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Author has written 48 stories for Humor, General, Fable, Love, Friendship, Religion, Life, Song, Spiritual, and School. I've been... not writing for a while, but I've got a few things I'd like some input on, so I'm going to try and be posting things more often. I'm also considering taking down some old things that are mainly worthless. I recently changed my pen name. I used to be Elven Jesus Freak.
"'Because it IS idiotic. Writing when there's nothing to say...'"-Brave New World, Aldous Huxley Check out my "Break Room Poetry" at http://www.fictionpress.com/~blaseroutine Jesus Loves You! Pax Vobiscum | |||||||||||
1. Ghost reviewsWhen you feel fifth wheel or transparent, or simply forgotten, and you're not going to take it anymoreComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-11-08 - Published: 2-11-082. East reviewsSunrise is often used as a metaphor for hope, as it is here. As I wrote this, I gave it a rough melody and rhythm in my mind, so if the rhythm of the words seems off here, it's because of that. Tell me what you think.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-8-07 - Published: 11-8-073. Let Go » reviewsPoetic prose with extended metaphor and allusion to music. The quotes from songs are not mine.Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Spiritual - Chapters: 4 - Words: 962 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 11-12-054. The Plea reviewsWhen no one hears you asking for help.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-9-07 - Published: 2-9-075. Math with King Arthur reviewsI had a terrible math professor this semester. I wrote this poem one day in class during lecture.Complete - School - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-066. Title PendingI didn't know what genre to make this, so I just put general. I'm thinking of changing the title. It's basically a song about realizing that you've moved on.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-4-06 - Published: 9-4-067. Love Song reviewsDifferent aspects of love. Constructive Criticism more than welcome!Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-28-06 - Published: 7-28-068. The Sea and the Wind reviewsPartly inspired by a line from Pirates of the Caribbean, and also my own mood swings. Please Read and Review. Constructive Criticism welcome!Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-28-06 - Published: 7-28-069. To No One in Particular reviewsI suppose it seems kind of shallow and physical, but it's just a poem. Comments and suggestions greatly appreciated.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-23-06 - Published: 6-23-0610. SelfEfficacyA sort of argument of whether or not to write a poem. I really don't think it's that good and would appreciate constructive criticism.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-23-06 - Published: 6-23-0611. The Spider reviewsA poem that I actually thought about before I wrote, incorporated devices and kind of like. Give me feedback please!Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-06 - Published: 6-3-0612. Incompletion reviewsWhy does the world have to be so cruel and cold?Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-18-05 - Published: 12-18-0513. Modern Mediaeval reviewsA poem with a prose introduction. It kinda came to me when I was just sitting, zoned out one day. Somewhat allegorical.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-12-05 - Published: 11-12-0514. Lullaby reviewsI like being asleep better than being awake. Difficult to summarize. Please Read and ReviewLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-8-05 - Published: 10-8-0515. Troubled Water reviewsA metaphor in poem. Or else a poem in metaphor. Please read and review.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-13-05 - Published: 9-13-0516. Mind's Bane reviewsIn the boring land known as my physics class, time seemed to be melting my brain.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-27-05 - Published: 8-27-0517. Sabbath Rain reviewsI fell into darkness and rediscoverd God in the water. Rated T because the concept at the begining might be a little heavy (if I managed to convey it half as strongly as I felt it) Rhythm might seem iffy because I had a melody in mind as I wrote it. CoSong - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-28-05 - Published: 7-28-0518. The Unwritten Poems reviewsMy brain writes fragments of poetry on its own, but very little of this do I actually write down and use. Much is wasted, so I wrote this about that. It's more interesting that this sounds.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-21-05 - Published: 7-21-0519. I'm Still Waiting For reviewsIt's been a while since I've heard from someone, and I'm waiting to hear back.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-13-05 - Published: 7-13-0520. Emotional Attachment reviewsI wish I could learn to be apathetic sometimes. Please Read and Review.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-0521. I Recall » reviewsA poem in nine parts, each focusing on a different view of the mess my heart is in right now. Please R&R, it looks long, but it goes quickly.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 636 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-20-05 - Published: 4-20-0522. Note to Self: Remember this feeling reviewsI just felt this when I was sitting in the library today. I haven't put anything up for a while, so here's this. It's not much.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-6-05 - Published: 4-6-0523. Hasten reviewsA short little thing I wrote the other night, half to let out my feelings, and half prove a point to my Latin teacher who said "No body ever says 'hasten" Please let me know what you think!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-9-04 - Published: 9-9-0424. And Yet, Because reviewsA friend of mine and I haven't been getting along well lately, and she made me really mad in church the other day. R&R please!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-26-04 - Published: 7-26-0425. Life From Decay reviewsI was at a point where I had to "reach up to touch rock-bottom" and had nothing left to lose when Jesus smacked some sense into me and healed me at the same timeLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-26-04 - Published: 6-26-0426. The Useless Requirement reviewsI had to write a short satire in my English class and I didn't think this was too bad, and I don't get much chance to do creative writing, so I'd like to hear what you think! Please Read and Review!Fable - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,377 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-0427. Sequel reviewsThis is sort of a follow up to "Greek," as it comes after it, but it makes sense alone and stands better by itself. Let me know what you think!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-23-04 - Published: 3-23-0428. Three of Hearts reviewsThis is pretty weird... I guess it's kinda funny, but it wasn't written that way lol. I'm not terribly attached to this poem, so any kind of review is welcome, (even flames, go figure lol) Read and review, please!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0429. Haunting Moonlight reviewsIt's in "love" but it's not entirely romantic love. Also, there is a part that may get a little confusing. Each "you" is a different person. Please read and review!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-7-04 - Published: 3-7-0430. Te Exspecto reviewsThis is in a Chat Room style format, but I did it on purpose, just for the effect. It struck me as interesting. The title is latin for "I am waiting for you" Please Reand and ReviewLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-24-04 - Published: 2-24-0431. Greek reviewsWhen you know you like someone so much, but you also know they don't like you back. It's called Greek because in this instance, the guy it's for/about studies Ancient Greek and that's the association I make. R/R please!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-15-04 - Published: 2-15-0432. Destitute Agony reviewsI felt rather alone in just about every way possible and knew only Jesus was there. This was the result, unconventional as it maybe. The title mostly fits (better than no title at all and way better than the "Mad Cow" I stuck down only put anything). PLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-27-03 - Published: 12-27-0333. invisible reviewsThis one is an unusual layout. Mostly normal verse type but with a little bit of paragraph type in it. I dunno, makes sense to me. Kinda depressing, like most of my stuff. Hope you like it. Please Review!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-0334. Wash reviewsI felt like I wasn't really doing anything wrong, I just wasn't doing anything particluarly good either. I felt grimy, like my soul needed a shower, I wanted to give it all to God. R&R please!Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-10-03 - Published: 12-10-0335. My Heart's Plea » reviewsI'm waiting, and that's what life is. Waiting, and enjoying, and waiting, and trying to keep going when you can't enjoy. The second "chapter" is just another poem, but is a sequel to this one. Neither is very long. Please Read and Review!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 394 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-6-03 - Published: 9-6-0336. Gordian Knot reviewsThe Gordian Knot was a knot that couldn't be untied, so Alexander the Great gave it a chop with his sword. I briefly mention the "day I'll die" at the end, but just so none of you worry, I hope that's a long way away. I'd never bring that upon myself.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-0337. Most Essential reviewsKnowing God is necessary and realizing how much more I want Him in my life.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-3-03 - Published: 8-3-0338. And I Cannot Even Cry reviewsAnd unresolved issue has stood in the middle of a friendship for at least a year and I seem to have used up all my tears. Please Read and Review! ThanksLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-6-03 - Published: 6-6-0339. Dolor Meus reviews"My Heartache" is the title; I just put it in Latin. Ever like someone and wonder if they ever think of you? Please read and reviewLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-4-03 - Published: 6-4-0340. Three Ways Torn reviewsTorn among three different people, PG for almost bad language (one word, and it's not really a swear word in this sense, so yeah) Please read and review!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-11-03 - Published: 5-11-0341. That Which Pains Me Most reviewsEr, total cliche, but one of my best friends and I really like the same guy. Angst because that's how it is, and there's a little bit of humour at the end. Please Read and review!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-2-03 - Published: 3-2-0342. Delightedly Drifting reviewsWow! I actually wrote a happy poem! Yay! Um, kind of about the thrill of seeing the one you like. Please Read and Review!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-1-03 - Published: 3-1-0343. Reactions Entangled reviewsI was talking to my friend and she asked to read my last poem, and then I said I would try to write a "cheerful poem." This isn't really cheerful. But not angst either. Read and Review, please!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-03 - Published: 2-28-0344. Dream Thief reviewsI wrote this on Valentine's Day... Um... Poetry is how I vent my frustrations, and in this poem I attempt to put into words how I felt like my dreams were being stolen by a close friend.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-22-03 - Published: 2-22-0345. Painful Dreams reviewsAnother poem from Me. Um, kinda weird, but more or less ture. Please Read and Review! -*Me*General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-26-02 - Published: 1-26-0246. Me&I's Fables reviewsVERY wierd. Hopefully you'll find it funny, but you don't have to flame or tell us we're mad, we already know. We wrote this strictly for amusement on long car rides to zoos. We'll add more chapters if we get good reviews.Fable - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-19-01 - Published: 10-19-0147. My Depression reviewsI wrote this in dealing with the death of my cousin Laura Beth, to whom this is dedicated. Please no flames, Read and ReviewGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 7-2-01 - Published: 7-2-0148. Me&I's Wise Words reviewsBasically what the title says, words of wisdom. Kinda stupid, but that is what makes it funny. R/RHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 5-19-01 - Published: 5-19-01
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