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Author has written 53 stories for Life, Haiku, Fantasy, Love, Religion, and General. ~Lidless Eye~ "A Dimension Unreal" published in The Colors of Life "Lament of Renaissance" published in Colours of the Heart Moderator of Sword's Edge Current Philosophy/Quote of the Moment: "It's a job that's never started that takes the longest to finish." ~J.R.R. Tolkien Updated 10/22/05 From Yesterday: Posted "Through the Stalker's Mind" as a separate poem from the Lidless Anthology. It's one of my favorite works, so hopefully I can get your thoughts on it. Sorry. I've had major writer's block. I have some things written, but it's not really that good. Once I get something good, I promise it'll be posted. Thanks for your patience.About my Writing and Poetry in General Nowadays, I can't really describe my writing style all that easily. I tend to freelance in poem structure, because I found four-line stanzas to be quite repetitive, and I wanted to turn a different direction from it. I also avoid rhyming whenever possible, because much of it can be easily forced. Being very descriptive about what you see in your mind or your life, and also mixing a lot of imagery and symbolism within it, can really make poetry as original as it can be. Normal poems I write usually take a few days to write, and are also written very late at night each day. This is the time of day where my mind really wraps up and conveys words much easier. I like to expand my genres of poetry, but the two most focused areas I write in are Fantasy and Angst. I love writing poems within a phantasmal landscape, because they have the potential to really come to life and make you wonder at the same time. However, I do write a lot of angst, too, which sometimes reflects on my inner struggle and in life in general. Lesser topics I write on are nature and supernatural concepts, among others. I look at poetry and see it as an art form, no matter how vague or simple it is. I know a lot of people who take poetry to be a sport, where poets are better than other poets, but in my opinion that mindset goes completely against the essence of poetry. When poets sit down and write what they feel in poetic form, it's poetry at any degree, where the only way it can be judged is on interpretation and how emotionally related you are to it. That's basically all I've got to say about that. NOTE LEGAL INFORMATION | |||||||||
1. PassengerOn a lonesome flight...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-28-05 - Published: 12-28-052. Into the Sea reviewsI watch you plunge...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-22-05 - Published: 10-22-053. Through the Stalker's Mind reviewsAt every corner, he sees you... (originally in "Lidless Anthology", but I think it's good enough to have its own slot... thoughts)General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-20-05 - Published: 10-20-054. Mental Note reviewsA message to a great portion of society...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-055. Through the Crystalline Window reviewsEpic poem about the horrors of divided religions... (PG for Controversial topics)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 611 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-13-04 - Published: 12-13-046. The Illuminated Trail reviewsI walk with a candle in my grasp...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-13-04 - Published: 12-13-047. EmptyMinded Author reviewsWhat better way to combat a writer's block by writing about it? That's what is written here, and it's quite good, too. Hah!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-11-04 - Published: 12-11-048. This Moment reviewsWe are within one another...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-29-04 - Published: 8-29-049. Shinobi reviewsLost in the mountains...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-12-04 - Published: 5-12-0410. Scent of You reviewsAll that is left from yesterday...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-18-04 - Published: 4-18-0411. The Docks at Sunrise reviewsI will be waiting...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-4-04 - Published: 4-4-0412. The Lone Angel reviewsI wish of her to awaken me...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-0413. The Oculus reviewsThe eyes are watching him...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 269 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-12-04 - Published: 2-12-0414. The Bloodshed Manuscript, Revised reviewsAn epic poem involving the psychological nature of oneself at its darkest... (PG-13 for Graphic content) - (2/4: Revised with new content and other little fixes)Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,221 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-4-04 - Published: 1-24-0415. Dream Schism reviewsA tanka of a common fantasy... (Written in 5-7-7-5-7 form. I really could care less if you oppose of this form of tanka. Heheheheh.)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-2-04 - Published: 2-2-0416. Chill reviewsYou plunge the world in ice...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-21-04 - Published: 1-21-0417. The Black Rose reviewsThe guardian of my phantasmal journey...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-9-04 - Published: 1-9-0418. Nefarious Dreams of a Haunted Mind reviewsWhen my mind indulges into the night... (This is something I've worked on for ages. Very experimental, like recent poems, but hopefully it works. Give me some thoughts in this, if you could.)Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-2-04 - Published: 1-2-0419. Circles and Triangles reviewsThe shapes that lay shattered and forgotten...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-23-03 - Published: 12-23-0320. StarCrossed Calamity reviewsTwo bound loves that could not be torn...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-12-03 - Published: 12-12-0321. Guilt Trip reviewsAsking for forgiveness...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-10-03 - Published: 12-10-0322. Sinking Ship reviewsSuccumbing to the bitter sea...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-0323. The Lidless Anthology » reviewsMy first anthology of poems, centered around a fantasy world... (UPDATED 11/10: Added one new poem, "Dear Angel".)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 1,929 - Reviews: 46 - Updated: 12-1-03 - Published: 8-19-0324. The Room Before Death reviewsA perception of a place before your demise...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-10-03 - Published: 11-10-0325. A Song Between Us reviewsSuddenly, I hear you sing...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-23-03 - Published: 10-23-0326. Forgotten reviewsAfter all I have done...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-26-03 - Published: 9-26-0327. Transition of Time reviewsA poem on living your life.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-22-03 - Published: 9-22-0328. False Dawn reviewsHope has its treason...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-18-03 - Published: 9-18-0329. Serenity reviewsThe prelude to an endless dream...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 9-11-03 - Published: 9-11-0330. Lament of Renaissance reviewsA poem about an aspect of life... (Rated PG for some of the content) (8/24: Changed the name of the poem. Just sounds better.)Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-15-03 - Published: 8-15-0331. Eye to Eye reviewsWe once detested our views, but now we collaborate against a common hate...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-0332. Play the Game reviewsTaking advantage of a game you once loved to play...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0333. Wilderness reviewsIn this state of mind, silence and darkness flows for eternity.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0334. Barren Days reviewsI've wasted my life on uncontrollable passions... (Speaks of the many who don't take life seriously)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-31-03 - Published: 7-31-0335. A Dimension Unreal reviewsTravel with bravery, to the gates of heaven... (In memory of my aunt, who passed away from cancer just hours ago...)Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-29-03 - Published: 7-29-0336. Blindfolded reviewsUntie the blindfold to see...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-27-03 - Published: 7-27-0337. Welcome to my World reviewsThis is the world through the mind's eyes...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-24-03 - Published: 7-24-0338. Shades of Life » reviewsA Haiku Collection of all the different shades of life in relation to your soul. (7/24: One new haiku added)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 11 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 7-24-03 - Published: 6-24-0339. Our Nirvana reviewsLet's break away from the world, and live in our own realm...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-20-03 - Published: 7-20-0340. Battle of the Grand Dragons » reviewsA tale about two ancient Dragons and their epic battle, told through poetry... (7/19: The FINAL part, The Great Battle, has been posted)Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 750 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-18-03 - Published: 7-14-0341. The Last Gathering reviewsInspired by Lord of the Rings... an elf describing the last of its elven kind.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0342. Empty Room reviewsI look in the places that I once shared great memories...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-9-03 - Published: 7-9-0343. Animate reviewsAbout a world turned lifeless and dead, waiting for a breath of life...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-6-03 - Published: 7-6-0344. Tainted Memory reviewsYour ignorance taints my memory of you forever...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-5-03 - Published: 7-5-0345. Torch in the Tempest reviewsSeries of tankas on how I overcome life's struggles...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0346. The End of the Route reviewsThis one question will always remain...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-30-03 - Published: 6-30-0347. Chain Reaction reviewsThe sad chain reaction of emotions. One person see you a different way, and they tell others... the reaction triggers. They only do it because others do it, and they want to be with the majority. The dark side of a human's thoughts.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-25-03 - Published: 6-25-0348. Clipped Wings reviewsThey betrayed me, and left me alone, beaten down. But why should that stop me?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 6-15-03 - Published: 6-15-0349. Breakdown reviewsI thrive off of hope.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-15-03 - Published: 6-15-0350. Ten Pins reviewsHow life is like bowling.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-0351. Cracked Glass reviewsEveryone's felt this before. (Note: My actual first attempt at Haiku, haven't posted it until now... I'll write more of these in the future, it's fun to do)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-0352. The Disguise reviewsEveryone has a disguise.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-03
