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since: 08-02-03, id: 367765
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Author has written 70 stories for Religion, Fantasy, Nature, Life, General, School, Love, Friendship, War, Family, and Song.

I was born in Israel and my first language
is Hebrew, though I also speak English fluently and Spanish haltingly.
I like to sing. I'm a perfectionist and a hypocrite. I think too much.
Or not enough. Sometimes I'm honest, and sometimes brutally so. I write
poetry. Mostly for the attention, but sometimes to address issues I
feel strongly about (you can tell these apart by the large drop in
quality) and sometimes to get a two or three line rhyme out of my head.
I can be arrogant. I get pissed off when others are arrogant. Like I
said, I'm a hypocrite. Above all else, I desperately need not to be
alone.

I'm 16, and a guy. I live in Maryland. I use lyrics to express myself endlessly.
Anything else you'll have to figure out as we go along.

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1. Escape reviews
...i’m hoping in time that my memory won’t fade // and i’ll keep on believing you wait for the day // when not closer are even our hearts than our shapes // for that's why you told me you wanted escape
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-08 - Published: 4-18-08
2. summer reviews
i'm electrified, but listless // (as i list this litany of wishes for you; but always wordless in the stead // of effort-driven expression)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
3. lengua reviews
con cada cambio de lengua, // el sonido se pone raro, y los ideas empeza a parecer desconocidos
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-06
4. language reviews
the struggle for words, for language (constraints of custom // and caprice complicating further)
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-06
5. found wanting
a hundred thousand brilliant suns (they pale before your smile) // couldn't warm me today (and so like it, bright and cold; fake and meaningless and oh god so distant)
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
6. theft
'tilMyCheeksAreHeated(ThisExchangeOfWords,OfMemes+Perceptions(InAPerfectWorld,ButAllThatTravelsIsTone;//WeBothKnowYou'veWon)//+Nature,AsEver,ProvidingTheCure:ByMeansOfRisingMoisture(OurVoicesFollowSuit),'til,AtLast,//WeBothAreCold
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
7. romance reviews
AtTheVeryThought,ThereComesA//PendulumStrobelight(SuddenHeat+BitterCold//+SweatingThroughBoth)//ButPullingOff(ThroughNoFaultOfHisOwn)//ACasualQuery(ThePulsingRhythmHidden,Just;//+FastEnoughToShameAHummingbird-TwiceThirty-OddScoreEachMinute//HeThinksOfHer)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-5-06 - Published: 4-5-06
8. spat reviews
your lips part, the dam opens // and streaming forth (in equal parts spit and spite) // come epithet epiphanies: // revelations (though neither revels), // insight (though we both are blinded - by love, by pain, by having lain so long like so much carpet)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-3-06 - Published: 4-3-06
9. flow reviews
the transfer of heat//a capella - bereft of accompaniment//whether by emotions untold, unwanted//or strings that show only in the light of feverish paranoia//brought on by grasping insecurites, fishing for compliments//and getting back an empty hook
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-1-06 - Published: 4-1-06
10. sol reviews
glistening dew(s + dont's)//bring light 2 this fiasco//that, 4 how many months now?, you + i act out//on grass the shape of which is not the same 4 our passage//(our imprints on the earth, on each other)//it was inevitable that we should reach this night.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-29-06 - Published: 3-29-06
11. the drummer whose beats mete out rhythm for sleep reviews
yes,every action+effect,their cause lies firm in retrospect // within the confines of those hands that,us,like mannequins,direct // +the drumbeats ring out,strong,like a dictator's song // regardless of your own volition,you will end up in the throng.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 626 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-15-06 - Published: 3-15-06
12. out » reviews
long walks back to doors with locks//and windows, blinds;// blinding truants from wrath forthcoming - a rich crop from rich sowing//and stopping for nothing is this cyclic action, by instinct, not thought//not quick, but hard fought...[lipogrammatic]
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,091 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-21-06 - Published: 2-21-06
13. naïveté reviews
and so the flick'ring of the screen // controls the every movement, sound // that comes from kids: unsung, unseen // yes, even as they get around
Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-7-06 - Published: 2-7-06
14. sermon
the rhythm, forceful, filled the air // the strident beat compelled us there // and we were forced to think of sin, // our lives all full thereof, and thin // was the disguise before the law // or so he would have had us thought
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 368 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-7-06 - Published: 2-7-06
15. well, i'm nothing reviews
here's a song for the forgotten, for the getting and forgetting // yes, an anthem for the singing by the loners at the weddings
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-4-06 - Published: 2-4-06
16. noctum reviews
or perhaps the click-click of the computer's keys resounds as an amplified measure of the speed of your thoughts (a beacon to all who groggily appear at the foot of the stairs demanding to know the time, as if you both didn't already know)
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-06
17. affiar reviews
above the world, grey skies hide shining stars // viewed by bright eyes, while the wrists just crawl with scars // and the rhythm gets slower as the time goes by //// until the end becomes a jumble and the meaning has gone dry.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-06
18. forgotten reviews
and the chorus to this song does not exist at all, you see // 'cause what interests me is testing all your lyric memories // so here again with metalyrics (as i rhyme about the rhyme) // i end this song forsaken 'cause i'm frankly out of time.
Song - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 371 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-06
19. breakdown reviews
and the taste of tears that burn your tongue // joins bitter thoughts of what you've done // and ev'ry thing you've ever said (ends up as fuel for nameless fears)
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-06
20. silence reviews
dis silence stretches,expectant,poignant,full o'pause(n'effect)\as t'anticipation o't'next moment fills t'world w/breaths held2long,\&heads dizzy w/excitement@t'prospect o't'future\&t'calm b4t'storm's got nothin on t'static dat fills my ears n dis moment.
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-22-06
21. rea lie ty reviews
since when do you know how to kiss? // and who the hell is this with you, // to steal what we could never do?
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-14-06 - Published: 1-14-06
22. resignation reviews
so with the wobble of the earth and the pull of the moon, he joins the peaceful waters and knows his cares are gone (soon).
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-26-05 - Published: 12-26-05
23. Mask » reviews
with a sigh, sigh, sigh, he passes them by // and the words on his mind spell 'why, why, why'
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 614 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 11-24-05
24. Mirror reviews
love songs at midnight and the sound of everyone asleep
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-28-05 - Published: 8-28-05
25. the walk reviews
red heat rushes, shading cheek and filling head // with untoward glimpses into futures that cannot be
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-10-05 - Published: 8-10-05
26. Bright Eyes reviews
promises whispered in the unlit grass, // as hands brush and hearts race, as eyes shut // and tears flow
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-05 - Published: 8-8-05
27. War » reviews
she rages out on her front lawn
War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-5-05 - Published: 2-21-05
28. The Fire reviews
a fire burns behind his eyes // as shapeless words march 'cross the screen // fev'rishly he breaks all ties // with half-baked words and half-truth screens.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-05 - Published: 7-22-05
29. Wounded reviews
your wings are bent, but not broken // you've not flown for so long . . .
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-21-05 - Published: 7-21-05
30. Illusion reviews
raise up your weary eyes // unto the cloudy skies // and ask your endless "why's" // as stupidity and lies // run rampant in disguise
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-05
31. Oblivious reviews
you play along, you joke, you leap//through hoops while in your mind you weep
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-05
32. Big Shoes, Strange Town reviews
his shoes are big, he knows the town // but still his feet move up and down
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-05
33. unable to connect
when i write, i find myself // unable to connect
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-05
34. fourty two reviews
incoherent thoughts jumbled together, at times resembling poetry
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-2-05 - Published: 5-2-05
35. Insomnia reviews
you struggle (to fall) / a sleep like death
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-04 - Published: 12-30-04
36. Breath reviews
did not know that i would care/take a breath of perfect air;/[her personality]
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-7-04 - Published: 11-7-04
37. Such Great Heights llrewritell reviews
rewite i did of Such Great Heights by The Postal Service
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-04 - Published: 7-31-04
38. Unwritten reviews
A re-write of Sugarcult's "Memory"
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-04 - Published: 7-17-04
39. Futile reviews
rated r for language . . . a rant at society for its treatment of me
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-04
40. Pointless reviews
pointless is my very life and all the things i do . . . pointless is how i expected different things from you
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-04
41. Modern Angel reviews
tryin to figure out why i keep fallin . . . [for her]
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-04
42. Lost Ilcausell reviews
the world today . . . or is it [just] me?
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-04 - Published: 2-13-04
43. Lament to the One reviews
missed her . . .
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-3-04 - Published: 2-3-04
44. Falling Angel » reviews
angel can't deal . . . (TWO CHAPTERS)
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 374 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-8-04 - Published: 12-17-03
45. Relationship x incomplete x reviews
incompleted poem i've been workin on . . . relationships always seem to end in failure . . .
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-03 - Published: 12-30-03
46. Moments reviews
slice-of-life . . . of what is up to you
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-03
47. CrushEd Heart reviews
what you learn/feel from a crush
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-03
48. Mistake reviews
dws = driving while stoned
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
49. Song reviews
iambic pentameter poem i had to write for english last year
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
50. Thank You reviews
poem thanking my dad/mom . . . generally mushy
Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
51. Teacher reviews
stupid poem i wrote when i was bored. enjoy? lol
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
52. The Price of War reviews
pretty costly . . .
War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
53. Suicide Note reviews
guy loses girl, guy loses head, guy loses life
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
54. Moved reviews
a good friend moved away recently . . .
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
55. For You reviews
big mistake . . .
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
56. Nerd reviews
story of my life . . . lol
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
57. Not Quite Shattered reviews
. . . relationship on the brink of breaking . . .
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
58. Pain reviews
a little ditty about an acquantance of mine . . .
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
59. Secret reviews
my ballad to an oblivious angel
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
60. Vicious Figure Eight of Knowledge reviews
what else is wrong with humanity
Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
61. Vicious Realization reviews
what's wrong with humanity
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-03
62. School Day reviews
A normal school day.
School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-03
63. Life Story reviews
Average no-gooder's life story.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
64. Library reviews
Pom about libraries.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,081 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
65. Knowledge
Opinions on the nature of humanity.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
66. Invasion of Light reviews
Life goes on, peace is possible.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
67. Drown reviews
Suicide by water
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
68. Sins reviews
Humans are condemned for poluting the earth
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
69. Celestial Bodies reviews
Poem about the sun moon and earth.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-3-03 - Published: 8-3-03
70. Anti Semitic World reviews
There are too many anti-semitic people in this world.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-03
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