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Author has written 74 stories for General, Love, Life, Nature, Humor, Family, General, Work, Fantasy, War, Friendship, School, Haiku, Romance, Spiritual, Biography, and Fable. I adore ego strokes. So, if you can, review all day and night. That would be most fabulous. Even if it is criticism. I'm a big girl. I can take it. The majority of the stuff on here is pretty old. I have a couple new poems up and some mini stories. You can find more of my random writings on my blog, here and also here with some other random tidbits. "Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood." ~ T.S. Eliot "Poems reveal secrets when they are analyzed. The poet's pleasure in finding ingenious ways to enclose her secrets should be matched by the reader's pleasure in unlocking and revealing secrets." ~ Diane Wakoski | |||||||||
1. Venus Fly Trap reviewsLife is about control. Who has it? Who doesn't? How to get it. The Venus Fly Trap controls all.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-09 - Published: 8-12-092. A Literary Love Affair » reviewsHer: "What's your biggest fear?" Him: "Falling in love with you."Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 2,578 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-25-09 - Published: 7-25-093. Fleeting SummerFrom the image here: /photos/emmanooney/3493152284/ If this/other images don't work peep my xanga to see them.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-4-09 - Published: 6-4-094. Legends are made from Vulnerable MenJust something I wrote from using this picture: /single.php?id 157735Complete - Fable - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-21-09 - Published: 5-21-095. Adult Assembly RequiredFrom this prompt: Write a blog from your perspective 10 years in the future.Complete - Biography - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 565 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-21-09 - Published: 5-21-096. Their Something WorseI wrote this when I was feeling like crapola about my blog that nobody reads/comments/likes. Ha.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-17-09 - Published: 5-17-097. Infidelity reviewsI kind of forget how/why I thought about this. And I admit that it is a little fucked up. I have some not so repressed jealousy issues. Reviews. Please.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-17-09 - Published: 5-17-098. The Devil Won reviewsA freewrite based on this image: /photos/rene1956/3491553229/sizes/l/ For other writing challenges, go here: http://kween-of-the-queens./Complete - Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-4-09 - Published: 5-4-099. SuraciBased off of this picture: /images/Mike Mitchell hummingbird 500.jpg I made a mistake in the title. It's Icarus backwards, but the character I'm talking about is actually Prometheus. Oops.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 4-24-0910. Dying With A Dying FallI wrote that from this prompt: A drunk man sits next to you in a bar, thinks you're his buddy, and starts confessing "the truth." Share about what "the truth" is.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 943 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-21-09 - Published: 4-21-0911. SunsetKind of like the end part of "Dusk" sort of.. Maybe..PerhapsComplete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-17-09 - Published: 4-17-0912. The KissMhmm osculate!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-16-09 - Published: 4-16-0913. Something of A LieAll my poems are about love and whatnot. Kind of hilarious to me. I think this is more prose-like than poetry, but *shrugs*Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-14-09 - Published: 4-14-0914. The ArrowI had a long year full of feeling like my emotions were taking precedence over my logic. What can I say? Shit happens and sometimes you just gotta ride things out. I got the idea from a Russian fairy tale I readComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-14-09 - Published: 4-14-0915. Selfishlessness reviewsI think this scenario happens all too often.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-12-09 - Published: 4-12-0916. The One Click GoodbyeThe narrator is maleComplete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 534 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-11-09 - Published: 4-11-0917. Drift reviewsnot all that poem-yLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-09 - Published: 4-9-0918. Ripplesit's about sex, yoComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-8-09 - Published: 4-8-0919. DuskA truthfully fictionized scene from my pastComplete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-8-09 - Published: 4-8-0920. Remembering reviewsYou never forget your first love. Lord knows I won't.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-7-09 - Published: 4-7-0921. All I've Ever Wanted reviewsAll any woman ever wants, right? But what about what we need?Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-7-09 - Published: 4-7-0922. I don't like you reviewsself explanatory, me thinksComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-6-09 - Published: 4-6-0923. Seasons of Love Haiku reviewsThe haiku of the longer poemComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-6-09 - Published: 4-6-0924. Bittersweet reviewsParadoxical?Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-6-09 - Published: 4-6-0925. Haiku HaikuI just did a series of these one day after William sent me oneComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-6-09 - Published: 4-6-0926. Seasons Of Lovejust randomly came to me i guessComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-25-09 - Published: 1-25-0927. Insanity of LoveLife is messy. Carry around wet napsComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-7-07 - Published: 11-7-0728. Shattered TearsThe spawn of an IM convo. Just R&R.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-1-07 - Published: 6-1-0729. The Image of MortalityJust take a looksie.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-25-07 - Published: 5-25-0730. The EndPoems about love from a girl whose knowledge is purely media based. Go figure...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-3-07 - Published: 5-3-0731. My Concern is Not My Earthen BedSo, I think the overall theme is good, but having to fit it into the form of a villanelle messed it up. Please tell me what you think, anyway. Thanks.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0732. Mock TrialA little Italian Sonnet concerning my life aka Mock TrialComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0733. Mi AbueloAn elegy about my grandfather. It is a little short, but I needed it for class.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0734. The Tresses of Philip: An Ode of SortsSo, here is another one of PJ. Yes, I know that's 3. LOL. Just easy to write about him for class. Ya'll know what to do. Thanks in advance.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0735. Sorry: A Second Sonnet Sissy reviewsPJ decided to whine at the first one, since I poetry 'slammed' him. So this was my next attempt.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-07 - Published: 3-12-0736. PJ: A SonnetWe're teaching each other in AP Lit and Teacher PJ told me to write an English sonnet. Here are the results. lol.Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-12-07 - Published: 3-12-0737. A Stanza of FiveI wrote the last stanza during Literature with Mike. It might not make senseflow with the poem. But eh, I wrote the other part during Mock Trial practice. As always, reviews are encouraged.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-2-07 - Published: 2-2-0738. Different Turns, Same PathI seriously can't keep dealing with this. I want to be over the situation. It happened so long ago, and then one little thing sets everything back off. GrrrrrrFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-17-07 - Published: 1-17-0739. Complicated reviewsI know that after people read this, they aren't going to likeunderstand the ending. I know this already. The only person who I know actually understands it is Mags. But RR anyways. Please and Thank You.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-24-06 - Published: 11-24-0640. Memories of Being Unloved reviewsNot a SOMA poemLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-0641. Ice QueenSo, what? Looks like I'm still not over it. Go friggin figure...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-0642. Let's Make BelieveJust once, let's go back and pretend those things didn't happen.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-0643. Men at War reviewsAnd the women too. In our thoughts and prayers.War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-18-06 - Published: 11-18-0644. Real Women reviewsIt's not finished yet, so..I can't really give a summary..General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-18-06 - Published: 11-18-0645. Damsel in DistressI can handle my own. So, let me do what I do.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-18-06 - Published: 11-18-0646. Instead be WearyIntegration of a bunch of other works. Quotes from Elaine Maxwell, and Teddy Roosevelt. Along with ideas from some poems by William Henley and Claude McKay. All of these put together with my spin on it.Work - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-18-06 - Published: 11-18-0647. The Well Was Dry reviewsI noticed that I have a couple about things like this, concerning him. This should be the last one, I'm letting go.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-18-06 - Published: 11-18-0648. Inside My HeadThis is my first attempt at this kind of thing...It's...I really don't know...So, any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-23-06 - Published: 10-23-0649. Fallen KissesHonestly, I've got NO clue what is up with this one. If it reads garbled..Sorry. My thoughts aren't clear on it. I might try and fix it later...It's all over the place now...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-0650. VibranceI've been toying with this for a long time. And I'm still not finished. Eventually I'll get there..Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-20-06 - Published: 10-20-0651. The Answers have No QuestionsAnother oldie but goodie. Working on some new stuff. Made this maybe a year ago..Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 10-19-0652. Alter EgoI can't be exactly who you want me to be. Things just don't work like that...Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 10-19-0653. SorryTo David Moye. Just another occassion of me effing stuff up.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-12-06 - Published: 10-12-0654. This Pain reviewsAn oldie but goodie. Ha. I'm kidding. Just read it already...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-11-06 - Published: 10-11-0655. Failure is NOT an Option reviewsHow I feel about Mock Trial. How I think JJ feels about basketball. How I feel about some things in general...I reckon..General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-10-06 - Published: 10-10-0656. Mortal TasksHere it is. Nothing much to say on it. I've got a headache at the moment...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 10-9-0657. My Happiness reviewsSo...it's not in order. What can you do?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-8-06 - Published: 10-8-0658. Breathless reviewsI haven't put a poem up here in a couple of days. Another old one. Probably just go in order...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0659. NevermoreA response to one of my reviews. It may sound bitchy, but its not. I'm just arguing for the pure sake of arguing. So yeah, what you think about this one! LOL!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-4-06 - Published: 10-4-0660. What Lies Beneath reviewsFor all them fake-ass people out there. And on a random side note: I'm grumpy and it sucks!General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0661. Ready4LoveIt seems what we have here is a failure to communicate. 17 years is too long. What the deal? Can somebody help a sista out?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-1-06 - Published: 10-1-0662. WritingTherapyJust something I do. Not my perfect vision. But I can't remember everything I think when I'm showering.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-1-06 - Published: 10-1-0663. That Time of the Year reviewsSometimes it would be better if hindsight were foresight. It would make my life MUCH easier.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0664. In The Dark reviewsKeeping with current morose theme. Hooray! Utlizing those AP tone words. So..yeah..and here we go...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-27-06 - Published: 9-27-0665. The Darkness reviewsToo appropriate. In a sick way, I suppose. Even though I wrote it months ago. Hmmm...and I'm reading Heart of Darkness. So I reckon I can see some similarities...anywho...times change, and so do people..General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-26-06 - Published: 9-26-0666. But You"Whether I fail or succeed is no man's doing but my own. I am the force." Elaine MaxwellLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-25-06 - Published: 9-25-0667. LiesDeceptionLoveBrand Spank You NEW! Just wrote it. Don't enjoy. And yes, I'm talking to you!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-24-06 - Published: 9-24-0668. IntertwinedOne of my earlier ones...its aight. Nothing special...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-23-06 - Published: 9-23-0669. Him & HisBored. And I was talking about him today...so...psheash..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-22-06 - Published: 9-22-0670. The RushI'm not gonna give away the secret...Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-22-06 - Published: 9-22-0671. Winter reviewsMy second favorite season. Chelsie and I were talking about it this morning.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-06 - Published: 9-20-0672. A Life FulfilledErrmm...All of my good days, outweigh all of my bad days. I won't complain. I've done more and lived more than the average person. If I died tomorrow. I know that I would have still lived a life...fulfilled!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0673. Heart WedgieLast poem I've written. Not my favorite by any means. Can't even remember who I was thinking about...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0674. Free to Feel reviewsBeing me. At the end of the day. That is all I want.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-06 - Published: 9-18-06