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since	: 07-10-04, id: 424088

Author has written 13 stories for War, Life, General, Love, Fantasy, Humor, and Romance.

Quick facts about myself:

Age: 19
Sex: F
School: College

This is my apology: I AM SOOOO SORRY!! TT_TT

I know excuses are useless, but I think I need to offer you guys an explanation for my disappearance. So here it is: College. Ahhhh, okay, so in 2005-06, I was applying to colleges, in summer 2006 I was freaking out over college and going on various trips, and that is why I didn't update. Oh, and in 2006-07, I was in college, so... I am soooo sorry for not updating in so long! Specifically for not giving you the ending to The Music of the Spheres. I honestly had hit a roadblock and didn't know what to do, but this year, after reading Harry Potter and seeing how Rowling resolved her themes, I got an idea to finish and fix the old, uber-happy/unrealistic ending I had originally typed. Therefore, below is the COMPLETE Music of the Spheres. I hope you enjoy, and feel free to kick me in the knees for taking so long.

Also, I have to thank my reviewers whose comments gave me the courage to go back and finish what I'd started:
Alankria
Accalia Aeryn
Anime Freakizoid
Phoebe Meryll
temblance

Thank you so much for your support, and once again, I apologize whole-heartedly for the wait. I hope you like it - if not, then all was for naught... Haha, no...then just let me know what's wrong with it. And once again, I'm sorry! TT_TT

Update: I took down Rendezvous at Eternity because I want to fix it (since I workshopped it in my Fiction Writing class) and maybe publish it someday... All the stuff I've been reading about first North American publishing rights is really getting to me - I don't want to be forced to publish anything as a reprint if it's only been posted (for free) on Fictionpress. Scary stuff; do magazines have policies on that? Well, anyway...thank you SO MUCH to my reviewers (few as you may be):
Alaneer
Alankria
Accalie Aeryn
BlueJayWalking
dry sherry
Dying Without Gackt
ice flyer

Muchas gracias and wish me luck, as I wish for you!

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1. The Music of the Spheres COMPLETE » reviews
Love and sacrifice, with the worlds hanging in the balance. Please R&R.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,479 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-5-07 - Published: 8-4-07

2. Laundry and Prayer reviews
Love and laundry. Inspired by a painting of Paris.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 696 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-07 - Published: 8-4-07

3. Firewater Spells reviews
A short piece about a mage in love. Please R&R. Rest and Relax...while you Read and Review.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 737 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-07 - Published: 8-4-07

4. The Music of the Spheres OLDER VERSION » reviews
Old copy of this story. Will be deleted after new version is fully loaded.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,896 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 7-25-05 - Published: 7-16-05

5. The Heart of War reviews
Only through pain do we verify life... Short story about a soldier. Please R&R! Happy Fourth of July.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,509 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-4-05 - Published: 7-4-05

6. The Arts of Fire » reviews
The fires of the soul are burning... Fantasy meets philosophy; the abolishment of good and evil.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,745 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 6-30-05 - Published: 5-31-05

7. Park Benches: A True Story reviews
What if park benches could talk? Let the hilarity ensue! (Somebody shoot me for writing that...)
Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 885 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-05

8. The Moon Was a Daydream » reviews
On HIATUS due to writer's block. Sword and sorcery, and sword-sorcery. Three friends bound by blood and the way of the sword.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 14,788 - Reviews: 43 - Updated: 11-25-04 - Published: 7-23-04

9. Will You Forget? reviews
After her divorce, a young woman wonders if her ex will forget and move on.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 390 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 7-15-04 - Published: 7-15-04

10. Alexander reviews
A poem about Alexander the Great and his thoughts leading up to his death.
War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 7-15-04 - Published: 7-15-04

11. Silent Death reviews
Short story. The narrator only has memories left for support, and those are fading fast.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-12-04 - Published: 7-12-04

12. What's Important? reviews
When it comes right down to it, what really matters? Which life would you choose?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 7-11-04 - Published: 7-11-04

13. Ruins reviews
Written after 9/11 with mixed feelings of anger, sorrow, and disgust. Not particularly political or patriotic.
War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 7-10-04 - Published: 7-10-04