which aren't necessary.
Its important to use apostrophe's right.
Don't abbrev.
Check to see if you any words out.
In my opinion I think that the author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words which he does not really need.
Then, of course, there's that old one: Never use a preposition to end a sentence with.
Last but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.

I'm not perfect. Next time you think you are, try walking on water. I know a few who've drowned.

Love and love and love again,

Chloe

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1. Disintegration
Let us not remember desire, but what exactly we desired in that moment. She never kept up with his demented implications.
Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,255 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-6-09 - Published: 11-6-09
2. Pretend reviews
with me, until we just can't play anymore.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-09
3. China
reminds me of porcelain red artist's plates.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-09
4. there was no purpose
a reason to continue on for her.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 7-8-09
5. sister, sister
the train left with your soul today.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 7-8-09
6. Lullaby
hush little baby, don't say a word. shut your lips and you won't be heard...
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Family/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-12-09 - Published: 5-12-09
7. Mom reviews
I wished there was 693 ways to say the words 'I love you.'
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 537 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-6-09 - Published: 5-6-09
8. pitter patter reviews
my tears went 'splash'
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-3-09 - Published: 4-3-09
9. Reflections reviews
I will tell you stories of mirrored edges... reflections that shaped our l.i.e ...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-3-09 - Published: 4-3-09
10. This is a story of love reviews
he dies in the end
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-09
11. You made a wish
I don't think it was ever about you
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-09
12. did you know reviews
I lied when I said it wasn't your fault
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-09
13. This Love Story reviews
Little fish ain't supposed to fly with dolphins.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-09
14. eat my words reviews
I promised him I would
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-1-09 - Published: 2-1-09
15. Lipgloss reviews
my lips were numb there after
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-1-09 - Published: 2-1-09
16. Sam reviews
I didn't believe Sam when she said she loved him. She had no reason to be in love...he was a jerk, and she didn't even know what 'love' meant. Then I saw the way they touched each other.... How had I not believed her?
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 478 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-18-09 - Published: 1-18-09
17. Pheonix Lament reviews
Your tears could heal my bleeding wounds, but I only felt whole when I was burning.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-18-09 - Published: 1-18-09
18. I can feel you breathe reviews
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Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-10-08 - Published: 12-10-08
19. Disintegrating reviews
Stop. Stop. Stop. You've turned us into M.O.N.S.T.E.R.S.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-10-08 - Published: 12-10-08
20. I would cry reviews
and he'd take off flying. Again.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-10-08 - Published: 12-10-08
21. skins stretched
because i don't want to see me cry
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-17-08 - Published: 11-17-08
22. Red Roses
They stained my floor with murder and flesh.
Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-16-08 - Published: 11-16-08
23. i will do what i can
to make this work
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-16-08 - Published: 11-16-08
24. I kissed his lifeless body reviews
until I was weak
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-08 - Published: 11-9-08
25. I could feel flames reviews
licking the edges of my center of gravity
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-08 - Published: 11-9-08
26. I wanted him dead
just to mend his bones
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-08 - Published: 11-9-08
27. Hide and Seek » reviews
It was just a game... yet her feet couldn’t seem to move her away fast enough.
Horror - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,017 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-21-08 - Published: 10-20-08
28. i am but a girl
with a problem and food
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-30-08 - Published: 9-30-08
29. she is not pretty
she is beautiful
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-28-08 - Published: 9-28-08
30. Fragment's of my Universe reviews
No matter our time or place in the universe, we would always be in love. The separate paths we chose, the millions of people that we dated, and all of the tears we shed could not come between us. Not in a million years.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 829 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-24-08 - Published: 9-24-08
31. Siren's Song reviews
It made no difference that she hated me. I wanted her, and her alone. Poem to upcoming story.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-08 - Published: 9-23-08
32. The Human Song
It is what the human race lives by. One nation gone under, divided and insufferable. We're all the same.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-21-08 - Published: 9-21-08
33. I am falling reviews
please don't catch me
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-08 - Published: 9-20-08
34. I'm losing my sanity
I'm going insane
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-08 - Published: 9-20-08
35. I'm gonna smile for you
even if it kills me
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-08 - Published: 9-20-08
36. I don't need to see the sun again
because there's enough light in your eyes to light the whole world
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-08 - Published: 9-20-08
37. when you love someone reviews
they should be worth crying over
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-18-08 - Published: 9-18-08
38. i walked around in yellow reviews
on top of the world
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-08 - Published: 9-18-08
39. Christian
When the mistake we made was never having planned to fall in love. Singing this song, singing along, makes it easier for me to see you go. But in doing so, in letting you go, it only serves to show me that I'm still in love with you. My romantic accident.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,241 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-18-08 - Published: 9-18-08
40. Please reviews
And as I turned, I tried to imagine that he had heard me speak the truth. I tried to imagine him smiling behind me, happy about what I had done. But even I could not convince myself of that. I was falling in love. Again.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 820 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-15-08 - Published: 9-15-08
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