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since: 05-14-09, id: 668543, Profile Updated: 11-29-09
country: United Kingdom
Author has written 4 stories for Action, Mystery, Fantasy, and Humor.

Hey thar

OK, I've dabbled in writing before when I was younger and I found some of my old writings (or what you could call writings) and decided that I'd improve them. What with me 'maturing' and all that.

Anyways, criticisms are highly appreciated as I'd like to improve my original stuff.

The Blood Stained Diary of a Teenage Hit man

Originally, I had this on -cringes- Quizilla. But took it down after I decided I'd use it for my English writing NAB...thing and found it lying in a drawer in my desk. So: Read. Re-write. Continue.

It's basically about a teenager who excelled in sports like boxing, karate and football and was noticed by an anonymous employer of hit men. I think I originally wanted to set it out like an actual diary...then went against it. Unfortunately I'm starting to think this story is the ~ever so original~ story of a normal average Joe who end up as a hit man/spy who does his job, ends up falling in love and tries to keep her and his family safe...but NO, not gonna happen. See? Sam is a 17 year old high school student, planning on continuing his line of work, travel the world and get into the dark and dirty cogs and inner (almost totally unknown) workings of society, mobs, godfather esque control freaks and women. He wants to explore the dark side that people are often forced into...Sam on the other hand, as explained before, is not being thrown in kicking screaming, but, rather, walking very calmly and hiding his excitement into the whole story.

Or maybe I'll just have him fall for a girl and die keeping her safe...hmmmm...Goddammit! I rambled. But it's fun to see if I can write in an American theme since I'm not from the US.

From The Desk of Supervisor McDowel

Basically a series of cases the city of Doomdorf, Scotland's CSI's have had to investigate. The first of which has to be a murder.
Please note, Doomdorf is not a real place

Untitled for now

Started this a while ago basically about a 22 year old student with a part time job who randomly falls ill or gets injured even though she's done nothing to cause injury. However, when strange happenings of her being in two different places at once, well, you can guess things only get more difficult before an explanation can be found. And things really just are not looking up for Molly when another stranger begins to make his presence known in what could only be the worst possible ways to do so.

Ramblings of a random blabber mouthed inexistent being

Title says it all.

You can find works of fan-fiction at my fan-fiction account; http://www.fanfiction.net/~littlemissbraindead

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1. The Blood Stained Diary of a Teenage Hit Man » reviews
Sam Phocas is a 17 year old high school student. And a junior hit man. Your 'usual' story of a hapless teen thrown into a typicaly 'adult' way of life, 'cept unlike 'most' teens who end up in this situation, Sam's willing and ready for anything.
Action - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,780 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-29-09 - Published: 5-25-09
2. The Elevator
Elevators are funny things, they can get you to a floor you're too tired to walk to, stop unexpectedly holding you up and can just be the best place to annoy/prank people. Hannah's having a little bother in the elevator of her apartment complex. Have fun.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 840 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-14-09 - Published: 11-14-09
3. The Urqhart Family History
A fantasy/Action story of medieval proportions. Follow the adventures of Young Master Urqhart, Amelia and Finlay on their quest to reform a shattered Kingdom. Story better than description.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,854 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-11-09 - Published: 11-11-09
4. From The Desk of Supervisor McDowel
A series of cases the city of Doomdorf, Scotland's CSI's have had to investigate. The first of which is a murder case and completely obligatory.
Mystery - Fiction Rated: T - English - Crime/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,338 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-1-09 - Published: 6-1-09
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