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| Burning Moon |
Author has written 70 stories for Religion, Fantasy, Nature, Life, General, School, Love, Friendship, War, Family, and Song. I was born in Israel and my first language I'm 16, and a guy. I live in Maryland. I use lyrics to express myself endlessly. | |||||||||
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Escape reviews...i’m hoping in time that my memory won’t fade // and i’ll keep on believing you wait for the day // when not closer are even our hearts than our shapes // for that's why you told me you wanted escapeComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-08 - Published: 4-18-082. summer reviewsi'm electrified, but listless // (as i list this litany of wishes for you; but always wordless in the stead // of effort-driven expression)Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-063. lengua reviewscon cada cambio de lengua, // el sonido se pone raro, y los ideas empeza a parecer desconocidosLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-064. language reviewsthe struggle for words, for language (constraints of custom // and caprice complicating further)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-065. found wantinga hundred thousand brilliant suns (they pale before your smile) // couldn't warm me today (and so like it, bright and cold; fake and meaningless and oh god so distant)Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-066. theft'tilMyCheeksAreHeated(ThisExchangeOfWords,OfMemes+Perceptions(InAPerfectWorld,ButAllThatTravelsIsTone;//WeBothKnowYou'veWon)//+Nature,AsEver,ProvidingTheCure:ByMeansOfRisingMoisture(OurVoicesFollowSuit),'til,AtLast,//WeBothAreColdLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-067. romance reviewsAtTheVeryThought,ThereComesA//PendulumStrobelight(SuddenHeat+BitterCold//+SweatingThroughBoth)//ButPullingOff(ThroughNoFaultOfHisOwn)//ACasualQuery(ThePulsingRhythmHidden,Just;//+FastEnoughToShameAHummingbird-TwiceThirty-OddScoreEachMinute//HeThinksOfHer)Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-5-06 - Published: 4-5-068. spat reviewsyour lips part, the dam opens // and streaming forth (in equal parts spit and spite) // come epithet epiphanies: // revelations (though neither revels), // insight (though we both are blinded - by love, by pain, by having lain so long like so much carpet)Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-3-06 - Published: 4-3-069. flow reviewsthe transfer of heat//a capella - bereft of accompaniment//whether by emotions untold, unwanted//or strings that show only in the light of feverish paranoia//brought on by grasping insecurites, fishing for compliments//and getting back an empty hookLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-1-06 - Published: 4-1-0610. sol reviewsglistening dew(s + dont's)//bring light 2 this fiasco//that, 4 how many months now?, you + i act out//on grass the shape of which is not the same 4 our passage//(our imprints on the earth, on each other)//it was inevitable that we should reach this night.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-29-06 - Published: 3-29-0611. the drummer whose beats mete out rhythm for sleep reviewsyes,every action+effect,their cause lies firm in retrospect // within the confines of those hands that,us,like mannequins,direct // +the drumbeats ring out,strong,like a dictator's song // regardless of your own volition,you will end up in the throng.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 626 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-15-06 - Published: 3-15-0612. out » reviewslong walks back to doors with locks//and windows, blinds;// blinding truants from wrath forthcoming - a rich crop from rich sowing//and stopping for nothing is this cyclic action, by instinct, not thought//not quick, but hard fought...[lipogrammatic]Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,091 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-21-06 - Published: 2-21-0613. naïveté reviewsand so the flick'ring of the screen // controls the every movement, sound // that comes from kids: unsung, unseen // yes, even as they get aroundLife - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-7-06 - Published: 2-7-0614. sermonthe rhythm, forceful, filled the air // the strident beat compelled us there // and we were forced to think of sin, // our lives all full thereof, and thin // was the disguise before the law // or so he would have had us thoughtLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 368 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-7-06 - Published: 2-7-0615. well, i'm nothing reviewshere's a song for the forgotten, for the getting and forgetting // yes, an anthem for the singing by the loners at the weddingsLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-4-06 - Published: 2-4-0616. noctum reviewsor perhaps the click-click of the computer's keys resounds as an amplified measure of the speed of your thoughts (a beacon to all who groggily appear at the foot of the stairs demanding to know the time, as if you both didn't already know)Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0617. affiar reviewsabove the world, grey skies hide shining stars // viewed by bright eyes, while the wrists just crawl with scars // and the rhythm gets slower as the time goes by //// until the end becomes a jumble and the meaning has gone dry.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-0618. forgotten reviewsand the chorus to this song does not exist at all, you see // 'cause what interests me is testing all your lyric memories // so here again with metalyrics (as i rhyme about the rhyme) // i end this song forsaken 'cause i'm frankly out of time.Song - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 371 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-0619. breakdown reviewsand the taste of tears that burn your tongue // joins bitter thoughts of what you've done // and ev'ry thing you've ever said (ends up as fuel for nameless fears)Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-0620. silence reviewsdis silence stretches,expectant,poignant,full o'pause(n'effect)\as t'anticipation o't'next moment fills t'world w/breaths held2long,\&heads dizzy w/excitement@t'prospect o't'future\&t'calm b4t'storm's got nothin on t'static dat fills my ears n dis moment.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-0621. rea lie ty reviewssince when do you know how to kiss? // and who the hell is this with you, // to steal what we could never do?Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-14-06 - Published: 1-14-0622. resignation reviewsso with the wobble of the earth and the pull of the moon, he joins the peaceful waters and knows his cares are gone (soon).Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-26-05 - Published: 12-26-0523. Mask » reviewswith a sigh, sigh, sigh, he passes them by // and the words on his mind spell 'why, why, why'Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 614 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 11-24-0524. Mirror reviewslove songs at midnight and the sound of everyone asleepLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-28-05 - Published: 8-28-0525. the walk reviewsred heat rushes, shading cheek and filling head // with untoward glimpses into futures that cannot beLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-10-05 - Published: 8-10-0526. Bright Eyes reviewspromises whispered in the unlit grass, // as hands brush and hearts race, as eyes shut // and tears flowLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-05 - Published: 8-8-0527. War » reviewsshe rages out on her front lawnWar - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-5-05 - Published: 2-21-0528. The Fire reviewsa fire burns behind his eyes // as shapeless words march 'cross the screen // fev'rishly he breaks all ties // with half-baked words and half-truth screens.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-05 - Published: 7-22-0529. Wounded reviewsyour wings are bent, but not broken // you've not flown for so long . . .Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-21-05 - Published: 7-21-0530. Illusion reviewsraise up your weary eyes // unto the cloudy skies // and ask your endless "why's" // as stupidity and lies // run rampant in disguiseLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0531. Oblivious reviewsyou play along, you joke, you leap//through hoops while in your mind you weepLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0532. Big Shoes, Strange Town reviewshis shoes are big, he knows the town // but still his feet move up and downLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-0533. unable to connectwhen i write, i find myself // unable to connectLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-0534. fourty two reviewsincoherent thoughts jumbled together, at times resembling poetryLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-2-05 - Published: 5-2-0535. Insomnia reviewsyou struggle (to fall) / a sleep like deathLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-04 - Published: 12-30-0436. Breath reviewsdid not know that i would care/take a breath of perfect air;/[her personality]Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-7-04 - Published: 11-7-0437. Such Great Heights llrewritell reviewsrewite i did of Such Great Heights by The Postal ServiceLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-04 - Published: 7-31-0438. Unwritten reviewsA re-write of Sugarcult's "Memory"Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-04 - Published: 7-17-0439. Futile reviewsrated r for language . . . a rant at society for its treatment of meLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-0440. Pointless reviewspointless is my very life and all the things i do . . . pointless is how i expected different things from youLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-0441. Modern Angel reviewstryin to figure out why i keep fallin . . . [for her]Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-0442. Lost Ilcausell reviewsthe world today . . . or is it [just] me?Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-04 - Published: 2-13-0443. Lament to the One reviewsmissed her . . .Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-3-04 - Published: 2-3-0444. Falling Angel » reviewsangel can't deal . . . (TWO CHAPTERS)Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 374 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-8-04 - Published: 12-17-0345. Relationship x incomplete x reviewsincompleted poem i've been workin on . . . relationships always seem to end in failure . . .Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-03 - Published: 12-30-0346. Moments reviewsslice-of-life . . . of what is up to youLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-0347. CrushEd Heart reviewswhat you learn/feel from a crushLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-0348. Mistake reviewsdws = driving while stonedGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0349. Song reviewsiambic pentameter poem i had to write for english last yearSong - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0350. Thank You reviewspoem thanking my dad/mom . . . generally mushyFamily - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0351. Teacher reviewsstupid poem i wrote when i was bored. enjoy? lolLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0352. The Price of War reviewspretty costly . . .War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0353. Suicide Note reviewsguy loses girl, guy loses head, guy loses lifeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0354. Moved reviewsa good friend moved away recently . . .Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0355. For You reviewsbig mistake . . .Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0356. Nerd reviewsstory of my life . . . lolLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0357. Not Quite Shattered reviews. . . relationship on the brink of breaking . . .Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0358. Pain reviewsa little ditty about an acquantance of mine . . .General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0359. Secret reviewsmy ballad to an oblivious angelLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0360. Vicious Figure Eight of Knowledge reviewswhat else is wrong with humanityNature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0361. Vicious Realization reviewswhat's wrong with humanityLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0362. School Day reviewsA normal school day.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0363. Life Story reviewsAverage no-gooder's life story.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0364. Library reviewsPom about libraries.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,081 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0365. KnowledgeOpinions on the nature of humanity.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0366. Invasion of Light reviewsLife goes on, peace is possible.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0367. Drown reviewsSuicide by waterLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0368. Sins reviewsHumans are condemned for poluting the earthNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0369. Celestial Bodies reviewsPoem about the sun moon and earth.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-3-03 - Published: 8-3-0370. Anti Semitic World reviewsThere are too many anti-semitic people in this world.Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-03