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Author has written 21 stories for Romance, Family, War, General, Life, Politics, and Love. Sometimes it's just time for a change. My name is Jules. I'm seventeen years old. I've never been in love, and like to think I have no delusions on the matter, either. I attend a residential high school for the arts. I'm currently working my ass off completing college applications and attempting to get a decent writing portfolio together. Any feedback you could give me on my writing, especially newer works, would be absolutely fantastic. :) Some favorites: White Oleander by Janet Fitch Sharon Olds Neutral Milk Hotel Got any recommendations for me? Bring them on. Let's see. "Goodnight Saigon" won Best Challenge Response down at the SKoW Awards, and Bekkia's "Tell me a Story" contest down at DeviantART. If you see Rachelle, tell her I'm looking for her and would like to continue "The Romancing of Tuesday Dennings." My solo-novel with Tuesday just didn't work. And...feel free to PM or email me for whatever reason. I'm chatty. :) | |||||||||||||
1. V reviewsMy take on Virginia Woolf's suicide. All italicized lines are from her actual suicide note, except for those posing as dialogue.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 943 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-21-09 - Published: 11-21-092. Mum reviewsThe grandmother is someone to be ashamed of. Autobiographical.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 803 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-19-09 - Published: 11-19-093. Emigrar reviewsThey disappear in the dry Rio Grande, where even bones evaporate.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-19-09 - Published: 11-19-094. Room reviewsAnd I have no more room. M for language and mature content.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-09 - Published: 11-9-095. Fixed Forms reviewsNo gentleman wants to hear eulogies detailing ev'ry hit through skin and skull.Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 310 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-096. Giantess reviewsMy body hates its size.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 11-5-097. Mia Cara FamigliaA dead man begs his family not to bury him, to let him burn, to let him go.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,458 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-29-09 - Published: 9-29-098. Doorway reviewsWhen we got married, I promised I would be happy for her if she left me for love. I promised, but I can’t be. But I’m letting her leave, and that has to be enough.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 965 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-7-09 - Published: 9-7-099. vertebrae reviewsshe listens to drag-stab choruses of ma-maComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-7-09 - Published: 9-7-0910. Spicate reviewsI fear that no one will ever be able to love me. My friend Parker said this was a poem of self-preservation - that I'm too scared to let anyone love. But I don't think that's it. I'm open enough. Everyone else just bares it ALL.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-19-09 - Published: 8-19-0911. Analgesic reviewsIt's exactly what you know.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-09 - Published: 8-13-0912. Marvel Method reviewsLike War in chains, a grape dangles above anticipating lips, ajar.Complete - Politics - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-10-09 - Published: 8-10-0913. Static reviewsThey pulled our names out of a hat, and when he broke down crying in the parking lot, I wondered if I was making a mistake.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,035 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-30-09 - Published: 7-30-0914. Shame Faced Fear reviewsThis is a confession of my own shame-faced contribution to the world's problems, and I hope that anyone who reads it will reflect on their own instances of fear not of a person, but of a people, which is a generalization a peaceful world cannot afford.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,093 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-25-09 - Published: 7-25-0915. bird bath reviewsand I am there." written for "The Romancing of Tuesday Dennings" in the joint account J. Wood and R. Ashman. I'm trying out Tuesday's style.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-27-09 - Published: 6-27-0916. Confessions at 2 AM on Mother's Day reviewsMature Content. It's not graphic, but it is about child molestation, so if this makes you uncomfortable please don't read it. A narrative essay describing something that happened to be when I was six years old.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,778 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-12-09 - Published: 5-12-0917. Goodnight Saigon » reviewsDear Jennifer. I write you letters in my head, sometimes. Things of this nature, in greater detail. Horrific things I could never relive on paper. Feelings that I’d never be able to tell you to your face. Just know that this is what you love. Lewis.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 19,500 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 3-27-09 - Published: 3-25-0918. Love Ya, Unc » reviewsLacy, quirky and fun-loving, has never had to confront life as anything more than a joke with a forever-long punchline. But when she starts getting feelings for her uncle, Scott, that she shouldn't . . . life doesn't seem so humorous anymore. Re-vamped!Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 67,999 - Reviews: 331 - Updated: 3-22-09 - Published: 3-28-0719. Check reviewsWho is your queen?" "She's as cold as marble and not nearly so soft."Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-3-08 - Published: 12-3-0820. Child With Child reviewsAfter Thayer's painting of the same name. A sonnet about a girl leading her brothers to what she hopes is safety after their father leaves, when she's just a child herself.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-3-08 - Published: 12-3-0821. Tire Swing reviewsONESHOT. Based on song "Tire Swing" by Kimya Dawson. Impulsive Gretel remembers previous boyfriends with her psychiatrist, Paul. Her past leads her to the right person through some very random events. M for language and themes. R&R!Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,469 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 5-29-08 - Published: 5-29-08